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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thnx alot guys!! im glad u liked my concept!!
since its nw more den 40 likes, im gonna cont dis story..n so here presenting d frst chapter! 😃

Chapter 1 - Meet Taani Shikhawat

Voice: just 30 seconds on d clock..evry1 is tensed..d ball is nw wid d opponent n she is aiming to shoot..bt yeah! Our star player blockd it n stole d ball! Now she is driblng n running towards d basket..dres nt much time on the clock..all her team members hve been blocked securely..nw its upto her to make d winning score! D crowd is tensed n only 10 seconds on d clock..she has no option left bt to throw d ball n score to win..d clock is ticking..8..7..6..5..4..3..2

*d starplayer throws d ball n d whistle ws blown..it ws as if evrythng had been slowed down..d ball ws flying high up n her heartbeat increased evry moment..it ws their only chance to win dis championship..she had only one chance n she cnt screw dis up..her team n school depended on her...her eyes moved wid d ball nw..it ws only inches away from d basket n den..*

Taani(shouting n rubbing her back) - OUCH! OOOWWW!!! SHIT!!

Swayam(comes running inside her room) - kya hua choti? Tum ese niche kyu bethe hue ho?evrythng ok?😲

Taani(wid an irritated look) - bhai dekho na! 😡I had d ball u knw..i ws running n I had to make d winning basket in 10 seconds!evry1 ws cheering for me.. Woh ball jaa hi rahi thi bt b4 it entrd d basket,I feel from my bed n I woke up! Uugghh!! I ws so close!!😡

Swayam (relieved) - haye bhagwan..r u serious choti?😕 Chill it ws just a dream..bt u scared me pagal!

Taani(pulling his cheeks) - aawww..aap darr gayye the?😆 Hw cute bhai!

Swayam - haan I knw im very cute..ab aggar tera yeh sab nautanki ho gaya toh go n get ready warna madamji aap firse aaj late ho jaengge school ke liye..so hurry up!

Taani - oh shit!😲 Its allrdy 7:30! Im so gonna b late again n dat stupid takla princy will nt spare me today accha main tayaar hoti hoon..aap jaake jayanti ko boldo mera nashta ready karde..i want French toast wid

Swayam(leaving) - ofc chocolate milkshake..u cnt live widout it

Taani(grinning) - yes!😃 N pls usko boldo jaldi ready karde..im allrdy so hungry bhai!

Swayam(chuckling) - god..wen r u never hungry?😆 Haan main boldungga..ab jaldi se tayaar hoja n will drop u..i hve to go cllge too..we hve band practice today

Taani - ok..will b ready in 5 mins😃

*Taani den showers n put on her school uniform..she ties her hair in a messy ponytail n dashed to d dining table..taani is nt like any typical girly high-school student..she hates dressing up n applying make-up..she dsnt care abt hw she looks n she is nt obssesd wid mirrors! She is , wat people call, a tomboy n she dsnt mind being clld one too..from young she ws diffrnt..wen girls used to play wid barbies, she played wid toy cars wid her brother..wen girls dance n auditioned for cheerleading n wat not, she recruited players in her school n made d very frst school's girls' basketball team..she was d captain n d starplayer of her team n school..n eventhough her team hve nt won as much trophies as d boys bb team, her team ws still very popular n evry1 admired taani..Bt nw evrythng has changed..since its their last year at St.louise school, her teammates hve been busy wid projects, studies n exams dat dey never get d time to practice n dey hardly participate in any tournaments too..Eventhough nw taani dsnt have a team, she still practices n plays bb for fun

She dashed to d dining table n saw her favrte meal..her mouth ws allrdy watering n she quickly took her seat n starts hogging her food..swayam, who ws drinking his coffee, just smiled at his crazy sister..he ws allrdy used to dis bt he cnt help bt wonder hw his petite little sister can eat so much!*

Swayam - choti slow down!😆 Yeh khaana kahi bhaag nahi jaa raha..eat properly baba!

Taani - bhai..i cnt help it! Im so hungry! Maine kal raat se kuch nahi khaya!

Swayam - hahah 😆 pagal dats clld dinner n its suppose to b a person's last meal of d day u knw

Taani - fine watvr!😛 Nw let me eat..hhmm..im done! 😃Ab mera peth bhar gaya hai..accha chalo bhai..u hve to drop me to school! Chalo chalo

*TaaYam leaves for school..swayam drops taani n leaves for his collge..taani runs to her class n d bell rings*

Taani - hhhuuuhhh..bach gayi main aaj..thnk god im nt late

Meghna - TTTAANNII!!! Tu aagayi?😃

*Ms.Meghna Kapoor..She is taani's childhood n bestest frend..she is totally opposite of taani n she is d typical girly bimbo..she is very pretty, loves shopping n cn talk abt boys all night long! She is so obssesd wid d colour pink dat she even carries around her favorite pink umbrella wervr she goes..eventhough she is dumb as a nut, she has a golden heart n taani luvs her..she has always been dre for taani wenvr her parents wernt arnd or wenvr she ws depressd or angry or lonely..taani always wonderd y ws meghna still sticking arnd wid her aftr all d crap she had put meghna into..meghn always knew hw to handle taani n her famous rage..taani feels really lucky to hve a frend like meghna bt deep down she always feels undeserving to hve such a good bestfrend*

Taani(rolling her eyes) - nahi toh..yeh mera bhoot khada hai tere saamne..idiot kahiki😕

Meghna - ohfo taani..tu bhi na 😆 accha yeh sab choro..i hve to tell u somethng

Taani - oh god...dnt start yaar meghu..i dnt wanna knw!😳

Meghna - aarey listen to me na taani..its abt life n death!😕

Taani - shuru ho gayyi teri drame..accha bata kya hua?

