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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hello... I was thinking if this would happen next....Let's suppose Sagar comes normal... And remembers everything what happened before he became mad, nothing about the time when he was mad... So he will forget about Vidya....

Ok here u go:

Hum tumhare hain sanam, PART ONE!

Sagar starts feeling pain in his head... He's sweating... Vidya is shocked... She goes and asks "Yeh aapko kya ho gaya?" Sagar says "Vidya.. Mujhe bohat dard ho raha hai!" Then Sindoora comes, she says "Tum khadi khadi kya kar rahi ho Vidya! Go and give him medicine, aspirin is written in it!" Vidya is giving a sad look... Sindoora says "Uff! I forgot that you cannot read!" Then Surili comes... She looks at the upset Vidya and gives a evil smile....

She gives the aspirin to Sagar.... Sagar feels better... Then he falls asleep.... It is late, and everyone go to sleep. Sindoora says "Surili, let's go, Vidya will stay here with Sagar..." Surili says "No, I will be here to take care of him... With Vidya...." Vidya is not so happy.... Vidya sits on the floor, near Sagar... Surili says "Tum mind mat karo, ok? I mean....Uff!!! Bhool jao, tum toh english samajhti nahin nah?"

She goes and lies down near sagar... And puts her hand on his hand... Vidya is discusted... Soon Sagar opens his eyes.... He screams "Vidya!!!" He quickly sits.... He sees Vidya, Vidya is very happy... Then Surili near him.... He's shocked. He says to Vidya, "Hey ladki! Tum kaun ho?" Vidya is shocked! She says "Aapko yeh kya ho gaya?"

Surili wakes up and says "Sagar darling, what happened???" Sagar remembers his moments with Surili... He says "Surili, you are here!" He hugs her, and says "I love you... And only you... Never leave me, like u said earlier..." Surili gives a very large smile, she says "Sagar... I am here always!" Vidya takes his hand, and says "Aapko kya ho gaya?Kal tak toh aap Suriliji se nafrat karte the???"

Sagar is thinking, Who is this woman... Who? I have never seen her before!!!! Sagar asks "Tum kaun ho?" Then Vidya says, "Main aapki patni Vidya...! Kyon aap mujhse aisa sawaal kar rahe hain?" Vidya is confused... Sagar is thinking, Why is she saying that she's my wife! I don't remember anything anything about you!!!!

Vidya hugs him... But Sagar pushes her away... And she falls on the floor... He says "Don't touch me!" Vidya is dead-like- shocked!!!! Surili is thinking, What happened? Has Sagar become normal? Why does he say that he doesn't know Vidya!!! And why is he acting like this with me.... Then Sindoora comes... She sees them three and is shocked! Sagar says "Sindoora didi... Who is this girl??? Why is she saying that she's my wife? Why!!!" Sindoora is shocked... Vidya is in tears, she is shocked hearing Sagar saying that he loves only Surili! She leaves the room with tears in her eyes!

End of this part!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG!!! PLZ continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to see what happens!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But i don't want any such thing to happen in BMTD once Sagar gets better!!
Edited by TD_Adict - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh god..hope this does not happen in the show.. great job kritika 👏
Edited by nishtha - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Don't get worried.I will bring them together soon!!!And teach that surili a lesson!!!! Will cont in 2 days!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great work I really hope he rembers Vidya not stupid Surili!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great one i loved it i want to read the rest please please continue soon thanks yaar 😳 😛 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ohh!!! Will try to cont sooon!!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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That was awesome! Please continue!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ooohhhh, hope this doesn't happen in the serial..!!

Great job Kritika, pls do continue 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part two:

Sindoora is surprised, "Sagar has become normal??" Sagar is confused, "What do you mean normal?" He is like, God yeh kya ho raha hai???

Sindoora says, "Sagar, you were mentally like a child for some time... And now it seems that you don't remember anything from the time that you were mad...?" Sagar says "Gosh! I don't remember nothing!!!"

Then Sindoora tells the whole story... Then she says about Vidya that "You were forced to marry a poor girl from Banaras. You didn't know anything about what was happening.....Vidya married you just for your money!"

Surili is thinking,Wow! This is going so good! Then Surili says "And your parents didn't let me to come and meet you....Sagar I love you still so much!" She hugs him. Sindoora says "And I wanted to stop the marriage....But it was too late!"

VIDYA'S ROOM:

Vidya is crying, when Shalu comes to the room... Shalu is thinking, I will tell now the news.....Vidya will be thrilled!!! Then she sees Vidya crying, she asks "Kya paapi nari ne tumse kuch kaha, vidya...?"

Vidya is in tears and hugs Shalu... Shalu is confused, she asks "Kya hua hai di?" Vidya says "My husband has become normal! But he, he says he doesn't know me...And that he loves Surili!!!"

Shalu is shocked, she comforts Vidya by saying "I am sure he will not fall to that paapi nari's trap...I know how he loves you...The love between you two, will not let you seperate!"

LIVING-ROOM:

All are discussing....Now the whole family is there, Kartik,Mahua,Harsh,Chandra, Chinu,Aniket,Sindoora and Sagar's mom.....Then Sagar and Surili.

Aniket asks Sagar "Sagar do you remember anything, the day you got married to Vidya?Or anything from the time you were mentally not so well...?" Sagar says "Nahin, I don't remember anything!"

Then Surili says "Good that he doesn't remember anything about the witch Vidya....She married him for money, only for money!!! But, I love him even now!"

Sagar's head starts hurting.... He remembers something.... He sees Vidya's face which is smiling.... Then it all goes black! He says "Mujhe Vidya se milna hai, akeele mein...."

Then Shalu comes, and says "Aap ko unse milna hai toh jaiye...Woh aap dono ke kamre mein hai...." But then Sagar asks "Babuji kahan hai???" His mom turns sad and says "Sagar first go....Let's talk later....Sagar leaves, Surili is tensed!

SAGAR'S ROOM:

Vidya is crying in the bed...She is holding the teddybear Sagar gave to her... And some moments they shared... Then she feels a touch in her arm. She opens her eyes and sees Sagar standing in front of her.

She sits, and Sagar sits near her too... He puts his hands on her cheeks... He says "Vidya...Do you feel love in this touch, do you love me...?"

Vidya is mum.... Then Sagar says "Vidya...Yes I have forgot everything about the time when I was mad... But I am sure as soon as I remember everything, we will think about staying together.....But for now we will stay in seperate rooms...."

Vidya is very sad ans looking upset. Sagar says"You don't worry at all...Everything will be alright!" Then Surili comes....Vidya is shocked... Then Surili brings Sameer too, she says "Sagar. Hamein tumse kuch kehna hai, hai na, Vidya....?"

Vidya is looking at Sameer...And then looks at Sagar. Sagar is waiting.....

END!!!
Edited by Kritika. - 18 years ago

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