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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all Happy Durga puja and Happy Navratri to all...hope that the festive season is prosperous and happy for everyone 😊...

I am really sorry for my late reply...was very busy today...but finally managed to read the update...and i am chanting it again...you compel me to...that i am in love with the story...from Mohan-Cookie's super cute conversations to Megha's bargains...the kitchen talks 😳 ...i don't know which one i like more...even the inner thoughts stirring inside Mohan and Megha's mind about each other...and of course the breakfast...Crispy Roti...salty daal...and bitter coffee... 😉...but am sure Mohan the great cook will teach Megha the chef's special tips to be a great cook...after all he wishes she gets him in her life!...well hope the wish is answered! 😊...
It was a fabulous update as usual...before i forget...i loved the Tanya-Megha-Mohan-Cookie scene! And specially the Mohan-Cookie team!!
Well...Monday please come soon 😊...i have never waited so eagerly for Mondays 😆...
So waiting for chapter 11 now 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome..! Loving it..
The kitchen scene was simply stunning.. How bfully u ve portrayed the simplicity of these characters..!! Simple yet marvellously bful..!
And cookie.. Oh god.. Adorable..!!

PS- Monday, plz come soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing... brilliant... love it 👍🏼... cant i explain my self... how much i m exciting for next part... plzzz... kash 11 chap. on mon ki jagha ye likha hota .. 11chapter... or mai nxt padh sakti... plzzz ... its totally best 👏... love it...ye sat n sun kab jayenge...?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hiya Anu 🤗! No dear I haven't shared it anywhere else other than here! Do you think they heed to these things?!! 😆

Hi Shivangi 😃! That's good to know that the reviews you heard stood by your expectation and you liked the FF 😊! Thanks to those reviews and your reading!

Hiii @purplelolo! Glad that you enjoyed the longer parts and not cribbing about it 😛! Hoping to give a good monday start for the new week! 😃

Hiya Meg 🤗! Thanks for the hugs which means equally to me, as the adjectives 😃! I know its difficult to say between the kid and Mohan, who is cuter ! And R's butterknife for Megha's rotis! OMG 😆😲🤣!!! What an imagination! Good God, they broke into pieces without R's entry! 😆

Hiyyyaaa Shourie 🤗🤗!!!! Thanks for the wishes! Happy Dussehra Festival! Very sweet of you to have made time for the chapter amidst your busy day! And thanks for your love for the story 🤗! And a big FAT Thanks for awaiting Monday for the next chapter! 🤗

Hiya Champ 🤗! Thank you dear! Cookie is sweet and tasty! 😃

Hi @KKK143! Welcome to the FF 😃! Thanks for dropping by and reading it! And yes for loving it as well!!! Hope to do justice for your anticipation for Monday! 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
pooo🤗
monday kab aayega ????

please update sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome poo you are one of the best writers of the forum and you please continue giving your doses of your stunning beautiful os which i love to read . well i am also going os so please see it😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Blossom
loved the kitchen scene...mohan is too cute
waitin for next part eagerly

Cheers
Yashi

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hiya Purvi 🤗! Yeah Monday is here finally! BTW enjoy ur exams and come back refreshed! 😃

@KKKASANS: Thank you! Sure will read your OS and will comment there! Enjoy reading and writing! 😃

Thank you Yashi 🤗!!! Here comes the next part! 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter Eleven

As days passed by, the trio's routine was well set and the painting too shaped up well. Mohan made time along with his remote working, to do his bit of corrections to the darling' painting.

Megha got down from the terrace and found Mohan involved in the painting. Her lips curved in a satisfied smile, when she saw Nanhi asleep on his lap and he maneuvering his hands on the painting without disturbing the baby

"How is it coming?" She asked

Mohan turned to find Megha adorably pretty from her work and fresh morning air

"Beautiful!" He blurted out unconsciously

"Let me see" She peeped closer to the picture not noticing the brightness in his eyes

They talked about the colors and the highlights, which were faded in the dirt. She liked what he had done to the painting, trying to give a makeover. Her closeness disturbed him not letting him focus on what she was saying. Abruptly she stopped talking realizing their arms brushing each other and she sprang away from him. She wanted to keep her distractions minimum, wanting to keep her life in order with or without Mohan around.

"Have you been sitting like this for long?" She asked hastily

He swallowed hard trying to recover in his own time and didn't reply.

"I thought she would be missing me" Megha looked at her daughter with longing

"Not when her favorite Manny is watching to her needs" Finally Mohan found his words

"So, how do you manage with your job here and there?" She asked

"My job involves multitasking with gadgets. Life is real good!" He traced his finger along the line of baby, laptop, phone and the painting

She pursed her lips and he was gazing at her gesture.

