MSNT ~~thread 2~~ UPDATE on pg148part99 KITNA DISTRB KAR RHE HO

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veena singh

@veena23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

Hmmm..aaj thoda sa kahani me turn twist h...dnt know work karega ya nhi...but public se request h ki please logic mat dhundhna qki m sirf writer hu sirf entertainment janti hu...aur ye typical ekta type dialogue h pr kya karu ghanchakkr bna diya h ekta ne serial ko to is ghanchakkr se koi bhi chakkr nikal gya to meri glti nhi...chalo update karti hu...pasand aaye to tali jarur baja dena...appriciation always give strenght..

Part 72

"jitna kaha jaye utna karo"

pihu bht khush hokar ram k pas aati h aur gale lag jati h...ram bhi use pyar deta h...

Pihu...thank u thank u soo much papa jo apne mujhe is kamre me bulaya..

Ram beech me tokta h...darwaza band kar do

pihu...ji

ram...i said close the door

pihu...ok papa

pihu door band karke aati h...ram bolna shuru karta h

ram...maine tumhe is kamre me bulaya jarur h lekin usse hamare rishte me kuchh fark nhi padega...is kamre me tumhe ane ki na to kabhi izazat thi aur na hi kabhi hogi...lekin mujhe jo bat karni h m wo pari aur myra k samne nhi karna chahta qki hamare rishte ki sachhai sirf hum tak hi rhe yhi achha h...darwaza bhi isiliye band karne ko bola qki bahar myra aur pari thi...wo itna hi janti hain ki tum is kamre me nhi aa sakti unke liye yhi bht h...

(ufff...main nhi janti ki ekta kya karegi pr m pihu ki glti ko nazarandaz nhi kar sakti...m ye to nhi janti ki rambabu ko pihu ki sachhai jan payenge ya nhi...pr meri kahani me rambabu pihu se sirf duniya ko dikhane k liye pyar karte hain lekin wo priya ki halat k liye kahin na kahin pihu ko jimmedar samjhte hain wajah to nhi pta h lekin jo kuchh bhi hua tha wo ye manne k liye kafi tha jo bhi hua agar wo nhi hota to shayad ye sab nhi hota...ye defntly mera logic h...are pihu ko kuchh to ehsas hona chahiye ki uski wajah se do do jindgiya aur unse judi kai jindgiya kharab ho gyi..to pyari pihu k liye m itna to kar hi sakti hu...lol)

pihu..papa...aap

ram...abhi meri bat khtm nhi hui h...tum ek cheez hamesha yad rakhna hamara jo bhi rishta h wo is kamre k bahar h...is kamre me main sirf tumhari ma ka pati hu...aur tum yha sirf isliye ho qki tum meri biwi ki zindgi ho...ek bar maine glti se uski jindgi ka khyal nhi rakha tha to wo mujhse bht naraz ho gyi thi aur m use dobara naraz nahi karna chahta isiliye tumhari har khushi ka khyal rakhta hu main...qki tum jiski jindgi ho na wo meri jindgi h...aur uske liye to main maut se bhi lad sakta hu...

Pihu...papa ye sab kab tak aise chalega???..aap meri bat to suniye...

Ram...mujhe tumhari koi bat nhi sunni h...tum meri bat suno...m nhi janta ki us kya hua tha...pr m itna jarur janta hu ki mujhe meri priya pr pura yakin h...aur m janta hu ki wo glt nhi ho sakti ..rhi tumhari glti ki bat to tumhari glti ho ya na ho lekin jo bhi hua uski wajah se bht sari jindgiya barbad ho gyi...ek to us ladke k sath...aur dusre meri priya ki ye halat...to ye sabkuchh to tab tak aise hi rhne wala h jab tak meri jindgi wapas nhi mil jati..

Pihu...papa

ram...kal hospital jana h tumhari ma se milne...aur wha jitna kaha jaye utna hi karna...main nhi chahta ki tumhari wajah se meri biwi ko koi aur bhi takleef ho..so b carefull...now leave...

Pihu...papa

ram...leave...

Pihu kamre se chali jati h ram ko bura to bht lagta h pihu se aise bat karna qki wo janta h ki pihu priya ki jan h...lekin us waqt ram ne jitni bhi bate jani...sabne jo bhi btaya aur us ladke k sath jo bhi hua usse ram k man me ek darr baith gya h ki kahin waqi in sab k peechhe pihu to nhi...khair filhal uske liye is waqt priya important h...nothing else...

