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veena singh

@veena23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: vironikajain
Awesome veena..i m speechless..well said i agree with u.. 👍🏼
Bilkul sahi or samjhdari ki baat ki hai..u re a very good person by heart, mind nd nature..i admire ur values..nd i truly mean it...love u 🤗
Agar sab aise sochne lage toh kitna acha ho but alas..iss duniya mein alag alag tarah ke log hai or sabki apni alag soch..kuch sahi kuch galat..yhi duniya hai.. 🤔

Coming to update...its too good...jis tarah se likha hai ki one can feel Ram's pain..every dialogue is superbb especially ending wale.. 👏
Itna acha scene create kiya nd last mein Priya ko jaga diya..i m dying to see something like this in show but i m happy aap hai na...jo waha nhi milega veena ki story se zarur mil jayega..har ehsaas bahot khoobsurati se dikhati ho apni writing ke through..well done 👏
Thank u soo much for this..

hehehe...apna bolna hai jari...sudhrenge sabhi bari bari..😛

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veena singh

@veena23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#252

Ok..aaj thoda jaldi aa gyi...hamesha atka deti hu pr is bar nhi atkaungi...qki main khud super excited hu priya ko hosh me lane aur dekhne k liye...is bar to defnatly m rambabu ko ek senti strong aur samjhdar husband k roop me dekhna chahti hu...pita wo kaise bhi ho pr is bar unki biwi k sath glt hua h to he hv to undrstand...maine socha na tha ki ekta itna uljha k rakh degi sabkuchh...m ye to nhi janti ki ye cheeze sahi kaise hongi pr main ye jarur janti hu ki priya ki is bar glti nhi h to rambabu ko uska sath dena padega...beti nalayak nikal gyi to bechari kya kare??akele pala tha na isiliye gadbad ho gyi...lekin pichhli bar bhi to akele hi pala tha pr tab to bht achhi thi...khair...m abhi pihu ko koi importance nhi dena chahti jab sudhar jayegi tab dekhenge ki uska kya karna h...dekhte hain ekta kya karti h...main jra pati patni ki undrstanding aur bttr kar du...taki beech me bachhe bhi na aa sake..qki bachho ki bhi ek hadh hoti h..wo ma bap k beech me to aa sakte hain par pati patni k beech me to unke liye bhi jagah nhi hoti...aur ye bachho ko pta bhi hona chahiye aur samjhna bhi chahiye...khair...ek aur bat..rambabu ne darling kya keh diya logo k to muh khun lag gya har koi yhi bolta phir rha h...huh jab darling hosh me thi tab darling nhi sherni dikhti h...ab behosh h to bada pyar aa rha h...hattt...

Moving on update hope u all like it...

Part 71...

"last priya k sath kaun tha"

ram priya ki taraf dekh rha hota h priya ram ki taraf ram ko samjh hi nhi aa rha hota h ki react kaise kare...wo ek lambi sans leta h aur kehta h...

Ram...aah priya aaj tumhare "mr.kapoor" k sath tumhare mr.kapoor ki jindgi laut aayi...tum soch bhi nhi m kitni bechaini se ye sunna chahta tha...aaj mujhe tumhari har bechaini bebasi ka ehsah ho rha h to tumne mehsus kiya hoga un salo me jab m tumhare pas nhi tha aur tab bhi jab m tumhare pas to tha par sath nhi tha...

Priya muskurati h aur ankhe band kar leti h...

Ram...priya...priyaaa...kya hua???..dekho meri taraf ...priyaaa...priyaaa.litsen to me damn it...doctor...doctor...doctoooorr

doctor...what happen mr.kapoor aap itna chilla kyun rhe hain??

Ram...doctor dekhiye na ise kya hua??

Doctor...mr.kapoor apko kya hua h???..ap jante to h ki apki patni ki mentle state kya h...phir bhi..

Ram...are m janta hu lekin aap nhi jante abhi usne mujhe mr.kapoor bulaya...

Doctor...kya???

Ram...ham usne ankhe kholi mujhe dekha bat ki muskurayi aur phir se so gyi...please aap kuchh kariye...

Doctor...ok ok let me handle...

Doctor priya ka checkup karta h...use possitive sign dikhta h...

Doctor...mr.kapoor progress to h pr agar hosh me aayi thi to phir se behosh kyun ho gyi...aap ko achhi tarah yad to h na ki unhone ap ka nam liya??

Ram...aap pagal h kya???..ye bhi koi bhulne ya confuse hone wali bat h...main iski dhadkane sun skta hu to m iski kahi hui bat me cnfuse ho sakta hu??? R u gon mad...??

Doctor...sorry mr.kapoor mera ye mtlb nhi tha...main bas ye kehna chah rha tha ki agar to inhone apka nam liya h to iska mtlb inki yaddasht ko kuchh nhi hua h...ab hame in k next movement ka wait karna padega...

Ram...lekin aap kuchh to kariye m isko aur aise nhi dekh sakta yar

doctor...mr.kapoor peteince to apko rakhna hi padega...achha aap mujhe ye btaiye ki inke sath last kaun tha..

Ram...meri beti pihu...kyun??

Doctor...mujhe lagta h shayad wo hamari madad kar payengi...aap unhe yha bulaiye...

Ram...theek h...

Ram priya ko dekhta rhta h...sochta h shayad phir se uth jaye aur use roke le pr...

Doctor...mr.kapoor sab theek ho jayega...please himmat rakhiye...

