Bholi bhabi and Pagal devar...llOSll

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this is my new os on ayaan and zoya...this is the result of never ending boring weekend...

Zoya is very restless.its 2'oclock at night still sleep is faraway from zoya.zoya was tired of thinking.her only hope left is her rabert.without even noticing the time zoya called ayyan.

Z:Hello rabert...ayaan felt panicked receiving a call at that time.

A:mona...is everything alright?is bhaijaan ok?

Z:everything is fine rabert...

A:thank god,then whydid u call me at this time?

Z:Oh sorry ayaan..i don't mean to disturb you..its something very important..can you meet me at coffeeday tomorrow?

A:sure mona darling...no need to say sorry...

Coffee shop:

A:kya baat hai mona?achanak mere yaad ayi?

Z:Woh..kya haina...i ...I am in love.

A:What?love...with me???how can you?you know that I love humeira...

Z:Shut up ayaan...how can I love u?am I that stupid?

A:What do u mean?

Z:I don't mean that ayaan...I love someother person and need your help...

A:Who is that poor guy?

Z:I am the poor one in this case and he is akdu,arrogant and whatnot...

A:Will you tell me his name or shall I leave?

Z:He is your bahijaan said zoya peeping at ayaan opening one eye...

A:Bhaijaan aur aap??kabse?kaise??mujhe abhitak nahi pata... main bhaijaan se poochungi...

Z:Wait...he doesn't know..i need your help for this...you know that my visa is expiring in ten more days. i came to know that my father is no more.now I don't even have a reason to extend my visa...

A:So..you have to find out whether bhaijaan loves you and I have to help you...don't worry mona darling,rabert is at your service...you confess him directly,if he accepts well and good.

Z:If he doesn't?

A:Whats the difference..you will be leaving in ten days..

Z:Yeah..ok I will try it tomorrow...

A:I will meet you at night..and you have to tell me wahat happened..ok?

Z:Ok..bye..

That evening:

Zoya went to asad's room with his favourite black coffee.he signalled her to keep it on side table.zoya started to speak her heartout without looking at him.after ten minutes she heard asad calling her...ms farooqui..do u want anything?why are you waiting?

Z:Waiting...didn't you hear what I spoke just now?

AS:No..i was on a call listening to prasad...

Z:Nothing mr khan..i was just thinking about the tickets...

AS:Oh don't worry ,I will book them for you...I will book tickets for the earliest posssible flight...

Z:I will be very greatful mr khan..zoya spoke sarcastically and left the room banging the door...

Asad sighed and continued his work...

Night,zoya's rooom:

A:What happened mona darling?or should I call you bhabi?

Zoya explained the whole thing.dont worry..such things happen...why don't you try another time?

Z:No..i can no more talk about this matter directly...

A:Ok darling..we will go for plan 2...

Zoya excitedly listened to his plan..they hified eachother and ayaan left her room.

Next night at zoya's room:

A:Hey mona..whatsup?

Z:Plan 2 failed...

A:But how?

Z:You told me to prepare his faurite chocolate cake ..right...it came out perfectly...

A:Then ?

Z:i thought of dressing it with powdered sugar..but instead of sugar I dusted it with salt.

A:Then?

Z:what then..i cant even explain the expressio on your bj's face..

Ayyan too felt diasppointed but assured zoya.we will try another plan,I have many in my head..you know I helped many of my friends and all were successful...they bid gud bye and ayan left praying god to help zoya..

Next night at zoya's room;

A:Mona...haha...whats that on your nose??is it a cherry??are you playing for any fancy dress??

Z:Does it look like a cherry?its my b***y nose...its all because of your idiot plan...

A:My plan?it never fails...tell me in detail..

Z:You told me to act as I was about to fall and your bj will catch me..eyelock..proposal..

A:Yeah..how romantic...but how did it failed?

Z:I tripped on the carpet but at that time some idiot called your bj .he turned to attend his call and I felldown flat on my nose..and this is the result...hahaha...sorry...but bj had helped you in getting up,so u still had a chance at that time right...

Z:Yeah..he gave his hand but in my effort to get uo I pulled his hand more and he fell down and you can expect what happened next...a long and boring lecture...

Ayaan could no more control his laughter rolled on the floor...mona you are impossible...only to get a slap from zoya...

A:This plan never fails...you try to be close to another man.if bj loves you he feels jealous and act possesive.i will send my friend to help you.

Next night

A:what happened mona..you took long time to open the window?

Zoya sat calmy with her head bent down...

A:Don't say that this plan too failed...zoya noded her head and answered to his questioning glare.before I satrted talking to your friend some giirl dressed in a saree came to him.seeing their closeness I shoted at her for no reason...later I came to know that she is your bj's employee and you can understand what happened next...

A:Cant you think for a while ?see what the result...ok don't get upset,you stil have time..we will think over it...

A:This is an excellent plan..but risky.you take bj to a place faraway from the city making an excuse.you stop him somewhere for tea.at that time I will empty the fuel tank.there will be noone to disturb you..may be bj himself will make a move..lets try...

Their plan worked better than what theyhad thought.asad and zoya stayed in a cottage as it rained at that time...

Next day at coffee shop:

A:Bhabi..seems you had a great time in cottage alone..in a rainy weather??

Z:Do u think zoya is that lucky??

Ayaan sighed aloud in frustration...this is fifth plan mona..even this did not worked?but how?

Z:Don't know ayaan.everything is fine till we ate the pakodas I bought from the tea stall where you emptied the fuel.but I don't remember what happened next..we woke in the morning to findourselves sleeping on sofa...

