FF - No Reservations! Completed! - Page 17

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Posted: 12 years ago
This was super awesome👏
must say this one is my fav😳
monu is never gonna change asking nanhi "do you like doing it?" and then imitating the little princess super cute😳
d little princess is so cute and adorable already captivated monu by her innocence😳
waiting for next part😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank you, Pravesh 🤗! Mohan and Nanhi never fails to impress us, right! 😳

Kirthi 🤗!!!! Thank you dear! *Poo bowing humbly to accept your compliments* 😃 Don't worry I am not calling for any external disaters here! Yeah, Megha is in serious trouble now! 😳 Mohan toh Mohan hai! 😉

Thanks Pranay, Ashutosh(@Meghan27)! 🤗

Hi Priyu! Thanks for reading my FF and I am happy that you are liking it 😃! Hope you enjoy the rest of its journey! 😊

Hiya Sakhi! 🤗🤗!!! Your detailed and explanatory comment makes me smile big and feel happy for all my efforts 😃! Yeah, very few men realize that they need not be too manly to show that they are male 😊! Yes, things are easy for them but they have their own reservations to consider 😉! Thanks for your patience!

Thanks Jia 🤗!

Shourie 🤗!!! I know how Mohan can transfer his feelings into you! Beware of Prince Charming, girl! Yes, experiences make the individual person to grow their character, in their own way! I know, babies are too cute to get us addicted to them! And thanks a lot for all your kind words! They make me really very happy!

Hiya Purvi 🤗! Hope Cookie becomes a good teacher and her Nanny a good student as well! 😉 And all the best to your exams! Come back and enjoy the read! 😃

Thank you Maanvir 🤗! Happy that you don't feel things are dragging! And hope you are not complaining about the super speed as well 😉! I am glad to see you enjoying your visuals! That is a big compliment for me and my writing 😃! Don't worry I have something coming stalling the flow and taking a deviation but in good way!

Thanks a lot Mohini 🤗! Happy to see you enjoying every character and their actions!

Hiya Pratiksha 🤗! Thanks for liking the pet name 'Cookie'!

Happy to make your mornings lovely, Jonaki! 🤗

Thank you Rida, Angeala, Yashi! 🤗

Hiya Champ 🤗! Not a problem! Hope you enjoy the reading whenever you can! And a big tight hug 🤗for logging into the forum for the sake of my FF! That means a lot to me! 😃

Hila Meg!!! Monu becomes the cutest kid when he is with another lovable kid!!! 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter Ten

Mohan couldn't have asked for a better day. Megha was busy working at the terrace. He settled down with his laptop, next to Nanhi's cradle. He traced back to the sweet memory of Megha's morning face inviting him in. With great difficulty he had controlled his urge to move a strand of hair that was hiding her face. He didn't want to think what was in store for his future, but he was content with whatever was happening in the present

"Wouldn't we make a great team, Cookie?" He asked a sleeping Nanhi

After an hour or two, when Megha returned from the terrace initiating her painting work, she found Mohan sleeping near the cradle.

He looks so sweet and lovable! She stood at the doorway adoring him for a while before walking into the kitchen

She thought of preparing breakfast, instead of serving bread, rolls and cornflakes, her usual. She hoped her cooking to turn out well. If not at least it would chase him away. She giggled.

When she was almost done with the cooking, she heard footsteps.

"What is that smell?" Mohan asked

"Is it good or bad?"

"I think it is good!"

"Pray that it tastes as good as it smells. I got to warn you that I am not great at the kitchen but have tried my best today"

"I am impressed!"

"Hope you are, after eating too" Both laughed

Mohan explored his options on the table. One look at the rotis said, they were hard enough to hit someone. The dhal looked decent enough to eat. The coffee smelled strong.

How bad could it be! He thought and took a seat in front of Megha

Tearing a piece of roti, only broke it into pieces and it sounded like crispy biscuits. Mohan managed to put a piece of it, dipped in dhal, into his mouth. He gulped it with a sip of strong coffee. He didn't know which one tasted worse - the bitter coffee or the salty dhal or the crispy roti! He didn't control his facial expression to show what he felt.

Megha didn't pretend liking the food either. They burst into laughter sharing the feast of disaster.

"I warned you" Megha said amidst her laughter

"I should have listened"

"Trial day done. Over to continental breakfast" Megha announced

"Have you always been this bad?" He asked in between his laughter

"I think today I turned out to be extra special!" She responded without being offended

Mohan regarded her laughing at her own foibles, with warm approval. She appeared to be joking over her own troubles, but also gathering strength from them.

And he was glad that she was getting to be comfortable around him. Though he doubted how much of her relief had to do with the notion of his presence only for few months.

