Jodha Akbar 70: Of things said and left unsaid

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peachesandcream

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Very nice post. I must admit I liked your dialogue for Jodha better. It is more consistent with her character sketch and would be more enjoyable to watch.

Jodha and Jalaal are so busy putting up their pretenses while nursing their pride one wonders what it will take for them to finally break free. Perhaps a dip in the water resulting in an unguarded moment where emotions run high and words cannot be fully considered.

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sashashyam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Thank you, my dear. But I must admit I am getting tired of writing alternate lines for Jodha, when I know for sure that none of this is likely to be used!

As for the rest, you are completely correct.

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Originally posted by: peachesandcream
Very nice post. I must admit I liked your dialogue for Jodha better. It is more consistent with her character sketch and would be more enjoyable to watch.
Jodha and Jalaal are so busy putting up their pretenses while nursing their pride one wonders what it will take for them to finally break free. Perhaps a dip in the water resulting in an unguarded moment where emotions run high and words cannot be fully considered.