ANSH NEW FF TUM HI HO.. part 2b(b) new updt pg 6

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Hello Guys, this is our 1st FF :-) ... Our means (mine and Parul's). Hope you all like it, because of the present boring track we thought to treat the fans of Ansh with sum relief and also this is something which we all wanted to see but Yadav ji (The Director) and Purnendu Shekhar (The writer) is busy in something else ;-) which we don't want to see so till then hopefully you all enjoy this :-D .

TUM HI HU

Ansh room

Anandi in her room cleaning her room and have to put some extra efforts, because of the mess her dear hubby have done while her stay in Jaitsar :/ While cleaning the desk her eyes stick upon the date of calendar :o ,,,, it was 25th June today and after 4 days its Shiv's birthday :)

"Uff yeh Shiv bhi na pura kamra upper se niche kar ke rakh diya :/ !!!! thode dinno ke liye bahar kya gayi aur pura kamra bekhar deya, koi bhi chiz apni jagah par nhi hai, sab theek karna padega o.O ", saaf karte karte anandi ki nazar calendar pe gayi, aaj 25th June hai yani char din ke baad Shiv ka janamdin hai :) .
"hey bagwan,,,, mujhe yaad hi nahi raha ki Shiv ka janamdin aa raha hai, ghar ki uljhano mein bhul hi gayi :o Shiv ka phela janamdin hai humari shaadi ke baad, mujhe kuch khas karna chahiye, jo hume hamesha yaad rhe, par kya ^_^ ??" sochte sochte,,,, hmm yeh theek rahega (y) .
Shekher's in the Hall
Next day, after breakfast Shiv leaves for office and Mahi makes everyone remember about shiv's birthday.

Mahi "Aap sabku yaad bhi hai ki 3 din baad kya hai ;) ???... Kyun bhabhi aapko yaad hai na" :P ????

Anandi shyly say "haa yaad hai" :)

"Chalo acha hai kisi ko tho bhaiya ka birthday yaad hai, so kya plan hai aapka ???? after all bhabhiji yeh bhaiya ka 1st birthday hai aap dono ki shaadi ke baad" ;)

CM interferes and says "Mahi kyu pareshan kar raha hai Anandi ku"!!! o.O

Everybody gets excited at this 8) ...

Daadu "Par baat tho isne theek kahi... Shiv ka birthday aa raha hai kuch khaas karna chaiye" =D

Saachi excitedly says "Kyu na ek surprise party de" O:-)

Mahi "Nahi Saachi who pichele saal dadiji ne Shiv bhaiya ke liye de thi!!! -_- iss saal phir, kafi monotonous ho jayega" :/

Ira- "Surprise party na sahi par, party tho ho hi sakti hai na, aakhir itne saalo baad Shiv aapna birthday hum sab ke saath maneyga :) , sare friends aur well-wishers ko bulaengaye :) kya khayal hai tumhara Anandi" ;)

"Ma mujhe lagta hai party ki jagha,,,, kyu na sirf family hi ho, abhi aapne kaha na ki Shiv kafi saalo baad aapna janamdin app sabke saath maneygaye :) , tho kyu na sirf family hi ho... taki yeh birthday hame hamesha yaad rhe =D , party mein sab aayege aur hum sab sab ki khatir dari mein busy ho jayenge :/ isse acha hum sab picnic pe ya fir dinner pe chalet hai, ya phir ghar mein kuch karte hai jo hum sabko hamesha yaad rahe" =D

"didi Anandi bilkul theek kahe rhi hai, kyu na hum sab picnic pe chale :) aur Jaitsar se Singh family ko bhi invite kar le J akhir who bhi humare parivaar ka hi hissa hai o.O "

"Tho theek hai fir yeh tay raha ki hum sab Shiv ke birthday par picnic par jayege" !!!! 8) announced by dadu.

"Maa agar ghar par koi kaam nhi hai , tho mein market ja sakti hu kya" ^_^ asked by Anandi..

