SCINTILLATING TASHA MOMENT

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Honestly speaking I really don't know how and where to start from, this thread is primarily to thank all those readers who have at some point of time, read, liked and commented on my work. And today because of all of them I have completed three years of writing and in my words scribbling on this awesome forum. The journey that started with sweet tasha moments would reach this far, i had never ever imagined even in my dreams , especially after Mishal left the show but I stayed back not only for him but essentially for all the wonderful members of this forum who became my friends. I shall never claim myself as a talented story teller but would proudly accept that I have been one blessed soul who has been loved by so many people here. Thanks is a very small word compared to what I have got from this forum but still I shall go ahead and thank all of you.

The feed back of all the readers has definitely helped me in improving my work, so thank you much for your constant support and encouragement.

Sonee and Mimi , thanks a lot babes for making beautiful banners for my OS , SS and FF, they have surely uplifted my stories . I know I have been hard to please and have eaten your head several times but I shall not apologize, its my right to trouble you and I shall continue doing so. In the end I miss you both a lot.

I clearly remember my first and second anniversary of writing , both were memorable in their own ways. On my first anniversary I wrote 'Guns and Roses' that got a mixed response ( many hated it ..lol) and on the second anniversary sonee the great made my popat, there were two threads to celebrate the second anniversary , one of course by me and a surprise one by sonee and it was so embarrassing but what to do , I still loved her!
Also last year Aish madam requested for an OS or a new FF which i royally ignored because i was busy with my ongoing ff and my hands were full. But this time I have written or scribbled something.
Now Aish for a very long time is pestering me to write something on tasha where she can imagine herself with her sweetu i.e. dutta , so here it is and one more thing I am not taking any responsibility for this one shot which is quite different from what I have written so far, in fact by my standards its actually 'Hatke'. Therefore if you have any complaints then you know who to bash , no no not me but AISH ( beta aaj toh aap gaye)

PS. This week IWL update shall have to wait.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Black clouds gathered above them, but they were intent on getting back home. He hoped that the clouds would go away and he could continue driving. But his hopes dashed when suddenly heavy rain began to pour. Within seconds they were soaked to the skin, thanks to their travelling in open air jeep. The torrential downpour made driving even more difficult as he could not see more than a couple of meters ahead. To make matters worst, the jeep broke down near a forest. He banged his fist against the steering wheel in frustration, she pressed his hand softly, there was nothing that they could do now, they had to get out. Standing on the deserted road they waited for any other car to pass by so they could take lift but the area was totally isolated. He took out his cell phone'damn it, they were no signals!

The storm was fiercest he had ever seen, he clutched her hand firmly and started walking in the forest. The trees provided some shelter from the rain however the path they were walking on was terrible. It was uneven, muddy and slippery. She dug her soft fingers into his to maintain balance but still slipped twice, however his strong arm was always there to catch her. Lightning flashed dangerously close to them. The deafening thunder and howling wind startled her and she buried her head inside his chest, squeezed her eyes shut and fisted the collars of his black kurta. He wrapped his arms around her securely and held her close to himself for sometime. Feeling him around herself she opened her eyes and lifted her head slowly to meet his eyes. There was a sense of assurance in them that he would never let anything happen to her. He took out his coat and covered her then holding her by her waist, they started moving ahead but she couldn't help look at him with affection. His embrace made her safe, protected and warm, she knew she didn't need to worry as long as he was with her.

The wind had picked up and so had the rain, he frantically gazed around for help and then at last spotted an abandoned hut. They had no other choice but to take shelter in it. The hut was in a complete mess as if it had not been occupied for a long, long time. But thankfully there were some pieces of wood there that helped him to make fire. Standing beside the fire she rubbed herself vigorously, it was quite cold and the wet sari wasn't helping her. She looked at him and found him searching for something. He kicked opened an old trunk. There were some discarded things kept in it. He emptied it at once and took out a faded curtain. He fixed a rope across two opposite walls then hung the curtain on that rope. He suggested her to go behind the curtain and find something to change for herself from the trunk.