"Hello Megha" Tanya interrupted their conversation barging in

"Hi Mohan! Good Morning" Tanya looked at Mohan as if she had been magnetized

Mohan didn't like the interruption but managed to stay cool

"Morning!" He said and concentrated on his breakfast

He just forgot what he had on his plate and took a bite again to curve his mouth in distaste. Megha noticed it and chuckled

"What is that you are having?" Tanya went closer to Mohan

"Please have this" He offered the food to her instantly

"Did you make it?" She asked hopefully

"No, I did!" Megha volunteered

"Oh my God! Megha, are you planning to kill him?" Tanya sounded dramatic

"I have just started" Megha replied

The girls laughed out loud, leaving Mohan scared out of his wits. They heard the baby cry without giving a moment's hesitation Mohan rushed into the room. Megha was astounded at his alertness. The girls watched as Mohan walked out of the room, cradling the baby in his arms. Nanhi stopped crying and was giving attention to his petting words

"Are you available, Mr. Handsome?" Tanya's bluntness shocked both Mohan and Megha

"I got to ask my girl" He said quickly recovering from the shock

Tanya turned to query Megha, Megha gave Mohan a cold stare, but Mohan was looking at Nanhi

"What do you say, Cookie? Are we available?" He asked Nanhi who was smiling at him

Tanya went near Mohan to take her from him. He just swayed away from Tanya's hold as if not willing to trust her with the baby. Tanya sighed and walked away. Megha reached out to take Nanhi from Mohan

Megha pointed to her breakfast storage shelf and said "Help yourself"

He walked towards it and explored the containers.

"That's a good collection. Anyway kitchen is my favorite domain. I would love to cook breakfast for us. But I am expensive" He leaned over the table with folded arms

He wanted to crawl into her space slowly without making her feel weak and frail.

"Not if I could make a deal" She gave a crooked smile

"What's the bargain, this time?" He rested on the table folding his arms

"I will take an hour off of your time with your Cookie" She winked, glancing at Nanhi

"Ouch, that hurts!" He pretended to be hurt

"I figured which woman in this house has your attention" Megha smirked

"Are you disappointed?" Mohan probed

"Absolutely not. I am happy that you have a weak spot" She smiled

"Hmm... My boss is very smart. Got to be careful"

"You better be!"

They shared an understanding glance.

Good God, he is Prince Charming! How am I going to get rid of him?! She wondered.

God, she's amazing. Hope she lets me in her life! He wished.

Edited by Senpoo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Another awesome update Poo. 👍🏼👏
Loved the bits which they shared in kitchen👏.
Hmmm so Megha has fallen heads over heels for him 👏.

Edit: Me first for this update 😲 how did this happen😆
Edited by Pravesh.P - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
once again an amazing part poo 👍🏼
its really heartwarming to see mohan n megha getting comfortable wid each other to such an extent dat dey enjoy pulling each other's leg 😳
n mohan sleeping beside nanhi's cradle was so aww
cant wait to see dere realisation of d feelings dey have for each other 😳
cant wait till monday 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
👏👏👏Poo...🤗
aww..I thought Mirchi vl prepare Monu ki favt cheez bhindi ,rajma chawal😳😳😳
bt good u bought change in a menu ...continental ths time😉
good that new improved megha is not good cook😆😆😆 loved her crisp roti 😛like most of young girls vl b😉
mirchi ke lambe lambe zulfe...wish wish chune ki koshish😉
liked the choti choti girly baatein which u have kept b/w Tanya n Megha ...making any boy standing nxt go 😛😆😆😆 loved the naturality u kept thr 👏
loved at again convo b/w silent Cookie girl n handsome 😃
loved derena derena glance of MM... good to see Monu trying to b chef Monu 😳😳😳
abh prince charming toh bai charming hai u simply cnt ignore him
so nw wht is stored in cookies n Nanny's life n vl amazing Megha allow handsome chef b enter her life or has he already entered Knock Knock😉 derena derena...
Edited by raokrithika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice poo you have a flair for writing excellent stuff cheers
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks poo for the wishes... Its starting tomorrow... :)
Loved the update...

The breakfast table scene was awesome...: D

Loved the fact that she accepts her flaws herself and jokes on them too... Very less people are willing to do so...

Ab shuru hogi mohan aur megha ki DILCHASP story... ;)


And thanks for the pm... :)
Happy friday and have an awesome weekend... Enjoy... !!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb and threesome part poo...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome stuff...how do u manage to write so beautifully👏👏👏 ,visualizing each and every scene...as if its playing on TV.


loved each and every part of FF...
Tanya reminded me of Dimpy ...openly line maroing on Mohan😉...
the convo btw MM was superb...


Thanks for filling the NBT void by u r beautiful writing .

Eagerly waiting for Monday.



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