"Bhabhi kya hum bhi aapke sakta chal sakte hai :P ,,,, koi problem tho nahi hai na... aapko Saanchi aur mere company mein...

"Nahi Mahi bhaiya mujhe koi problem nahi hai", ^_^ all the three left for shopping.

Rest two days went in the preparation of the picnic,,,, as it was decided that both the families will go to Khelwada (a tourist place near Udaipur) =D ... Everyone was excited for the picnic but Anandi was excited about the surprise she have planned for Shiv O:)

On 28th June it was 10:15 in the night and Anandi have to go to room and decorate the same before Shiv goes inside ^_^ ... but how to stop him :v then she tricked something ;) once she heard about the Chess game between Shiv and Mahi and also heard they take this game very seriously, Anandi thought this would be the best way to stop Shiv from entering into the room O:) . Everyone was in the hall room, about to leave for the night as next day they have to leave early for the Picnic spot :) .

When suddenly Anandi said "Mahi bhaiya meine sunna hai ki aap humesha Shiv se Chess mein haar jate hai" :P

"Bhabhiji aapko koi kushfami hue hai ,,,,, mein nahi wo Shiv bhaiya hai jo hamesha harte hai" ;)

"Acha par meine to sunna tha !!! ki aap hamesha harte ho ;) yeh baat hai tho jeet ke dekhao Shiv se to manungi" ;)

Suddenly Mahi gets up and asks "Shiv bhaiya kyu na aaj chess ki ek game ho jaye 8) , Anandi bhabhi ko galatfami ho gayi hai =D ki mein aapse hamesha chess mein harta hu" :/

"Mahi tho ismay galtafami ki kya baat hai, sach hi tho hai" =D

"bhaiya galatfami mujhe nahi !! aapko hai 8) , so kyu na aaj yeh prove ho hi jaye ki kon jitta hai aur kon harta hai" O:)

"Dekh Mahi mein bahut thak gaya hu -_- hum kabhi aur khelenge" ^_^

"Bhaiya saaf saaf bol dejiye na ki aap haar gaye ho, 8) ismay bahane banana ki kya zarurt hai" :P

"Mein bahana nhi bana raha hu :/ chal theek hai, ek ek game ho jaye" :)

Everyone who were about to go to their respective rooms decides to stays there. CM, daddu and Saachi supported Shiv :) meanwhile Ira, Alok and Nathu supported Mahi :) .

As Anandi was about to go on Shiv's side :v suddenly Mahi grabs Anandi's :o and says

"Bhabhi mere team mein !!! bhabhi mere team mein !!! Please bhabhi aap mere side" =D

Seeing this everyone starts laughing =D,,,, Anandi gets embarrassed o.O and Shiv gets paranoid >:( , Shiv interfere and says "Mahi let Anandi decide ki unnhe kise support karna hai" :)

"Bhaiya aap hum devar bhabhi ke bich mein mat aaio" ;)

Seeing this her plan of keeping Shiv out of room getting flopped due to this stupid fight... o.O

She says "Don't worry Mahi bhaiya mein aapki hi side mein hu :/ " but while saying this Anandi with her eyes told Shiv she was always on his side <3

The game started and everyone was keeping a close watch, Nathu was send to prepare coffee for everyone, Shekher's really took the game very seriously :o no body was allowed to make noise, Anandi thought this was the best way to go from here as no body will pay attention, she excused herself telling she have to inform dadisa about certain thing to carry for the picnic :)

Ansh room

Anandi goes to her room and thinks "Shiv aaj tak hamesha aapne mujhe surprise diya hai, aaj mere bari hai, umeed karti hu ki aapko mera surprise pasand aayega" :) <3 Anandi complets all the preparations in her room, it was 11:15 and still 45 minutes to go for Shiv's birthday :)

Anandi thought the game will run long and by the time it ends she should change and wear saree ,,,,, as she is about to change she heard everyone was clapping (y) and congratulating Shiv on his success =D . With that everyone went to there room and while Shiv was coming to his room Anandi stopped him in between :o ...