In the mean time he freed himself from his drenched kurta and kept it near the fire to dry up. He then picked up a huge stack of dry hay and spread it on the floor so that they could sit. It was still raining hard as he stood near the window but gladly the room was getting warm. He combed his fingers through his wet hair, pushing it back when he heard her bangles tinkle. At first he glanced over his shoulder but then couldn't stop himself from turning around.

Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiyan Hai
Tujhko Bhulake Aab Jaao Kahan
Dekhti Hai Jis Tarah Se Teri Nazrein Mujhe
Main Khud Ko Chupaao Kahan

She touched the curtain, pushed it aside then hesitantly came out. She couldn't find anything better than an old red sheet that she draped around herself. He stood there rooted on the spot unable to tear his eyes off her. The sheet was tied on her right shoulder keeping the left one bare and it barely succeeded in covering her knees, leaving her creamy legs exposed to him. She wrapped her arms around her, in an attempt to cover herself but failed miserably. His eyes ever so slowly travelled up and stopped on her face. Her hair was now open, the vermillion smudged in between her parting, the mangal sutra dangled around her neck and a deep crimson shade colored her cheeks. She appeared so pure and virtuous, just like dewdrop making him wonder, how could someone look so angelic.

Yeh Pal Hai Apna To Is Pal Ko Jee Le
Sholon Ki Tarha Zarah Chal Ke Jee Le

He continued to stare at her, as the world around him ceased to exist. Nothing mattered to him anymore other than this particular moment. Nobody was important for him anymore other than her and for the first time in the evening he was glad that it rained and they were stranded here. His dark, intense gaze was piercing through her body and sending chills down her spine. But neither of them tried to break this eye lock as though this moment belonged to them and they wished to feel and live it to its fullest.

Pal Jhapakte Kho Na Jana
Chuke Karlo Yakin Na Jane Yeh Pal Paaye Kahan

Without blinking his eyes even for a second he began walking towards her. Every step that he took made her step back, she shivered and clutched the end of the sheet in her fist. He continued to step in her direction and she continued to move back until her back hit the wall behind. He was just inches away from her and she gulped the lump formed inside her. She tried to get away from him but he blocked her by slamming his right palm against the wall, he had a naughty glint in his eyes as she thought of getting past him by moving towards the left but once again he blocked her with his other hand. She was trapped between his arms and there was no way to escape. Deep down in her heart tonight she didn't even wish to escape from him. She lowered her head and gaze shyly, making him believe that she looked all the more adorable when turned coy. He placed his finger under her chin and lifted her face, forcing her to meet his eyes. If she was appearing stunning then even he managed to mesmerize her and she took a moment to admire him. His wet face, smoldering eyes, dark and intense expressions made her heart ache for him. She noticed that his white vest was sticking to him like second skin and rain droplets were running down his face to his neck and then getting lost in his chest. For a second she felt jealous of anything other than her daring to touch him intimately. His magnetic gaze was boring inside her, so she stepped forward, covered his eyes with her hand, tip toed and planted a soft kiss on his cheek to ensure herself that she wasn't dreaming, this was all real.


Baahon Mein Teri Yun Kho Gaye Hai

Armaan Dabe Se Jagne Lage Hai

Blushing profusely she tried to walk past him but he grabbed her wrist and swiftly turned her around so that her back was pressing against his chest. She inhaled sharply as he held close and moved her hair to her right shoulder. She could feel the heat emanating from his body, igniting and tantalizing desires within her. He blew in her ear softly before nuzzling her neck ever so slowly making her close her eyes and grasp his arms that were wrapped around her waist tightly. He kissed the nape of her neck and she threw her head back against his shoulder in pure ecstasy. He was loving the effect that he was having on her as he ran his slender fingers over the length of her arms and she pressed herself deeper into his chest. Her breathing was getting shallower with every passing second and she felt that her knees would give way if he continued to touch her like this.