"I don't even own a phone" She blinked at the items scattered around him

"I think we should fix that issue, at once" He said to which she quickly shook her head

"If I let you buy anything for me, then I am not what I want to be" Her response was so abrupt that Mohan found no words in response

Megha couldn't let go of her dignity. She was vulnerable given the circumstances of their meeting. She didn't want to believe that formed an eternal bond between them. She wanted to live her life in her own terms. She didn't want to acknowledge Mohan in her life, thus losing her value for her own. She was too proud to do that and didn't want to entitle her living dependent on a man.

"So, when are you leaving for the art exhibition?" Mohan asked trying to change the atmosphere

"I will be gone after feeding Nanhi" She told and then asked him doubtfully "Do you think you can manage her alone?"

"I and Cookie have plans for the day" He smiled at ease

Just then Nanhi made her call

"Ok! Duty calls" He rushed into the room to heed to Nanhi

"I wonder who the mummy is!" Megha said playfully

"If I can feed her, I don't think she needs you" Mohan said with pride and asked Nanhi "Do you miss Mummy, Cookie?"

Nanhi cooed smiling at him.

"Look, that's her no" He said to Megha

"Oh is it? Let me try"

While Mohan transferred Nanhi to Megha, their hands brushed. He didn't remove his hands wanting to feel her skin. They made a perfect picture holding the baby together in the center. She felt a stir inside her and quickly whisked away. Her hair fell on her face in the process blocking her view and with both her hands busy she didn't bother to clear it. Mohan closed down the space between them, brought his fingers to move the hair away from her face. He put them back behind her ears lingering there for a while. They gazed into their eyes.

"Ooo... Ooo..." Nanhi made her favorite gurgling sound

"You are right! It is a no" Megha stressed on the no and took the baby inside

I know that was a Yes', which you want it to be a No'! He thought but said nothing.

He wasn't annoyed by Megha's lack of trust. In fact he even admired her caution. She had once been interested in marriage, husband-wife relationship and everything about it. But now it was obvious that she'd run in the opposite direction if she sensed him having anything on his mind.

"Don't worry. Just enjoy your day out" He said confidently to Megha before she left for the exhibition

An hour later, Mohan was alone at home, with Nanhi sleeping peacefully in her cradle. He was talking on the phone with his manager, in a low voice not wanting to disturb the baby. Suddenly he heard a sharp cry from Nanhi's room. He was startled and dropped the phone running into her room to carry her.

He tried everything but Nanhi didn't stop crying. He didn't think she was hungry. He talked, played and did whatever he could to cajole her but in vain. Nanhi didn't respond to any of them. He was worried and alarmed as the baby's wail increased. He checked the baby for any hurt or wounds on her body.

"Are you scared, Cookie?" His eyes were wet seeing the baby turning red

He swaddled her in a blanket and carried her close to his chest making her feel secure. It worked. The baby's sob reduced a little and she started giving attention to him. He started swaying in the air as if dancing to which Nanhi responded with a smile.

"Was that just a trick?" A small smile formed around his lips bringing a sigh of relief

"You scared me! Don't do that ever again." He mocked an angry face and she smiled bigger

"So you wanted a dance with me?" And he started moving fast with his dance movements

Nanhi was giggling by then and Mohan was laughing out loud along with her. He swirled around making her giggle more and bumped into Megha who entered the home just in time. He lost his balance but Megha caught him from falling down. He steadied back into position and shrugged his shoulders in apology.

"So, was this your big plan? " Megha enquired

"Partly yes. Want to join us?" Mohan asked her "Do we have room for one more, Cookie?" He asked a giggling Nanhi who responded with a "goo-goo"

"That looks like a no'" Mohan said playfully and continued his dance, ignoring an annoyed Megha
Edited by Senpoo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
🤗Poo...👏👏 so Manny nanny fully charged 😃
Megha is morning ka fresh "beautiful" maal for Monuwa😉
Megha trying to maintain distance form herself n Monu😳😳😳 wish wish she could😉
eternal bond toh abh ban chukka hai...
like the way always Mohan tires to change the atmosphere...shana hai😉 n make megha comfortable 😃
Mohan 's pride on cookie yashoda maa, papu dono ban chukka hai 😃
love thr derena ...derena moments... specially Mohan ka gaze at Megha ka zulfe always wanna play with it😳😳 thr ankhiyon ke jharokhon se...moments😳😳
Mohan Cookie moments cutest of all...Monu ka dance for Nanhi cookie..awwish cute
fear of fresh papa cng his baby crying , trying to handle thngs ..his un spoken love for baby ,special bond 😳😳😳 very well written Poo loved it👏👏👏 loved the emotions of Mohan here.
Mohan is world best he knows all the kind of tricks to make any one go weak at the knees...😉😉
even pride Megha knw that charmer ka charm is working on both Maa,beti... though she tries to act as bng annoyed😉
Edited by raokrithika - 12 years ago

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