clarity (Taarey and swaron versions)imp nt pg 1

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Ayesha Hasan

@Ayesha_Hasan

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Angel!!! Brilliant work, dear..

Really really loved it..

Taani's boyfriend!!

I thought Rey at first..lol...

Felt bad for her..

And I loved Rey's entry sooo much..

Haha!! Heroic entry that was...

OMG!!! he has been in love with her since 4 years..

And she never noticed him..

But, this is the beginning of their love...

Rey became the reason for Taani to live..

Really very well-written, Angel..

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Soumya

@.-Soumya-.

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Awsum OS
Short n sweet
Thanx for PM di

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jeslinathomas

@jeslinathomas

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Nice update and keep writing.

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Mihika

@Legilimens.

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Sorry for commenting so late Angel ! But I loved the SwaRon version. 😊 I really like the way you write. Very naturally it comes to you and you have a kind of unique flow in your write ups. 😊

I love open endings and I loved your one shot. It was short yet beautifully penned. Could connect to the emotions.

One request, please do write a second part to it. 😳

Mihika.

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Jalebi bai

@Breezy.

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Anjel, I just loved it. That TaaRey version was awesome😳 I have always praised your writing so again this time also i will say you are an awesome writer. Do write on TR more😃