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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lol... Me waiting :p
kabhi padha nahi ye wala FF ;)
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Originally posted by: Shalinaparbin

Lol... Me waiting :p
kabhi padha nahi ye wala FF ;)



Hehe.!! Phir Bhi Waiting.? 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really ??? Yippie... Im waiting
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HIS UNBREAKABLE VOW


PART 10

Why...is...she...after me..? What have I done.? She asked him innocently, still clinging to him. Her constant tears, unknowingly pierced something in his heart. Unbelievably to his own surprise and shock, he could not take them and he simply wrapped his arms around her soothing her aching heart. Neither of them knew, what they were doing, but they simply stood there holding on to each other, while one sobbed endlessly and the other stood there absorbing the pain.


I am sorry Geet, I am sorry that you are facing all this because of me. He apologized to her in the most sincere way possible, grabbing her attention. She slowly pulled out of the hug, realizing their current state while he too got back to his senses and withdrew his hands. She looked at him, with a calm face managing to control her tears which seemed to have subsided with his comforting.


Please, there is no need for you to apologize. It was not your fault. She said meekly, averting her gaze away from his face.


How is not my fault.? She is doing this because of me. She is only doing this to... He spoke feverishly, stopping abruptly as Geet suddenly looked back at him with confused expressions. Her eyes had questions, but he didn't have the guts to answer them yet.


Geet, I am sorry.! I promise she won't be anywhere near you. Please, forget what happened today and yesterday. I will make sure she doesn't come near you again. He said in a solemn voice, but he couldn't fool her as she knew this was all something beyond what it looked like. Not intending to push it further, she smiled and was about to walk back to the car when grabbed her hand holding her back.


Geet, did she do that.? He asked eying her disoriented state and her torn clothes. The moment the words left his mouth she looked down in embarrassment, confirming his doubts thereby feeding the already burning volcano within. Missing her by inches, Maan's fist landed on the wall shaking Geet with fear.


Maan please.! She said, closing her ears with her hands, trembling with fear. He sighed calming himself down.


Let's go home. He said clearing her way. She nodded and walked towards the car. As she walked, he noticed her torn clothes again, disgusting him to be even associated with Nisha. He closed his eyes, controlling his anger remembering Geet's tears. Slowly, he called her back stopping her in her tracks. Walking towards her, he removed his coat settling it on her shoulders, surprising her by his care. She looked at him in trance, unable to comprehend the changes in him. The Maan whom she faced in their room right after their marriage and the Maan standing in front of her were poles apart. Her mind wandered to the thought of what possibly could have changed.?


You have changed Maan. She spoke in the same trance, not even realizing the impact with which the words would hit Maan. He looked at her, shocked by her words, by his own behavior. How could he change.? Was she changing him.? The thought of Geet changing him jolted his senses. This was something he never dreamt of nor wanted. He was moved but somehow composed himself, walking away from her towards the car. She stood there looking at his retreating figure, unsure of her own words which were undoubtedly true. She walked back to the car, to find him sitting with his eyes closed, his head resting on the back of the seat and his hand clenched into a fist. Quietly she took the seat beside him. The same silence engulfed them all the way back home. As they reached the mansion, he walked quietly beside her towards the mansion. Her words still echoed in his ears, reminding him of the things he tends to have forgotten. As they walked into the mansion, Dadimaa and Rohan were surprised to see them walking in together.


Maan.? Geet.? What happened.? Dadimaa asked worriedly, seeing Geet covered with Maan's coat, while he looked lost in his own world. Not getting any answer from him Dadima shook him bringing him out of his thoughts.


Maan, I am asking you what happened.? She repeated herself.


Nothing Daadimaa, there is nothing to worry about. He said coldly and began walking out of them room when he spotted Rohan. A smile broke across his face, seeing Rohan.


Rohan.? When did you get here.? He asked shocked. Rohan came forward and the two shared a warm hug.


Just yesterday when you were too busy to even notice me, Jerk.! Rohan added casually, elbowing Maan which he nearly dodged.


