Park Wala Love - Arakshi OS-Part2 added Page 1-End

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

it was nice and cute park vaala love and and last line from arjun is too cute...

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

woaho...this was HOT...!!!

awsm OS...loved it dear...

sorry for late commenting...

i wish u'd continued it...

write more...such OS...

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Jab bhi aati ho Dhamaka saath lekar aati ho😎

Pehle Angry wala ab Park wala☺️☺️☺️☺️

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ishita

@IshitaRocks015

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

nyc os!!!!

i m lterally sppeeecchhlless!!

so plz dnt mind d short comment...

samajh nai a rha kya bolu!!😳

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

hi tina🤗... awesome 😉... tumhare dimaag mein idea aaya kahaan se😉😆... arakshi☺️

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littlebrat

@littlebrat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

HOOOHOOO ... I am all the way in heaven... yeh kya tha tina...

arjun in this wild avatar... well written boss... saakshi ke toh chakke hi choot gaye ... wildly romantic...

arjun is so much desperately in love with sakshi...or this park wala romance was a slip of moment or rather carving for female body...😕 jo bhi hua ha ha hotness se temperature high kardiya...☺️😆 awesome

and his last line hum shaadi karlege...that cracked me up... poora kand kardiya woh bhi public place mein and then asking her to just chill...this is rawte istyle truely... once you hook by your ownself but unhooked only when he is done with you...😳😉

thanks for the treat tina... show ka toh pata nahi...bas apni soch ki kite udate hain😆

keep writing ...

Edited by littlebrat - 12 years ago

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Geeta

@Geeta.R

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Wooow diii! Loved the part where arjun said "Trying to ruffle you a little," he murmured darkly. "You're too neat to seem like we were necking here."
I found that too funny hehehehe arjun bhi na

Aur baaki jo bhi hua aiii hiii mein to tamatar ho gayi :-)

Well done on this OS XX

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Oh my!

Arjun was reacting to his most basest instincts. He just gave into lust. Even though marriage is the right thing , the situation Arakshi is in is so not right. Arjun doesn't have a clue about his feelings while Sakshi is so deeply gone in hers.

Brilliant job Tina.

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Sanjana

@SweetSassy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

The way i have heard about Vidya di's story...i have even heard a lot about u too dear...i can't tell u that after reading this OS i am literelly sweating such a hot OS...OMG... really a big applause for such a hawt stroy 😳😳 ...frm now on i promise before reading ur story...i will surely seat with a hankey and a ice-cold water bottle...uff...sach hi maar dala 🤢🤢 i had not expect that Arjun will start anything that too in a park...and after doing...behaving so normal 😕...i will be just waiting 4 ur anoth update in this OS with a hankey & water bottle 😉😉