Ansh on the stairs

"Shiv aap andar nhi ja sakta" ;)

"aur wo kyu? :o " amazed at Anandi's encounter...

"Kyuki, kyuki, ha kyuki mujhe icecream khani hai" ;)

"Anandi aapko is saamy ice cream khani hai"???? :/

"Haa aapki jeet ki, after all aap Mahi bhaiya se jeet jo gaye, isliye, ab chaliye" :)

"Anandi mein bahut thak gaya hu >:( !!! kal chale, please" :(

"Kamal hai Shiv ice cream khaane ka mera maan aaj kar rha hai, aur aap kal khilange, ye acha hai =D ... chaliye na please" Anandi made a bechara face :/ , and seeing this Shiv have agree for what his wifey is asking for :) ..

Shiv haste hue "Anandi meine aapko phele kabhi aise nahi dekha, itna filmy, theek hai chalte hai =D , mein car ki keys aur volet room se le kar aata hu" :)

Anandi says "theek hai shiv" :) and suddenly gets alarmed on realizing Shiv going inside the room :o and shouts 'RUKIYE' -_- Shiv asks ' what happened' ? :/

'Mera matlab hai aap rukiye mein le kar aati hu aapki keys aur volet' ;)

'Anandi mein le aaunga' :P

'Maine kaha na mein le kar aati hui :/ aapka kya barosa aap room mein gaye ,,,, aur aapka mood badal gaya to ;) isliye mein le kar aati hu' :P

Shiv was shocked :o hearing this and says "Anandi kya aap mere baare meine aisa sochti hai' ???? o.O

"Nahi aisa to nahi sochti, par kab kon kaise badal jaye pata thodi na chalta hai ;) !!! hai na Shiv, tho aap chaliye mein car ki keys aur volet le kar aati hu" :)

Shiv was amazed as what he just heard :o and went down near in the hall. While going out CM see Shiv and asks where he is going at this hour. :P

"Arre Shiv kaha ja rahe ho iss samay?" :P

'Wo CM mujhe aur Anandi ko neend nahi aa rhi thi ;) tu socha ki ice cream kha aaye, don't worry hum jaldi aa jayege' :)

"Iss samay icecream :/ theek hai par jaldi aana" :)

'don't worry CM hum jaldi aa jayege' greets her greets her good night. :)

Anandi and Shiv as per Anandi's wish went to have ice cream but whole her way back to KB she was looking at the watch ;) she had made the point that they came back before 12, while Shiv was parking the car in the garage she went no actually ran to there room for the last minute preparation and was now was waiting for her hubby to come :)

On the way back to their room Shiv was thinking what has happened to Anandi why is she behaving so differently ;) and while thinking this he opens the door of his room and get dumb strucked :o

feel free to comment and suggest dis is my n my friends 1st attempt we hope u guys like it...
Tum hi ho...
Part 1a - pg 1
part 1b - pg 2
Part 2a -pg2
Part 2b(a) - Pg 3
Part 2b(b) - Pg 6

Edited by maahi11 - 12 years ago

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libsrocks thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really good and plz continue...can you plz make the font bigger...it's straining for eyes to read such small fonts 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: libsrocks

really good and plz continue...can you plz make the font bigger...it's straining for eyes to read such small fonts 😊

have done it... n thnks for ur suggestions... and do keep telling me,,,
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Posted: 12 years ago
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SUPERB MAAHI...👏👏

a refreshing ff...😊⭐️

please continue soon...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start to the story. Please do continue.
Even I was looking forward to some birthday celebration in BV but at present they are busy with wedding planning so they forgot it was Shiv's birthday.
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superb start plz continue it
update soon
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Very nice start.
Pls continue😊
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For a first timer, it's really good.