Sorry Rohan.! Maan apologized meekly to Rohan, hugging him again. Dadimaa and Geet stood there smiling. After a quick chat Rohan excused himself on the pretext of stepping out of the house, very well knowing the drama about to begin, assuring Maan to catch up the moment both are free. Dadimaa, got the perfect chance to execute her master plan.


Dadimaa, I have some work so I am going to be in my study.! Saying so, Maan started walking away when Dadimaa called him back.


Wait a minute Maan, I have something to give you before you go. She said, walking towards the center table. She picked up an envelope and walked towards Maan placing it in his hand as she reached him. As Maan opened the envelope, his eyes widened in horror while Dadimaa's smile turned into a grin.


Dadimaa, what is this now.? He asked with a serious expression, glaring at her.!


Just what you are reading Maan.! I thought you are smart enough to figure it out. She said with a teasing expression making it worse for Maan. He closed his eyes, controlling his temper.


So now Maan bte, you are leaving tomorrow morning. She said, patting his back. Just as he was about to open this mouth to argue further, she cut him off.


And don't even think of mentioning office, you can leave it to your efficient staff. They manage the office in your absence, they can do so now. She warned him. Maan just sighed at her stubbornness and turned away to leave the room when she stopped him again.


Maan, please try to understand why I am doing this. After what happened yesterday, I thought you both need a change. And this will also give you both a chance to know more about each other. If not anything, think about Geet, did she really deserve what happened yesterday.? She said on a serious note. Hearing her words, all the events flashed in front of his eyes along with Geet's words. Saying nothing, he just walked out of the room leaving Geet and Dadimaa alone.


Dadimaa, what happened.? Why is Maan angry.? Are you sending him somewhere.? She asked all the questions in a go making Dadimaa laugh.


Geet.! You can ask one question at a time.! It's not only Maan who is going somewhere, you both are.


We both are.? But where Dadimaa.? Geet asked in a confused state.


On your honeymoon, where else.?? Dadimaa answered with a wink. Geet's eyes widened in shock hearing this, for she only feared Maan's reaction. The memory of their temple visit came back to them reminding her of how angry Maan was...


But Dadimaa.. She tried to argue.


No If's and buts Geet, you both are leaving tomorrow morning and that's final. Dadimaa said flatly, closing all scopes of arguments and left the hall. Geet stood there, confused with the happenings; how could they go on a honeymoon.? She slowly walked towards their room, fearing Maan's reaction once she entered the room. Thinking to herself, she pushed open the room of their slowly all prepared to face the wrath but the sight that greeted her only took her by surprise. Maan was packing a suitcase, which was totally opposite of what she had expected. Dazed, she walked into the room. Maan noticed her entering with a shocked expression which didn't surprise him either. The idea of honeymoon, irked him off to no limits but the thought of change of atmosphere for Geet compelled him to consider it for once. It was he who was responsible, for her facing all of it shouldn't he be the one to fix it as well.? After a few minutes, he looked back at Geet, who still stood immobile at one corner.


Geet, what's wrong.? Why are you standing here.? He asked walking towards her. She backed away as he started approaching her crashing into the wall behind her. She winced in pain as her head hit the wall. Maan chuckled seeing her rubbing her head, surprising her even more. Though her words shook him, yet he tried not showing how her words affected him, behaving normally.


Geet are you okay.? He said walking back towards the bed, getting back to repacking his stuff. Geet recomposed herself and neared the bed.


Maan, what...are you doing.? She asked him slowly. He looked up from his packing with an amused expression.


What do you think I am doing Geet.? I am packing. I assume, Dadimaa told you about our..He stopped abruptly. Our trip tomorrow... He continued fumbling for a while. She nodded answering his question.


So, I am almost done my packing, you also do yours. We will have to leave early morning tomorrow.! I have some work to finish before we go, so I will be going to the study once I am done. He said casually. Totally confused, Geet simply nodded and moved towards the wardrobe fishing her saree out. As she turned she saw him facing her with a worried expression.


Geet, I know you are surprised I agreed to Dadimaa's wish. I don't want to force anything on you, but all that has happened since yesterday, I assume this will be a nice change for you. Don't feel forced, you can refuse if you don't want to go. He confessed solemnly. Hearing his words Geet's heart swelled in happiness, how can he be so different at times.?


