kisi ki muskurahton pe ho nisaar updated part a and b

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Plz scroll below for part B i couldnt complete it in one go...ctd..after one comment
Part A


So guys...its monday and my breath day...I never expected what I saw coming...bhammm...my baddie oops angry youngman smiling...no no no laughing like a cute lil boy...whatt a sight..phew...lovely and beautifully directed epi..
Mann..hes so angry..ok u wanna go go away from me...fine I blasted the window...dont worry I will always find a way out for u..won't let u confine...says my atta boy...signs of future...well its quite symbolic ...hes atlast broken his confinement in a big way giving way to light, fresh aura. ? And new way...hes opened his locks unknowingly. ?.and its not just a gaping hole...but a fully blwn way...to my hearts content...am happy he did it..and dawn entered...astha...what a mettle she made up off...she's so pure..so childlike and so soft hearted...not once she complained...omg...yes she was shocked ..she tht he was crazy...but window shattered and paved way for her understanding towards her crazy client. ?.she couldnt beleive coz sge had seen something shift in him...she had seen a longingness in his eyes...and abruptly..the guy roars..and whatt...she analyses and notices what we noticed...yes it indeed wasn't for me...but ..then y so much anger...she could see him lost while he was hurting her...and rasta dikha de too...showed the way...the broken sheild let him see the man...hinted the reason..which I think sofetened her..she beeing a soft soul could not hold her anger for long..the broken sheild her calm...the way she saw him jogging uo with ..sge new he was controlling..calming himself...she now just have to do is..remove the other remaing peices from the broken window to make it completely calm and loving...but this is gonna hurt her ...and she's gonna take it in her stride with a new hope...I loved this girl...the zest of life...her purity...whose not gonna get attracted to suvh an angel...she's soothing balm to the devil...coz devil too wants in somecorner someone to heal that pain...shlok is a man of actions...hes sorry...uncomfortable but yet for first time I saw his non scowling face...like hes changing. ?.hes brokenvsome shackle...hes released his much needed anger...I think baddies love to throw and smash bottles..he's smashing his hurt...and the new ray...astha has entered in him through the shattered peices of glass...strange she doesn't expect sorry from him... 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Shlok smile... Awesome 👍🏼
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Part B

Now the wada pav scene...well a new begining in their life...she was so like a kid...expressive and hes still surprised that what is this girl...how can she act normal...she's still smiling like z fresh flower...his soul calms..relaxes in ages...he finds he is intoxicated in her freshness...her innocence...he understands she's trying to make it all feel well..and he prides at her...yes he prides at her as a person..she's spread her light on him and made him smile...laugh just as she does...she's colouring him with her colours...suddenly realises and gets back to reality which he doesn't want..lyes he wanted to keep on smiling...hes bending...breaking barriers..instead of scowlijg he says we will have breakfast somewhere else...lol first for astha. ? She's stunnec by his smile. ?.it makes her heart go happy coz she's a giver..and she liked him smiling coz niw she knows he has skeletons in h7s closet..and her kind soul loves this tortured soul breaking into a smile. ?.then that puja scene...he didnt contradi t the man that ladiex no this...so astha becomes his guiding light...yupp anyone would think them hubby and wife and it struck shlok that he liked it...he liked her with him...his soul wants to hold onto her..its not love yet but a begining..he he likes ajd realises that he needs someone and ..he just cant keep running..poor astha was shocked. ?.see her mouth a big o..but she's against surprised ki akdu isnt scowling...rather is staring intently. ?.the shoes scene indicate...that astha has found a way to communicate to him...and in future she will the one to show him other perspective in his own lang...well danger mr niranjan...soon ur mask gonna go and astha will bring the real anjali out...am sure...she will change shloks views...love that shoes scene..hiw she made him remove them..finally the walking scene...their path is gonna se very tough times but they will walk together equally side by side...good or bad and she would remove all his maskscand hurt and make him a new man...when all his hurt and anger bleeds away...and a new skin comes up...lol...I forgot the stair scene...this time shlok bent and respectfully gave her her bag...between was holding her hand necessary...I think yes...hes givibg his reins in her hands and telling her to hold tight securely in place...aha so many symbolisms..precap..well its not love..neither possesiveness...its his soul whos seeking astha coz the soul knows its onky astha he can hold onto before he sinks completely and it scared him that he would lose that one chance to live again...so as I said...this time he himself hss given the reigns of his life just liie that purse in her hands firmly...and he won't let her go now...lovely epi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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such a beautiful writeup ana...loved reading
episode was indeed very beautiful n brought smile on my face as well
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Guys updated fully. ? Plz check
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I think they forgot what happened on Friday🤣.. I loved the first part...especially where he was drinking and thinking of her. But the second part? I think she needed to show some restraint. She wanted to break the ice but still? She was treated really badly the previous day. They were talking to eachother as if that night never happened
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful analysis dear!!!
Loved the episode!!!
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Originally posted by: Heavens_Kiss

I think they forgot what happened on Friday🤣.. I loved the first part...especially where he was drinking and thinking of her. But the second part? I think she needed to show some restraint. She wanted to break the ice but still? She was treated really badly the previous day. They were talking to eachother as if that night never happened

exactly..ani...but I think she has no ego..she prides in her innocence..and her this behaviour will make the raging bull utter the word sorry...it will make realise that he was so bad with her and she's still standing for her...vaise bhi abhi woh uspe gir chillayega issliye dono ki sorry ek saath bolega..niranjan ka beta hai...ek baar se doni kaam.. 😆 this makes astha different for me and for him too...this will differentiate astha from swathi for him..sorry surely gonna come in shlok style 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: LuvStrk-001

Beautiful analysis dear!!!

Loved the episode!!!

thanx. ? I had a smile pasted on me...this was refreshing..well surely I was expecting a slap..but..then astha wouldnt be different...will she...lol...my romantic heart was just ...my dil gies boom boom boom
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Originally posted by: sparklingeyes


such a beautiful writeup ana...loved reading

episode was indeed very beautiful n brought smile on my face as well

thanx Sonia...oh how I wanted them to fight as to who would go outta window 😆

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