Kasauti zindagi kii... Prem palchin

Hi people... This is the first fanfiction I've ever written... Please leave your comments and suggestions and plz tell me how u people want it... I'm gunna try and make fanfics on all the serials that haven't got one and I think really need on
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"PALCHIN..." Screamed prem as PALCHIN fell to the ground. Prerna, prem, Senegal everyone ram to her...
"Palchin... Palchin get up ... Open your eyes, mom call the doctor, and tushar please, don't bring Doris to my room, She's just going to get worried, and its not good for her to take stress in the situation were in."
"Ok prem, you carry palchin to her room. I'm going to call the doctor, and sneha please don't let Doris out of her room."
Sneha went to tushars room and tushar helped carry palchin to her room, and everyone followed.
1 hour later
"Where the hell is the doctor?" Screamed prem " mom palchins conditions getting worse, and I don't think it's good for the baby!" And he goes back to wiping the sweat of her face
The doctor walks in with tushar
Prerna started "doctor Gupta we called you a hour ago, look her conditions getting worse.. Please check her"
Suddenly sneha heard crying... It was P2, "daima ... You please stay with Doris for a few minutes while I go check on P2, and please don't let her out of the room" she signed her not to let her out of the room.
Sneha went out of the room

"She's fine now... I've given her the medicines and this I think is going to happen to her again because she's got a fear in her mind, that she's going to have another miscarriage

"What do U mean?" Said prem
"Prem control yourself... Who's going to take care of palchin if your in this state you need to stay strong to take care of palchin." Said prerna
Palchin wakes up " my.. M.. My baby... Prem mmy... Baby" and prem runs to her
"Palchin nothing's gunna happen to my baby... No nothing... Calm down... Quiet,sshhh "
And he putts her to sleep
Tushar walks in and says " mom there's someone from the clinic with palchin a medicine, do you wanna go get em?
"Yh... Prem I'll be back in a min" said prerna as she walked out of the door
Prem turned back to palchin and put his hand on her stomach and said to himself ' if only this miracle happened without palchin a health issues!?'
And with that he went to bed..

4 months later palchins 7 months pregnant and Doris has had her baby JWALA
Doris goes into prems room and gets shocked and runs out
Doris: prem ... Prem... Where r u ... PREM
Tushar: Doris wat happend? ... Why r u screaming
Doris : where's prem, palchins having a breakdown ... Prem
Tushar: wat... Prem just left for office and he must have gotten halfway! And there's noone else at home
Doris: well we have to call prem back cus palchins asking for him...
Tushar : ok let me try calling him.

Tushar gets his phone and rings prem

Prem: yh hello
Tushar: prem where r u
Prem : oh ... Since wen have u been calling me PREM wasn't I yudi
Tushar : oh prem just shut up... Pal
Prem: don't call me prem .. I'm yudi
Tushar: palchins having a nervous breakdown u need to get here now !
Prem: kk I'm cuming it'll take me 5 mins, u just don't leave her alone ... PLZ

prem comes home and runs through the house to his bedroom and sees palchin resting holding her tomach saying 'my baby' in her sleep

Prem: palchin... Did the doctor come
Doris: prem she's just gone to sleep but she say someone that's why this happens
Prem: wat who did she see?
Tushar : well prem ,, shes .. Um

And a person comes to the door