I...want to go.! I was... She began, but stopped thinking of his reaction.


Yes.? He urged her to continue.


I...was...afraid you...might be angry. She confessed staring at the ground. Maan smiled at her and walked out of the room leaving her to think over all of it again. Changing out of her torn clothes, Geet started packing for the next day with a smile on her lips. Despite of everything being normal, Geet couldn't understand Maan's sudden change in behavior. Why did he just walk away when she said he has changed.? Well at least for her, he did change compared to their first encounters. Geet was busy packing when it suddenly occurred to her, she never knew where they are going.! She walked out of the room towards the study to ask Maan. She knocked at the room and walked in to find Maan engrossed in his laptop. He looked up as he saw her entering.


Yes Geet.?


I...wanted to know where we are going.? I don't know.! She said smugly.


Paris. He said with a small smile. Geet's eyes widened the moment she heard Paris.


Paris.? She asked worried. It was not the place worrying her, it was the thought of traveling in a flight that bothered her.


Why, you don't want to go to Paris.? He asked her raising an eyebrow. The worried lines on her forehead confused him.


I...I..am... She fumbled, embarrassed on her fear of air travel or rather heights.


What's wrong Geet.? Tell me.! He asked, shutting his laptop and walking towards her. Her stammering scared him deep down.


I...am.. scared of planes and heights. She confessed with a sad face. Maan's jaw dropped hearing her words, he was clueless of what could be the reason behind her fears. All he could do was try to comfort her.!


It's okay Geet, You don't need to be scared. You are not traveling alone, I will also be there.! Don't worry and relax.! He tried comforting her, but the worry lines on her forehead didn't seem to fade away. Nodding meekly, she left the room somewhat relieved by his words. Maan smiled as she left away, shaking his head at her childishness. How could he ever let something hurt her, given her innocence? He didn't know what it was, yet he had the sudden urge to protect her innocence for the very least. Both went back to their respective works preparing for the next day, surely holding something unexpected for them.


Precap: Maanet in Paris 😉

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So here is the next one guys.!!! First of all I would like to thank you all from the bottom of my heart. I got around 180 likes for the previous 2 parts, I am really overwhelmed.!! 😳 Now coming to the update, many of you may be confused with Maan, but he is changing unwillingly which Geet is aware of. As for the love story, well now that they are going to paris.. I can assure there are some pure Maaneet moments coming up.!! 😃

Will be waiting for your response eagerly.! Hopefully you all liked it 😳

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Edited by ..AnushaGeet.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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LOVELY UPDATE
ALREADY READ THREE TIMES
LAST PART IS MY MOST FAV.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yeh maan kuch samajh may nahi aaraha hai aisa kya hai nisha aur maan ke beech
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
as usual first question is yeh nisha kaun hai ??
Lol

Maan is so confusing
Arghhh
Banda chahta kya hai aakhir

Aayye hayye ...honeymoon
Not bad ... Waiting for some romantic moments

Awesome updt anu
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Craziest_MG

as usual first question is yeh nisha kaun hai ??
Lol

Maan is so confusing
Arghhh
Banda chahta kya hai aakhir

Aayye hayye ...honeymoon
Not bad ... Waiting for some romantic moments

Awesome updt anu



Nisha as of now is a mystery...manage with that.. 😆🤣
Lol...Woh bhi pata cha jayega.. sabar kar ...

Thank you...❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb update...😊
So i guessed ryt..DM wanted to send dem from HM..😉
Wow..!! Maaneet in Paris..(my dream to go their once)
Awww my geetipie scared of height and flight..
Bt geet no worries ur Maan is wid u..
Chalo thank god..Maan apne angry mode pe nai aya...HM k name se..which was very much expected cz of Nisha ficaso in office and then geet saying u hv changed Maan..n Maan being MSK wouldn't like to change...and his voice was very cold when he entered mansion...
Continue Soon..


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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful update
geet scared from heights so we can see maaneet moment in plane

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