ANSH NEW FF TUM HI HO.. part 2b(b) new updt pg 6 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: maahi11



I'll update as sun as possible...


but when...its getting too late..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: HemaG



but when...its getting too late..



by Sunday for sure
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
I m sry guys I knw I hve a pending update to give... from a long time... bt due to some personal problems I cannot update... bt I will definitely try to update as sun as possible...

I m very sry...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: maahi11

I m sry guys I knw I hve a pending update to give... from a long time... bt due to some personal problems I cannot update... bt I will definitely try to update as sun as possible...

I m very sry...


pls update soon...feel like i ll forgot the story when u'd update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

"bhaiya mujhe nahi pata tha aapka payaar namkeen hai"

Shiv didn't understand what Mahi meant and asks matlab'

"bhabhiji yeh chai kaise pee rahi hai aap, ismay chini nahi namak hai"

Everyone unanimously says namak... Shiv was shocked that how is it possible... So tastes himself and spits the same...

"Lagta hai mane galtise chini ki jagah namak dal diya hai, par Anandi aap yeh chai kaise pee rahi thi"

Before Anandi could say anything Mahi interfere and says arre bhaiya aapne itne payaar say chai banai thi ki bhabhiji kuch kahe nahi pai, kyu bhabhiji hai na'

Anandi blushes hard but couldn't say anything... Seeing Anandi like this Alok teases "mujhe kahe rahi thi Shiv say kuch sikhane kay liye, tumhe kuch apni bahu say sikhana chaiye no complains at all"

Every one had a healthy laugh and latter this was decided what to do next... So it decided they all visit Dilwara temple and then go for boating at Nakki Lake and places near them... As decided everyone leaves for Dilawara temple after paying visit to this beautiful monument everyone leaves for Nakki lake it's a famous lake but its beauty enhances more after sunset till then they visited near by places like Turtle rock and Toad road on a hill near Nakki Lake... it was about to sunset and admiring the beautiful surrounding they all headed towards Nakki lake for boating... all the couples except Ghena and Vasant were allotted two sitter boats and rest were in a one boat...

Ansh were sitting and boating in a two sitter duck shaped boat and mostly where the other two couples were paddling hard Ansh were lost in each other and remembering their time in Kashmir when they were going near Shikara... it was very peaceful and lovely view and the couple was blessed remembering their precious and the most memorable moments of their life... Anandi as usual kept her head on Shiv's shoulder and their hand in hand (and in the background Chudhury was playing)

"Thanks Anandi"

"thanks kisliye Shiv"

"aapne mujhe world ka best gift diya hai may yeh birthday kabhi bhi nahi bhulunga, thank you once again"

"thanks kisliye Shiv may tho aapko wahi lautane ki koshish kar rahi hui jo aapne mujhe diya hai, (seeing the blank expression of Shiv Anandi understood he dint got) dhare sara payaar, I Love You Shiv, I love you very very much"

"par Anandi mujhe aapse kuch aur bhi chaiye"

"kya???"

"char, panch, payaare payaare bache"

Anandi gets shocked and horror on her face was visible she says "Shiv char panch bache"

And Shiv very innocently says "kyu kam hai, mujhe chae ya saath bache bhi chalenge"

"Shivvv"

Anandi took Shiv's name in such a manner that everyone's attention shifted to them...

"Kya baat hai Anandi beta tum itni zor say kyu chilla rahi tum dono theek hona" inquired Ira

"haan Ma hum bilkul theek hai" and they both came near to the end point where everyone were reaching one by one...

As the reached Meenu asked them "kya hua Anandi tum itni zor say Shiv ka naam kyu pakura"

"Ha Anandi aapne itni zor say mera naam kyu liya"

"kuch nahi Choti Ma who who who, ha who"

"Bhabhiji who who who say bhi aage badiye" says Maahi

"who mujhe laga boat misbalance ho rahi hai, isliye mane inka naam itni zor say pukara"

"oh mujhe laga zayad bhaiya aapko parshan kar rahe the"

"Maahi mare pass aur bhi kam hai karne kay liye"

"really bhaiya, tho parso subha kya ho raha tha, sabko bata du"

"Shut up Maahi warna tari naye phone ki application reject kar dunga"

Mahi instantly gets quite everyone sits near the lake for a while and then then goes back to their farm house... after reaching everyone retires to their rooms after resting a while they all enjoy dinner and plan a bonfire where they all played anktakshiri and everyone danced near the bonfire and spend their night till late as next day both the families will heading towards their respective homes...

Next morning after having breakfast both the families leaves for Jaitsar and Udaipur...

"do din kaise beet gaye pata hi nahi chala" says dadisa,

"Theek kaha aapne kalyaniji, dono parivaro ko aise aksar aise miljul kar picnic pay anna chahiye"

"ha samdhisa aap bilkul theek bolo ho, acha ab agya dijiye"

Days passed away everyone were back to their routine one fine day Anandi asked Shiv for accompanying her for shopping...

"Shiv aaj aap free hai"

"aapke liye tho may free hi free hui, kaheye kya baat hai"

"mane socha kyu na aaj aapki pocket dili ki jaye"

"matlab"

"may soch rahi thi shopping kay liye"

"shopping haa mujhe kuch suits khareedne hai aapne liye"

bilkul nahi'

"kyu may aapko suits may achi nahi lagti"

Shiv cluthes Anandi's face in his hand and says "aap mujhe har chiz may achi lagti hai, chahe who suits, ya lhanga ordni ya phir saree (Anandi was feeling Shy when hi further continues) aur sabse zada achi tho aap mujhe nitie may lagti hai (Hearing this Anandi blushes more) waise aapko yaad hai na humare chae saat bacho kay bare may"

"Shiv"

"Anandi kitne baje chalna hai"

"jab aap free ho"

"theek hai may ghardi bhej dunga aur ha hum lunch bahar karenge"

In the afternoon Ansh went for lunch and shopping while crossing a path their car halted at a signal where Ansh were busying chatting in the next car Gauri was sitting with two other people...

TBC

Plz dont forget to hit like and give ur valuable suggestions and comments

Edited by maahi11 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
nce update...😊
upate sooon waiting for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
nice...
after a very long time u have updated
waiting for ur next update
update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
nice update...
well good to see how gauri will intract with them



plzzz PM me when u update nxt part😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Very nice update i mostly liked shiv asking about kids.Next update don't take much time plz update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Chinmay92

Very nice update i mostly liked shiv asking about kids.Next update don't take much time plz update soon.

thank u but ill try real hard to post to update as sun as posible...

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