Loved this idea of Anandi making special plans for Shiv's birthday.
Wish this happens in BV too.
Well done, Maahi. Do continue😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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on shiv's bday we r posting anandi's surprise for shiv

Part -1b of TUM HI HU

Ansh in their room

Pata nahi aaj Anandi ko kya ho gaya hai itna different kyu behave kar rahi hai :/ Anandi aaj kuch alag 😲 '. before he could say further he was surprised by the way the room was decorated 😲

The floor was covered with balloons of red and white color,,,,,, all the corners of the room was decorated with ❤️ red roses ❤️ ❤️ ❤️scented candles ❤️ soft romantic music ❤️ in the background was playing and in the center was a ❤️ birthday cake with candles glowing ❤️ and with that was standing ❤️ ❤️ Anandi looking splendid in the net white saree and minimal make and jewellery ❤️ ❤️ the whole ambience was so pretty and so romantic ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️importantly to be noted the ambience was not pretty because Anandi had decorated the room in such a way,,,,,, but it was because of the love she wanted to show to her husband, her man, her life this was not because it was Shiv's birthday, because showing your love for your partner doesn't required any occasion ,,,, but still she wanted to do this to rectify all her mistakes she have done, yes!!!, her mistakes of not understanding the love and commitment Shiv gave her, last year when on this day dadisa proposed Shiv for Anandi and that time she didn't do anything for her man infact the very next day she shouted at Shiv, she also decorated the room in such a way just to complete what was left incomplete months back, when Shiv,,,,, her husband decorated the room and she due to her insecurities her hesitation of accepting the happiness stopped her yes the 2nd night of there marriage'. These and many other small small happiness which she could not give to Shiv, though Shiv have never complained but now she have decided to give Shiv that love and affection back, and today was the stepping stone 😊

Shiv came inside keeping his eyes completely on Anandi as he was mesmerized :o by the beauty of his wife ... He very well knew Anandi is beautiful and he had often said her but today she looks stunning... she was out of the world 😛 😊

As Shiv came near,,,, Anandi sang for him yes sang for him ❤️

Happy Birthday to you,

Happy Birthday to you,

Happy Birthday,

Happy Birthday,

Happy Birthday to Shiv 😊 ❤️

Shiv couldn't take his eyes off Anandi 😊

'Shiv kya hua 😳 ????? aap mujhe aise kyu dekh rhe hai 😳 aur chup kyu hai... kuch bol kyu nahi rahe, Shiv'. Shiv'. Shiv, boliye na kya hua' 😳 😃!!!!

'Wo actually, mein samjh nahi pa raha hu ki aap zada kubsurat lag rahi hai ya phir yeh kamra' 😉

Anandi was blushing hearing this and shyly said 'aap bhi na Shiv, chaliye ab jaldi se cake katiye' 😃

Shiv cut the cake and made Anandi eats it and vice versa, Anandi again wished Shiv happy birthday 😊 ❤️

Shiv seeing everything says "Anandi mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha ki yeh sab aapne mere liye kiya hai"

Hearing this Anandi says 'Nahi Shiv meine yeh aapke liye thodi na kiya balki bagal wale Malhotra uncle kay liye kiya hai' 😉 ❤️

And both stare each other :o and then start laughing 😃 😆'. Shiv mischievously asks for his birthday gift to which Anandi understood what he is referring but still just to irritate her man!!! she takes out a gift which she brought for him 😉

'Anandi aapne mujhe wish bhi kar diya...birthday cake bhi kat liya... ab mera birthday gift wo kaha hai' coming slowly near her.. 😉 😛

Anandi understood what he wants !!! 😛... but tactfully said 'hai na, yeh lijiye' a small box with silver rapper on it. 😆

Shiv opened the box and saw a couple wrist watches and quizzingly looked at Anandi, because he already had a watch :o Anandi understood and answered 😊...