Jo Mile Ho Aaj Hum Ko Door Jana Nahin
Mitado Saari Yeh Duriyan

Jaadu Hai Nasha Hai Madhoshiyan Hai
Tujhko Bhulake Aab Jaao Kahan

Before she collapsed in his arms out pleasure he lifted her up and carried her to the bed of hay. She clung to him as if her life was dependent on him and it was true, she couldn't imagine a day without him. He placed her on the dry hay as carefully as he could as though she was tender and fragile like a glass. Leaning over her, he glanced at her flushed face where a beautiful smile danced on her lips. They continued to look into each other's eyes making her wonder, was she really that fortunate to have him in her life, did he really belong to her? she raised her hand to caress his face. Her hesitant finger tips gently brushed over his forehead, travelled down his cheeks and stopped at his indented chin. After his dark pools that spoke volumes, it was his cleft chin that she adored the most and believed that it made him look breathtaking.

Her loose wet tendril was stuck at the side of her face, he lifted his hand and slowly tucked it behind her ear as she closed her eyes unable to meet his magnetic gaze. With the back of his fingers he touched her heated cheek and she sighed deeply in response. His thumb outlined her pink lips that were soft and delicate like petals. Once again he was creating a storm inside her, she grabbed the hay that was spread around them in her hands and parted her lips slightly. His eyes danced in joy and without wasting anymore time he covered her lips with his, dispelling all her doubts and eliminating every possible distance between themselves. Her arms went around him, his back, pressing him close to her. And when he lifted his head he found her smiling through her tears. He leaned forward and gently kissed her forehead, then rolled over on his back pulling her to himself. Her face was nestled into the crook of his shoulder while her hand rested on his torso and he held her by her shoulder.

They closed their eyes and relished this magical moment where they were one heart, body and soul. This was just the beginning, there were endless and timeless scintillating moments to follow.

Thanks for being part of this amazing journey ( don't worry , I have NO intention to continue this OS)

ROSE


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1VD4nehcFe8[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by stranger2rose - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res.. 😊

"Jaadu hai ya nasha hai, madhoshiyan" .. umm goes well for your writing also Rose 🤗
Wow! three full years on IF as a writer, incredible achievement indeed. Many congratulations, its time for celebrations. Yes! The best way to celebrate is to write more lol..

Well, Its been a long journey of missing our show, our man, but the positive side has been of bonding with so many like minded friends, Brilliant !!!
But common rose, how can you do this? the OS is more of a teaser leaving us craving for more Lol.. Not fair, its like sweet teasing moment, looking forward for many such moments..? 😉
Hmm dutta naku together in an open jeep caught up in the rains nearby a forest, ab yeh baji kaha margaya tha ? 😆 KMH ka title kya jhak marne ke liye diya tha lol.. Bechara bhao beech raste mein pareshan, patni ke saat akele, andhere raaste mein shamshani rahoon mein, kuch bhi hosaktha tha, lol... shukar hai zyada kuch nahi hua, bas kuch kuch hua 😆.. Tell me rose why did gadha not know wearing a wet vest was equally fatal 😃 bechari naku pareshan.. not gaining an easy access to the phulwari 🤣.. But naku,s red drape i tell you was as stunning as finding the drape itself in an abondoned hut, middle of nowhere lol.. Before i forget i wonder how (un)comfortable the haystack would be, tickling for sure lol..
I was all along recollecting many rainy wet songs wondering which fit best in the present scenario ,.. Umm confused truly.
Rose i wish you many fruitful years of writing, hopefully mishal will be back onscreen soon..
A heartfelt thanks for your time n efforts to keep this forum running, thank you dilse.
Also thank Aish for the push n pull, forcing you to come up with the OS even if its meant only for her n her sweetu lol.. i await her mimdblowing comments.😊


Edited by -bharti- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Rose, congratulations on writing for three years and I hope you'll be around for many more years to come and continue to shower us with your wonderful stories :)

I know I haven't actually been around for your writing in the beginning . You've been here a year longer than I have...but I do remember reading a lot of your work. Much later, but read them none the less. And need I say I was hooked right from the start!...

I do want to add that I can also see a lot of good progress from your earlier works to your recent ones..you've developed your talent and it only made everything better than before and for that 👏

Thank you for giving us all memorable stories to imagine and enjoy!