Agle din sab hospital jate hain...doctor pihu ko priya se bate karne ko kehta h...pihu bate karti h pr kuchh khas nhi hota h...phir pari aur mayra bhi milne aati h...kabhi neha vikram kabhi rishabh soumya...ek hafte beet jate hain...ek din fir se ram priya se bate karta h use btata h ki pihu kitni badi ho gyi h uski shadi ka time ho gya h ladka dhundhna h wgrh wgrh...aur uske pas hi teeno betiya khadi rhti hain ram priya ka hath apne hath me liye hota h priya k hath par ram k ansu girte hain...jisse priya chaunk kar ankhe khol deti h...qki wo sabkuchh bardasht kar sakti h pr rambabu k ansu nhi...aur ye main nhi bol rhi hu yar...priya ne hi kaha tha ki wo aise mr.kapoor ko rote hue nhi dekh sakti h...lol..

Ram...priyaaa...priyaaa

priya...mr.kapoor aap ro kyun rhe hain...???

Ram...kuchh nhi...tum kaisi ho???

Priya...main to theek hu..pr yha kyun hu???

Ram...ek min main doctor ko bulata hu...

Pihu...ap yhi rhiye m bula deti hu...

Ram...han please jaldi...priya tum theek ho na...tum sona nhi yar...m doctor ko abhi bula rha hu

priya...are m theek hu mr.kapoor aap aise kyun kar rhe hain??? Aur aap to london ja rhe the na...

Doctor...mr ram what happen..

Ram...doctor dekhiye priya ko hosh aa gya h...

Doctor...oh very good...hello mrs kapoor...kaisi hain aap???

Priya ..main to theek hu pr mujhe yha kyun rakha h??

Doctor...are kuchh nhi bas aise hi...chhota sa acciedent ho gya tha ab aap theek hain...jyada bate mat kariye...

Priya...par mr.kapoor apne btaya nhi aap to london ja rhe the na

ram...han ja rha tha par gya nhi.:..kaise jata tumhe chhod kar..

Priya...whi to mr.kapoor maine bhi socha ki aap aisa kaise kar sakte hain???apni biwi ko itne bade ghar me akela chhod k ja rhe hain..wo bhi shaadi k dusre din..

Sabhi chaunk jate hain aur ekdusre ko dekhne lagte hain...

To b continue...

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sahana747

@sahana747

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#262

🤗VEENA What a fantastic twistOnly you can do it.

A polarbearwala hug from me.

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aanchal

@LovingRaYa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#263

read last two part

both were good continue soon

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Sakshi Tanwar

@sakshitanwar15

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#264

i hope show me bhi asa hi kuch ho.or ek bar phir se hum log raya ka romance enjoy kre

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shavii

@shavii

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#265

omg loving it btw he din't go to london but us😆 veena maate is back... thank god u brought her in life

varna i would read or comment ur ff 😆

wow iska matllab to bring back her memory they have to start again😲
mean one more c night😳 will love to see that ekta kanjoos nahi deti aap dedoo maaate😆

waiting for raya new beginning baaki sab i din't read because for me raya raya raya and only raya

i don't mind if u want to bring back one more pihu (for me pihu is little amrita and only she can be pihu if pihu name come only her face come in my eyes no other craps) and raya have one more kid😆

continue soon will like this memory lose but i feel priya is pretending😕
these days i have stopped opening new ff as all mein priya is in coma and all other stuff isliye.. they are making good effort i appreciate it but reading it make me more upset 😭 sorry writers if u think i am being rude to u people but it just i am keeping away from crying😭😭😭😭

Edited by shavii - 12 years ago

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Raya_some

@Raya_some

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Posted: 12 years ago

#266

Omg Veena di aapne toh kamaal kar ditta arre yaar itna piche chali gayi .. mene socha accident se pehle wale london visit ke bare me priya keh rhi h .. lekin ye kya ... toh prya sab bhool gayi :0 ..Karwachauth honeymoon reception Cnyt peehu dubai pari myra .. ab kya hoga ... ohh god ab ram ko room ka interior change karna hoga .. lekin itna kuch kaise chupaenge .. Continue soon ... :0

very very soon