'Shiv mein janti hu ki aapke pass watch hai par yeh watch alag hai!!!! yeh couple watch hai 😊... aur iske features bhi alag hai, understanding his curiosity she explains'. yeh watch heart beat se chalti hai 😊... yani jab mein ya aap iss watches ko phenege tab yeh chaliengi, kyuki yeh couple watch hai... isliye connected hai... agar ek ruki tho dusri bhi ruk jayegi,,, yani jab tak meri dhadkane chalegi yeh watch chalegi aur jaha mari dhadkane band' 😔 before Anandi could complete the sentence Shiv placed his hand on her mouth and said not to say anything more'😊 ❤️

Then turning his attention towards the gift again Anandi said 'aur is watch ka sabse main feature kya hai wo tho sun lijiye' 😊

'Aur wo kya hai' 😊

Anandi said 'yeh watch GPRS installed hai aur is watch ke through mujhe pata chal jayega ki aap kaha hai' 😉 😃 😆

'Acha tho aap mujhe par nazar rakhna chahti hai, aapko mujhe baraosa nahi hai' 😔 😉

'Nahi Shiv aise baat nahi hai 😊... wo kya hai na mera pati hamesha gum jate hai, aur telephone industry bhi unhi ka saath deti hai aur hamesha unka phone not reachable batati hai 😉 😆isliye yeh GPRS mujhe help karegi yeh batane mein ki aakhir aap kaha ho kaha 😉 😆

'Par mein tho kahi jata hi nahi 😉... hamesha aapke pass hi rheta hu, aur waise bhi meine phele bhi kaha hai... mere biwi mere liye ek magnet ki tarah hai jaise jab bhi who mere dor kichti hai aur mein unke pass kicha chala aata hu' 😉 ❤️ 😃 ❤️

Anandi gets shy at this :v and Shiv cups her face in his hand ❤️ and further continues that 'mein hamesha yeh watch pehan ke rakhunga 😊... kyuki jab bhi mein yeh watch mein time dekhunga mujhe aapki yaad aayegi... taki mein jaldi se aapke pass aa saku ❤️ 😊 phil haal mere watch ka time kheta hai... Anandi kya aap mare saath dance karenge ❤️ ❤️' he changes the music and a different song starts playing 😊...

❤️Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte❤️

❤️Tere bina kya wajood mera❤️

❤️Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte❤️

❤️Tere bina kya wajood mera❤️

❤️Kyunki tum hi hu❤️
❤️Ab tum hi hu❤️
❤️Zindagi ab tum hi hu❤️
❤️Chain bhi, mera dard bhi❤️
❤️Meri aashiqui ab tum hi hu❤️

Anandi takes in Shiv's hand and he places Anandi's one hand on her shoulder ❤️ 👍🏼 and other in his hand ❤️ and he keeps his one hand on the waist of Anandi 😊 ❤️ and pulls her closer to her ❤️ and other in her hand 👍🏼'. And slowly starts moving lost in each other they were dancing, then suddenly they change direction and Shiv spins Anandi round and hugs her from back ❤️ and again they start moving slowly. 😊 ❤️ 👍🏼 😊
In that very moment they forgot everything and why to remember 😊 it was there moment of love for each other 😊' while dancing Anandi asks Shiv 'Aapko yeh sab pasand tho aaya na' 👍🏼 😊

'Pasand!!! Anandi this is just amazing, thank you so very much ❤️ 👍🏼... for making this birthday so special for me' and slowly kisses her neck from behind ❤️ Shiv slowly turns Anandi around and kisses her forehead ❤️ then both her eyes one by one and as he was about to kiss Anandi on her lips ❤️ 😊 ... she pushes him and shyly runs towards the window ☺️ Shiv comes from behind and picks her up in his hand ☺️ 😊and places her down on the bed ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️'. This was the moment of their submission though they had submitted themselves months back, but still this time it was different as if for the 1st time ❤️❤️❤️they were making love to each other and why not!!! today Anandi was Anandi again that Anandi who was lost, who had this side but time and the hardships she had gone through have erased this but today she was living herself again for her man, her husband, her life, her Shiv'. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

To be continued :) ' family picnic next part :) '.

Edited by maahi11 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A beautiful update, maahi😊

And AnSh romance was awesome👏
Continue soon

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