A:On sofa??wow...I thought it will be just a confession but you both of you did more than what I thought...

Z:Shutup you perverted mind...nothing of that sort...we slept on different sofas...

A:I think you both were drugged...cant u stay without eating for some time..zoya is already angry on herself.ayaan made her condition more worse.she poured all the coffee on him and left the place...

That night in zoya's room

A:Zoya I have another plan in my mind...if it fails no one can help you...i am sure it will be successful.but before that you have to promise me that you will not kill me.now humeira is not willing to see my ugly fave..its all because of you..you hit me that hard,daily with a different object...

Z:Don't blame me..what mre can I do..you have to bear as the plans are yours..now tell me...

Ayaan moved to the window away from zoya and spoke...seduce my bj...

Z:What??zoya spat the coke on ayaan which she was drinking...what do you think of me??

A:Don't get me wrong...maintain diatance and seduce...

Z:How??i don't know...

Ayaan banged his head on thw window.allahmiya...see y situation.how can I explain such athings to my bhabhi...He turned away and closed his eyes tight and spoke...wear a sexy saree with deep cut blouse and..he ran away...zoya buried her head in her pillow shyly thinking abot what ayaan said.

Next night in zoya's room

A:Mona...bhaijaan theek to haina?kaise rahogi tujhe aisa dekhne ke baad?

Zoya did not respond to ayaan .so he confirmed that this plan was a failed too.

A:But how mona??is bj ok..i mean is he hormonally challenged?no men can resist seeing a women like that...but bj,he defintely had a problem..i am sure of it..

Z:Nothing like that ayaan...

A:That means...mona...wow..you succeeded...yeah...

Z:Don't get excited...as soon as I entered his room ther is a powercut and to my luck the generator too did not work...ayaan couldnot decide whther to laugh or cry...after some silence ayaan spoke...

Asad came out of his room to drink water and heard noises from zoya's room.he went there and opened the door slightly .the sene shockes him.zoya sat on the bed with her head down as if she was crying and ayaan sat on a chair beside her.consoling...he stayed there and tried to hear their convo.

A:Zoya don't worry..you still had time.we will work again.

Z:no ayaan..no more plans...everything failed..i don't want to try anymore...no zoya...they failed because of mistakes and he explained the cause for failure..its more of assuring zoya...

Asad heard all their plans.he could no more stand there and retired back to his room.

Z:Ayaan..i was wrong in assuming that your bj loves me..i am a fool to think so...its proved that I am not the kind of girl your bj likes.i am sorry ayaan I made you to do all these and sorry for hurting you...anyways I will be leaving in three more days..and both of you can stay in peace..

A:Don't say that mona..you are my friend..dont think of yourself so low..you are a gem...one should be lucky to have you in their life...shall I speak to bj??

Z:No ayyan..leave the matter...things will never work for me...its my fate that's it..ok I am sleepy,we will talk tomorrow.zoya spoke controlling her tears...

Ayaan felt bad seeing her ...zoya u are my best friend.i will be there for you always ,saying these he left her room.zoya cried whole night and fall asleep finally.

Asad's room

Zoya too loves me...and she tried althose to gather my attention?how fool I am not to recognise her efforts?doesn't she know I love her?cant she notice in my eyes?how can she if I pretend to be angry at her?which fool will buy his love tickets to move away from him?i should do something before its late...he slept thinking what and how to slove the issue..

Asad did not see zoya the whole day,not even at dinner.but he did not have courage to ask his mother.so he left to his room without having dinner.latenight asad saw zoya in the garden , went to her and sat beside her.at the same time ayaan came to meet zoya.seeing asad he hid behind the bushes .

AS:Ms farooqui...what are you doing here at this time?

Z:You came here to taunt me?dont worry mr khan..i am leavinh in two days and ther will be no one to disturb you..she tried to leave the place..

AS:No ms farooqui..i didn't mean that...

Z:Oh then what?wait..you came here to say that I should never come to india again?dont worry.i will never ever come here...

Asad couldnot tolerate anymore as zoya is not letting him speak...zoya..will you please listen what am I sayng??zoya turned towards him listening to his voice.she felt some thing different the way he spoke...its almost like pleading...

AS:Will you stay here forever? Spend your life with me?share my happiness and sorrows?

Zoya could not believe her own ears...am I dreaming?is he mr khan?what is he asking?to confirm herself she pinched asad...

AS:Ouch...what are you doing??

Z:Oh..this is not a dream...allah miya..mr khan proposed me..yippie...she jumped in joy and hugged him...pagal ladki,muttered asad and hugged her...

Ayyan too jumped out as he can no more stay there silently.he ran towards them and screamed...

A:Bj..app...mona se..i mean...congrats bj...congrats mona..i cannot say how happy I am right now...

AS:So ayyan and zoya...I think there is no need to make another stupid plan..am I right?

Plan??zoya and ayaan spoke at the same time and looked at eachother..

Asad left the place smirking leaving devar and bhabi which stood there with mouths agape.



how do u like it??feel free to hit me with anything you like...

but do leave a feedback whatever you feel...sorry for mistakes..i haven't checked it..feeling sleepy...

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lakshmi...

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Aww love this 😳 love rabbart-mona's dosti
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i just loved it awsum work
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Loving dis mona raabert relationship. .a pure frndshp. ..
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Loved it
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Loved the Rabert Mona relationship...
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Originally posted by: iqii

Aww love this 😳 love rabbart-mona's dosti


thanks dear...
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Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

i just loved it awsum work


thanks a lot...😊

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