I failed in love mama and papa epilogue pg 28

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Nusrat Jahan Mukti

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Final Part
Great update again Kate dear.Just loved the boding of Ansh and Ayu.Both of them are true brothers and real Ansh of Yash and Arti...😳😳😳😳
Ayu is so intelligent and cute also.He cant see his Ansh bro sad knows very well how to make him happy as Arti knows it very well how to make Yash smile...😃😃😃
Ansh is really totally influenced by his papa Yash and I really love his lovely nature.He is a perfect Sindhia...😳😳😳
The story is going to end Kate but it will alz be in my heart as one of my fav story... I just loved this story of yours dear.Thanks a lot for giving this wonderful story dear.Thank you so much🤗

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caller123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: nusratjahan505
Kate I am very sorry dear for being so late in giving you reply but u know I was not in a state of doing anything... but now I am back to torture you all again dear.So get ready to bear me and my long speech...😆😆😆
Part 7
The most amazing part of this update was the flawless dialogue delivery of yours.The way Arya were talking to each other was something that is very touchy and usual also.I have seen this type of sequence in my personal life when my sisters got married and left us.I have seen this pain and pleasure in my parents eyes.You know Kate what is the most important achievement of a writer...it is when he relates with reality...and you have dont this in this part so hats off you👏
So Yashu is demanding tax from Arti... ha ha ha he will never change... I just loved this cute romance between Arya... It just made me so happy when I read your update dear and I mean it...from Dil Se...😳😳😳

It's ok dear. I know the reason behind your late. I'm not angry with you but if you say sorry again I'll surely be angry with you.😡

I'm ready for your long comments in fact I missed them in last few days.

Thank you so much Mukthi for this lovely comment. Yes when a daughter leaves a house they have happiness filled with sadness. I just tried to live in that thing and wrote this. First I was afraid whether I did justice here. But after reading comments I was Ok.I wanted to do justice to this scene as where Aarya are standing today every parent stand one day. I want to show that gratitude to every parent.

Yashu is always after collecting taxes. Poor Aarthi has to pay Taxes everyday.😆😆

Thank you so much mukthi When I read that you felt happy reading this update an immense happiness overflowed in my heart. Thank you so much.🤗❤️

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caller123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: nusratjahan505
Final Part
Great update again Kate dear.Just loved the boding of Ansh and Ayu.Both of them are true brothers and real Ansh of Yash and Arti...😳
Ayu is so intelligent and cute also.He cant see his Ansh bro sad knows very well how to make him happy as Arti knows it very well how to make Yash smile...😃😃😃
Ansh is really totally influenced by his papa Yash and I really love his lovely nature.He is a perfect Sindhia...😳😳😳
The story is going to end Kate but it will alz be in my heart as one of my fav story... I just loved this story of yours dear.Thanks a lot for giving this wonderful story dear.Thank you so much🤗

Thanks Mukthi. hmm ayu and ansh their bond is so strong.😊

Ayu is intelligent and cute and doesn't like to see Ansh sad just like Aarthi doesn't like to see YAsh sad.😳

Ansh is really influenced by his papa as for him his papa is his whole world, his super man.

I agree with you he's truly a Scindia.😳

Even I felt so sad😭😭 when I was writing the last part Mukthi because this was so close to my heart but every story has to end some day. I told that to my heart.

Thank you so much for being with me from the beginning of this story dear and bearing with me.

You are most welcome my friend.😳😳

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Nusrat Jahan Mukti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#224

The perfect ending of a perfect Story...👏👏👏👏👏👏
Kate I must say that as a new writer you have done a great job with this story.If you ask me to say the truth then it is the best story among all the writings of yours.👏👏👏👏
From the very beginning till the end I just loved this story so so so so much.I wanna share a secret with you.In y free time I read lots of FF (Even in other forums) and I can say it without any doubt that is is one of the fantastic of a story that I have read...😳😳😳
So Hats off to you dear...👏👏👏👏👏

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caller123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: nusratjahan505
The perfect ending of a perfect Story...👏
Kate I must say that as a new writer you have done a great job with this story.If you ask me to say the truth then it is the best story among all the writings of yours.👏
From the very beginning till the end I just loved this story so so so so much.I wanna share a secret with you.In y free time I read lots of FF (Even in other forums) and I can say it without any doubt that is is one of the fantastic of a story that I have read...😳😳😳
So Hats off to you dear...👏

Thank you so much Mukthi!

You made my day. 😳

No words to tell you how happy I am. Thank you my friend. I'm really honored.😳😳

This was the story I loved so much in all my writing Mukthi.