Ram..7 salo se whi to rakha h...darr lagta h kahin tut na jaye...

Doctr chala jata h..ram ghar wapas ata h..pari aur mayra asusual bhag k uske pas aati hain...bachpan se unhe yhi to seekhaya gya h...lol...qki humne abhi tak yhi dekha h...khair ram unse thodi bate wate karta h...phir wo myra se kehta h ki ..

Ram...myra m kamre me ja rha hu...pihu di kahan h??

Myra...apne room me papa

ram...theek h use mere room me bhej do...

Myra...kya???

Ram...sunayi nhi diya...??..pihu ko mere room me bhej do...

Myra kuchh bol hi nhi pati h...wo pari se kehti h...pari tune bhi whi suna jo mne suna...??

Pari...han

dono bhag k pihu k kamre me jati hain...

Pihu...areee kya kar h tumdono..??...tufan aa gya h kya??

Pari...di lagta to aisa hi h

myra...nahi bhi aya h to shayad ane wala h

pihu...mtlb

myra...pihu di papa ne apko ...apne...kamre me bulaya h

pihu...kya???sachhiii

myra & pari...han di

pihu...pari mayra agr ye koi prank hua na m tumdono ko jinda nhi chhodungi...

Myra ...cmon di hamari itni himmat ki apse jhuth bole wo bhi papa k bare me...sawal hi nhi uthta...

Pari...han di m waqt se pehle m marna nhi chahti

pihu...shutup pari...yeeesss...m abhi papa se milke aati hu...

Pihu ekdm excited hokar bhagkar ram k room me jati hai aur uske gale lag jati h.ram bhi use pyar se gale lagata h aur forhead pr kiss karta h..

pihu...thank u thank u thanku sooo much papa

ram muskurata h...

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Mahi78

@Mahi78

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Posted: 12 years ago

#253

Thank u fr the PM dear, will comeback after reading.😉

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cloud121

@cloud121

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Posted: 12 years ago

#254

😲😲😲
dii aaj suraj kha se nikala ???
aap ka update etni jaldi 😲
hehehehe...
lovely update...
ye dr. to ram babu ko ghanchakkr samjh raha hai...
are priya ji ki awaj sunu hai tabhi to bulaya...
ab ye peehu bhi aa jaaegi to priya ji jakdi theek ho jaaegi
continue soon !!!!!
thanks for pm dii🤗

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Malati

@bpatil3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#255

Arre yaar mera inbox bahot khush hua hai aaaj bade dino baad aapki pm mili hai. Thx.
Veena sach kaha pati patni k beech bacche bhi nahi aa sakte isss baat ko practically mein daily apne ghar mein dekhti hoon. Mere dad ko agar humne kuch keh diya ya tease kiya to my mom always will be by his side. Sometimes even if he doesn't do properly or doesn't handle properly meri maa toh jaise toot hi padti hai hum pe. Hum unke patidev kuch nahi keh sakte . She doesn't like it.

Fir se atka diya yaar veena rambabu k saath humein bhi.
Wo rambabu wala dialog must hai where he talks abt not being by her side when she needs him the most n his hurt feelings so touchy. Loved the dialog to the core.

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lpsakshi

@lpsakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#256

tum bhi na bts ki tarah suspens me rakh diya any way nice one

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sahana747

@sahana747

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#257

Ram...darling Kya hua ? You are dumbstruck.maine tho kuch nahin kaha?

Me...oh Teri...sorry..aapne kuch nahin kiya, par Veena..

RAM...Hatt. Wapas shuru ho gayi?

Me..nahin ,woh PM karna shuru kar diya.

Ram..oh, tho chup chap pad aur mujhe iPad de de.

Me...waise BALH serial jaise AAJ kyun likh Dali? Khair.laghtha hai kuch toofaan aane wala hai. Thank you Bol doon?

Ram...ye bhi mujhe hi poochoge? kar do. Meri tarafse bhi .Likhthi hai Badi kamaal ki.

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Advitha

@Sakshiram

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#258

Veena di its nice update thnks for the pm

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#259

Veena tum thik toh ho na 😲 itni jaldi update or upar se PM bhi aaj toh..kya baat hai.. 😆 lagta hai bahot khush ho..hehehe
That husband wife ke bich koi nhi asakta wala dialogue 👏 nd rambabu ka darling wala dialogue 🤣..awesome..

Yeh kya kiya Priya ko jagakar phir sula diya.. 😲 haha..chalo ab toh jaldi jag hi jayegi...
Rambabu ke dialogues mast the..realization wale part mein..too good.. 👏
Show mein aisa kuch kyun nhi ata.. 😕
Ab yeh Pihu ka kya naya natak hai..sab aise kyun behave kar rhe the... 😳 kaha atka diya..
Thanx for pm..

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veena singh

@veena23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#260

Originally posted by: sahana747
Ram...darling Kya hua ? You are dumbstruck.maine tho kuch nahin kaha?
Me...oh Teri...sorry..aapne kuch nahin kiya, par Veena..
RAM...Hatt. Wapas shuru ho gayi?
Me..nahin ,woh PM karna shuru kar diya.
Ram..oh, tho chup chap pad aur mujhe iPad de de.
Me...waise BALH serial jaise AAJ kyun likh Dali? Khair.laghtha hai kuch toofaan aane wala hai. Thank you Bol doon?
Ram...ye bhi mujhe hi poochoge? kar do. Meri tarafse bhi .Likhthi hai Badi kamaal ki.

hehehe...superlyke🤗