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Posted: 12 years ago
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okay about the OS, as you already know this time my comments are meant to be without any praises, and intellect less as well.
Well intellect ka toh pata nahin but I guess my comments can't survive without praising you and I hate to admit it.😡

So, firstly, I just loved that there were no dialogues but only action.😆 No, I mean I loved the fact that it was a narrative...it has enhanced the effect, and also I feel, I tried to imagine dialogues in between but then I found that it would have sounded cheeky. Though i have full faith in your skills and it is absolutely possible, that with dialogues also, you would have done wonders.


The song was well chosen and gelled with the OS perfectly. Though I remember getting scolded by you for liking this song in the "madhubala ki madhushala" GOTW. but then I guess since it's written for me...the song has to be there.😆

I'm glad that you wrote it (isn't glad an understatement..lolzz) ...but more than that I'm happy that you posted it on the occasion of your third anniversary as a writer. This was full of your essence, from top to bottom, you have labelled each and every line as yours. Because its only you who knows how to make something scintillating and not vulgar. And how to make scintillating as divine, pure and innocent as a dewdrop or may be the drop that travelled through dutta's neck and got lost in his chest or may be vest😆

From Sweet to scintillating... Now that's called a journey. ladki jawaan ho gayi hai. aur naughty bhi😛😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -bharti-

Also thank Aish for the push n pull, forcing you to come up with the OS even if its meant only for her n her sweetu lol.. i await her mimdblowing comments.😊



Awww...Bharti no need to thanks dear🤗

Anything for my friends...I could very well see, the brain damage naku-sups and subbu romance was doing.😆

okay Bharti now I must run😆😆😆
In between a big bow to you...your loyalty towards baaji is exemplary 😆
And now bhaag aish bhaag


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Posted: 12 years ago
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@rose; why so much hungama??? Does sonee and mimmi wanted more?😆

and now seems you have lost in jungle with no internet connection...can't you google😛

Faye means..umm it's generally associated with feminine, and it means confidence trust and belief
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: aishwish

okay about the OS, as you already know this time my comments are meant to be without any praises, and intellect less as well. there was nothing intellectual about the OS😉 so i wasn't expecting any praises on the contrary i felt that you would bajao my band and you did that perfectly in your previous comment. 😆😆😆

Well intellect ka toh pata nahin but I guess my comments can't survive without praising you and I hate to admit it.😡aww how sweet , little bit of appreciation will not hurt 😆

So, firstly, I just loved that there were no dialogues but only action.😆 ..yeah baby and what an action ..lol..No, I mean I loved the fact that it was a narrative...it has enhanced the effect, and also I feel, I tried to imagine dialogues in between but then I found that it would have sounded cheeky. ..yeah , these days i have lost faith in my dialogues , you always find something hilarious in them even when they are meant to be taken seriously 😆Though i have full faith in your skills and it is absolutely possible, that with dialogues also, you would have done wonders. ..nope i don't think so


The song was well chosen and gelled with the OS perfectly.chalo finally someone appreciated the song , it was haunting me for some time , i heard it on FM some days back and just thought what if its dedicated to tasha ( I know its kind of hard to digest but still took that chance )Though I remember getting scolded by you for liking this song in the "madhubala ki madhushala" GOTW...really did i ? in fact i love this song ! though not visually but then I guess since it's written for me..ha ha ha .the song has to be there.😆

I'm glad that you wrote it (isn't glad an understatement..lolzz) .yes its , rightly said you should be jumping n doing bhangra ..but more than that I'm happy that you posted it on the occasion of your third anniversary as a writer...correction scribbler , oh i thought about 10 times whether to write this or not...then i was like just let me start with it and see how it turns up after writing one page i thought not bad and next day i completed it but now i was worried about posting it , i haven't had good experiences on my anniversaries 😆 still i was like jo hoga dekha jayega 😆 This was full of your essence, from top to bottom, you have labelled each and every line as yours. Because its only you who knows how to make something scintillating and not vulgar...thats the only thing i dreaded , i was prepared to see this being labelled as hot n sexy but not VULGAR or CHEAP And how to make scintillating as divine, pure and innocent as a dewdrop..tell me honestly , did i succeed in keeping that divinity and purity intact ? if yes then you have made my day 🥳or may be the drop that travelled through dutta's neck and got lost in his chest or may be vest..now this is being sarcastic 😆

From Sweet to scintillating..yup i wanted to add this line , enough of being sweet , now lets get bigger and bolder 😆. Now that's called a journey. ladki jawaan ho gayi hai. ..munni badnam hui darling tere liye 😆aur naughty bhi😛😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's mind blowing. I have only read these in English novels but here its much much better. I really like it.😊

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