Now for this OS. As always a wonderfully written piece though I do feel the need to say where is the rest?! haha It ended so soon. It reminds my of the little devil at the end credits of just for laughs gag's haha when he cries "mommy its over!" 😆😆

Hope you continue soon...i loved it..

PS. I am glad you've delayed your IWL UD haha i have to catch up on the remaining four chapters I believe! Anyway see ya...take care...hum phir milenge chalte chalte



Edited by -daya- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi rose congrats for suceesful 3yrs ..loved all ur stories & thanxs for making us part of it...i hope u continue writing 👏u r awesome writer & enjoyed reading it...thanxs
Rose bouquet and thank you message Stock Photo - 9344276
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi oxy rose

It's been a memorable 3 yrs & must say Ur presence has been o2 for the forum…😊

you gave great stories & threads..I guess it's due to talented ppl like u the forum is still a place to visit…ur talented & I wish you to keep on writing & celebrate many more yrs …what would be a better way to commemorate with a OS..Thanks
a rose for a rose
Edited by Nakusha - 12 years ago
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ohh anniversarii .. Mubaraka mubaraka madamjee...*hugz*

i still remember d day.. ur 2nd anniversary..lol..2 post hehe...dat ws awesome,,sach mein u proved dat day ,,k ur popat,,.LOL

special os for aish?? *stern look*..only for aish?? *one look at rosie* and she wil imagine herself and her sweetu??? huhhh???*garing at aish*

tu baad mein akele mein mill...iska hisaab toh clear karna hi padega..

filhaal busy..wil read it aaramse baby..
teri tohhh
bahot yaad
aati hai
mujhe:p
Edited by --SONEE-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so beautifully written...went back to the good old days of LTL 1...missing mishal like helll...this OS is very awesumly mindblowing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Rosie.. what?! three years writing on Laagi!.I am gobsmacked, awestruck, and blessed that I know you and read your fantastic pieces of written texts. May I say in addition that you lady are some veteran writer![haaahoo]..Apart from writing were your innovative ideas that you put forward , at a time when our Laagi forum was under threat of closure.. you Rosie along with other like minded friends gathered every one and spearheaded an action plan ..and boy oh boy we stuck to our assignments[😆] .. those were the days.. you got us airborne again even jokers like me who runs on diesel!
So my rosie posie.. as a reader of your works,I thank you for writing on Laagi, we are blessed indeed.. I thank you for your honesty,humility, and unconditional love for a certain guy who left the show, but left you and many others without peace.. yet you carried on writing Rosie.. thanks.
Also , great you mentioned mimi, sonee, and asish.. didn't know them that well, but can say now that I know them for making beautiful banners for your writings.. oh.. Aish, needs a special thanks from me too , for bending your elbow to produce this OS..STM..
OK...now a few words for... STM..~ LOVE IN A HAYSTACK😛... sorry you know me..
Great start, setting full on impact! even the elements propelled them towards some stolen, out of the ordinary private moments. The jungle scene was an effortless trip to LTL1.. it was not hard to imagine who these two drenched water bodies were..
Mind you Rosie ,there were a few shocks for me... curtain kis liye?ahhh to create atmosphere.. didn't know Dutta had it in him!
next shock! hain Naku.. bare shoulder draped in a red sheet.. right color though.. red rag before the bull.. or shall I say gadha!
aand Rosie.. you teaser..why did Dutta have a white vest on?? oh come on! he will catch his death now.. rosie... think hairy chest! haaa hoo...
OK enough of leg pulling..it was a very profound piece of writing, penned in the true spirit of Tasha, celebrating their pristine, sublime and eternal love.
The end was yet another shocker! what? are you kidding? this was a one off? Rosie you teaser! I seriously thought ,that they would go home anddd...
ummh think about it..
Listen mate, thanks for giving me joy yet again, and may you continue writing.. on and on and on... yours with much love.. hammie.
Edited by Hamlet53 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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HI Rose

Congrats on your 3 Year of writing and may I say that It's been a joy reading all of them so far. This OS was very beautiful written and I like to thank you I hope you will continue your writing

Thank as always Thank care


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