Meghna - u knw wat..mere saath na kuch hua aaj..woh adi hai na..12th-C wala jo basketball khelta hai..uufff..woh kya lag raha tha aaj! he ws luking so hawt wid his shorts n shirtless! U missd it..main toh waha beth gayi thi wid my lucky umbrella..n den u knw wat happened?😳

Taani(sighing) - hhmm🤔

Meghna - he came to drink water n he said hey to me!☺️ omg omg omg taani! Cn u blve he said hey to me n nt dose oder despo girls..n he said hey nt hi or hello bt hey!!

Taani - wat?😲 Idiot ,hey n hi r d same thng!

Meghna - no its nt!😕 Maine n magazine mein padha tha dat hi n hey r totally diffrnt..if a guy says hi den it means dat he is just casually saying hi..bt if he says hey den it means dat he actlly likes u! oh god..i feel like d luckiest girl ever! Adi likes me!😃

Taani - toh just bcoz he said hey, u assume dat he likes u n he is ur prince charming?😲

Meghna - haan bt its nt just dat..today morning, I went online n read abt my horoscope prediction..usmein likha tha dat im gonna meet my prince charming today!aur yeh sach hua..i met my prince charming n dat is adi! Im destined to marry him only!

Taani - oh god..yeah ok..watvr..congratulations🥱

Meghna - tani toh aaj pls aftr school, we hve to go for shopping!😃 I need new dresses to impress adi! Toh u will come wid me na? pls..pls..pls..pls?

Taani - meghu I cnt today..i hve bb practice..mayb some oder time

Meghna - pchk..humesha basket ball basket ball n basket ball..u never even once followed me for shopping! Im in a crisis here! Fine..main who 12th-A waali shweta ke saath chali jaunggi..u practice n make some goals

Taani - goal nahi! Usko basket bolte hai..hw many times shud I explain to u!😕

Meghna - watvr..same thing

Taani - god..i will go mad one day bcoz of her!🤢


Thats it guys..i know u wanted rey bt will introduce his character mayb in d next chapter! so patience 😉 hope u guys liked d update..pls dnt forgt to like n commnt guys!! 😃

Edited by forever18able - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
res/unres
yipeee me first...😉.
congo me yaar...
coming to the update
it was awesome...

loved it yaar
ur concept is superb...taani as bb player wow...
loved taayam and
taani and megha part
plz update soon and
pm me...
Edited by QTPie99 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Awesome update
the entey of taani shekhawat
taayum part loved it
Meghna taani bff
taani n meghna convo superb
next part reys entry cant wait
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
taani intro was nice dear...
waiting for rey...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Haww rey nhi tha MERA REY nhi tha...appu nt gona forgive u fr this...lolz..
Awsum intro of taani..dream seriously..??
Swayam got worried hw cute yr..
N adi matter..lol..
Update soon n pm me..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Hey nyc update... Loved d taayam prt...swayam calling taani choti ws vry cute
Bt i missed rey in dis...plzz taarey meet dikha do jaldi
N meghna is a typical grl...completely opp to taani bt i found hr cute too aftr all taani ki bestie h 😉
Loving dis tomboy taani...plzz update d nxt prt soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
nyC dear i can't imagine ki taani ishe bhi ho sakti he
but ff ke name se darr lag raha he adhoora complete karoge na is love story ko
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
hahahahhaha!
actually, than taayam
i liked meghana...
though she is a mad!
but loved her, she is so hilarious man!
mainly tht sentence
he said hey nt hi or hello bt hey!! 😆
i was literally rofling!!!
anyways... gr8 strt! update soon!!!
and ya, pls love story ko adhoora mat choddna!
i cant read then! 😭😭😭
Edited by hima_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
omg m so lyk taani in this chapter..!! except i played wid both barbie dolls as well as cars..!!
hw cudnt i ..coz of my twin bro...!! company always hav effect u kno..
nyways the taayam bond is supr amazin..!!
hehhehhe the bhukkad thing is so mine too!!
evn i lyk bb .. :))
thnx 4 pm dear :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I was suppos to say hey, as I always says it 2 my frds
But after reading I will say hi!!!!!!! U kno na ki i m also a girl
So in our case it will be odd 😆hilarious
Too good dear , loving yr start, swayam calling taanu choti awww
Liking their bond too much
Now meghana jeee, dumb but I found her hilarious
Drooling on that hey !!!!!
From where u got that idea
Dear for the 1st tims I enjoyed any update without taarey
That means u r too good in writing
👏 👏
Plz dear don't leave any of yr writing in mid I req
As I read all yr work n comment also, n found yr stories too good
Plz tell me , what I call u, u can call me aish plz update soon
N thanks 4 pm dear
Waiting 4 yr stories
Edited by yoyoaishwarya - 12 years ago

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