Asya story: phoopi take me home

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Posted: 11 years ago
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The story starts as asad leaves zoya in SM and Goes away...

rashid consoles zoya and ask nuzzhat to take zoya to guest room...

after sometime... ayaan knocks at the door... zoya opens...
ayaan... ur things...
zoya... thank you...
ayaan-----mona..
zoya---- just leave me alone for somtime .please...
ayaan leaves...
zoya locks the door... and cries her heart out...
she is still in the same dress...

next morning...
SM house:
Qazi and the group comes to the house... and say they want to meet ayaan and zoya...
shireen knocks at zoya door... and informs zoya about the arrival and hands her a set of dress and some jewels... and ask her to come down...
zoya nods and get ready...
everyone as assembled in the hall...
zoya comes in the salwar and covered her head, and wears the few jewels... typical...bahu looK
stand next to ayaan...
qazi: please forgive us both of you...
everyone is stunned...
Gaffur: what are u saying
Q: please forgive us... there has been a mistake... after we went back... and verified the nikhnama and our details... we found the mistake ..
G: what is the mistake?
Q: the bride name is not zoya farroqi. it is some zoya. fardeen?
everyone is shocked...
Q: according to our law... this nikah is not correct and these two are not really married...
G & Rashid: this what we try to tell you Yday... and are screaming at the committe members and Qazi...
zoya: stop it...
everyone turns around...
Z:.. it is ok Qazi saab... mistake is not just urs too... it is also ours... we ended up in the wrong place and in the right time...please let it go...
Z: just to be clear.. we are not married to each other...right
Q: yes beta... u both are never married .
Z: can u say this truth infront of few more people...
Q: it is my mistake... i will tell the whole world if u want to...
Z: dost. call Haseenabi and farhaan to come here... Ayaan call ur brother and poophi to come here...
Z: can you all wait for half hour...
Q: ofcourse beta...
zoya goes to the dining table and supplies some drinks to the group and goes to her room...

After half hour:

Everyone is there... G & S smirking with Dilshad inside the house... but shireen welcomes her... and apologies...

Nuzzhat is sent to call zoya and zoya comes down...

Everyone looks at zoya... Zoya is in her full jean avatar with the belt and a red color tops to go with and a small scarf around her neck... With a look of determination in her eyes...

Asad is stunned and so are the family members... Haseenabhi... Dumbstuck

Zoya ask the Qazi to tell the truth to both the families sitting there... And he repeats the whole story...

Zoya just watches Asad reaction... could see the pain realizing from his eyes... to hope... to joy... And then with guilt...and tears...

Phoopi is observing asad and Zoya...

Z: haseenabhi...

H.. looks up and says jee

Z: is it clear now that whatever happened is a Accident and we both are not married...

H: looks around and says... ofcourse yes... Who can doubt Qazi saab words...

Z: Now what to do want us to do?

H:?????

Z: will you break the wedding... again...if myself and ayaaan want to lead of lives separately... or since I spent a day in the dadi room here...am I a bad woman...

Everyone is stunned...Asad is in tears...

H: ofcourse not... I know u love Asad... and this whole nikah drama is a accident...i have no problem in farhaan-nikhat marriage...

Z: no problem to anyone present if I want to leave this house

Q: hassenabhi... U r so lucky to get a Daughter in law like nikhat ... who is loved brothers... like this. Willing to sacrifice their love for their sister,...

H: closes her mouth and acknowledge...

Z: farhan. Do u have any issues...

F: I am sorry... I don't have any problem... and I promise I will marry nikhat in the next 5 days...

Z: Can I leave this house...does anybody has problem...

Silence...

Z;; so I am still Miss Zoya Farooqi.. Asad Ahmed Khan...Fiancee...

Q: I am sorry beta for whatever pain I have caused... Here is the nikhanama and talaknama... u signed Yday... it is invalid...

Z: stunned... so I signed both together???

Everyone is surpirised... Asad looks angrily at Ayaan...

A: ayaan what is this?

Z:let it go... thank you...to QaZi saab...

Z:... Now it is established very clearly that ayaan and myself are not married...

I want one more nikkah to happen the same day as Farhan and nikhat...

All looks at her stunned...

Z: Ayaan and Humeira...

She looks at humeria... and goes and takes her hand...

Humeria is looking at her with tears...

Z: H, I am so sorry... I know what you are going better than anybody here... I am your culprit... I want to correct my mistake... I have spoiled ur happiness twice unknowingly, the posion in the sweet was not mixed by me but it was done by tanveer... to make me look bad... (razia realizes) and this time too... Destiny played game with all four of us...but I will not let this ruin ur happiness... U deserve your love...please forgive me...

Humeira hugs zoya...and says: aapi it is not ur fault...

Z: u will marry ayaan...

H... Yes appi... She takes ayaan hand and places humi jand... Holds it together...

Zoya goes to poophi... And hugs her and says... Poophi take me home...

Humeira: Aapi... will u stay with till I get married as my elder Sis... please...

Even nighat and ayaan asks her...

Humeira...if u have forgive us please stay with and take part in our happiness...

Zoya... looks around and says yes...

Both humeira and nighat hugs zoya...

Z: Mr.Khan... can poophi stay with my for an hour...

A; yes..

Zoya takes poophi to her room... and sleeps in her lap...and says...

POOPHI I AM TIRED...



let me know is u guys want to continue...i want the Zoyaan track end as soon as it started...

thanks for reading

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Posted: 11 years ago
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The ending is very emotional and I loved it. Very good work 👏
Please do continue. I would like to see how things work out!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesomeee👏
plz cont soon
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Oh OH my you brought tears to my eyes at the end.😭😭.
Nice very nice.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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great . and brilliantly written...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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really nice...the wrong name part i hope can prove this nikaah invalid in the show too...i enjoyed this...continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this was very nice!
and i think this would actually make the most logical ending of zoyaan track...!:)
fabulous!
i dont want any rona-dhona ...for zoya, asad, ayaan & humeira!
hope the track ends as it ended in the story...
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yes you chould continue and please PM me 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting...Continue Soon & Plzzz PM Me 😊
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Brilliant pls make this happen

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