llAsYa OSll Tip Tip Barsa Pani

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Posted: 11 years ago
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My first AsYa OS.Read and tell me what you guys think!

Asad and Zoya were on their way back from Asad's friend's wedding.It was a long way back home and Asad wanted to get home fast so he can go to sleep.The atmosphere in the car was normal,a peaceful quietness surround Zoya and Asad. All of a sudden,the car stopped and Zoya looked confused and Asad looked annoyed.He got out of the car and opens the hood.A lot smoke came out and he coughed and batted the smoke away,like it was gonna go away like a fly. Zoya got out of the car and asked what happened."I don't know,hold on let me try to start the car again." He retorted He went inside the car and started tr car.It wouldn't start and he slammed his hands on the steering wheel,out of frustration. "Why don't you see if there is a mechanic shop nearby?" Zoya suggested to Asad "Ok let's see"he replied They both walked around to find a mechanic.They spotted one but it was closed.It would open in the morning,according to the sign that was taped to the door. "I guess we have to wait in the car,then"Asad said when they reached his car "Are you kidding me?"Zoya said "I can't sleep in the car,it's going to be really uncomfortable" "Hey look I see a five star hotel right across maybe we can stay there."Asad said sarcastically while pointing at the jungle. "Ha ha Mr.Khan.youre really funny!"Zoya rolled her eyes and went in the car and slammed the door hard. "Don't have to take the anger out on my precious car"Asad muttered They sat in the car and looked out at the darkness.Zoya got bored and turned on the radio.The song "tip tip barsa pani" came on. "OMG Mr.Khan I love this song!"Zoya said excitedly "It's a stupid song!" Asad replied As if on cue,rain started to pour down.Zoya rolled down her window and put her hands out.The rain started to get heavy. Zoya raised the volume and got out of the car.She started to dance around and be herself. "Zoya what are you doing?You're going to get a cold."Asad called out to her "Allah Miya what's wrong with you? Rain is suppose to be fun and enjoyable.I don't know why people run to get cover when it rains."Zoya replied She kept dancing around and Asad watched her being silly. He shook his head and smiled at her silliness.He was too busy watching her,that he didn't notice his car door being opened. "Come Mr.Khan dance with me"Zoya grabbed his hand and pulled him out. Asad was drenched in seconds! "Zoya you're crazy!"Asad retorted "No you're crazy for not enjoying the rain" Zoya tried to make Asad dance,when he didn't move.Zoya stopped trying and danced by herself.She was spinning around and was almost about to slip when Asad caught her.He pulled her closer and stared deep into her eyes. A loud thunder crack broke their little moment.Zoya looked away and began to move away from him when Asad pulled her back. "I don't think so Zoya.You wanted to dance right?Lets dance!" Zoya looked at him baffled,just minutes ago he had refused to dance. He grabbed Zoya's hands and wrapped them around his neck.They began to sway to the song that playing on the radio,in the car.The song had changed to "Behne de". Asad spun her around and her back was now agains this front. He wrapped both his arms around her waist and nuzzled into her neck. Zoya closed her eyes at the intimacy and had trouble breathing. Asad unwrapped his hands from her waist and gently moved Zoya's hair to the side. They were water drops on her bare skin.Asad moved down and kissed away the drops. He slowly crept about to her neck and kissed her there.Zoya moved her neck to the other side to give him more access. "Zoya you're so beautiful"Asad mumbled against her skin Zoya's response was just her heart beat getting more faster and her moaning softly. Asad heard her moan and something snapped inside him. He pushed her against his car and attacked her neck. "OMG Mr.Khan-" Zoya moaned He kissed her jaw and crept up to her lips.He kissed both corners of her lips and Zoya was getting all warm and fuzzy feelings.He was her everywhere on the face except her lips. Zoya couldn't stand all the teasing,so she grabbed his neck and pulled him closer.She crashed her lips against her and kissed him deeply.She ran her hands all over his body and stayed a little longer on his abs and ran her hands up and down. They broke apart after a while to catch their breath. "Wow..."Asad muttered "Yeah..wow"Zoya said Zoya burst out laughing and so did Asad. "You're right the rain is great!"Asad said,kissing her one more time. "It should rain more often." 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was rain refreshingly awesome man... the romance was sizzling but trust this weird couple to spoil the moment😆.. Fab man.. do write often👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I loved it Amerra! It was so cute and then it got all hot ☺️😆 I want another rain sequence like this and BNHH in the show...but I can live off of your OS 😆
Loved it and do write more!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: AlwaysAsYa

I loved it Amerra! It was so cute and then it got all hot☺️😆I want another rain sequence like this and BNHH in the show...but I can live off of your OS😆

Loved it and do write more!


Thank Riya! I'll try to write more.
I think we just have to live off of ff and os bc I don't think it's going to happened in the show 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice and also hot and romantic. Love it. Write more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you for the comments everyone!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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BRILLIANT JOB AMERRA!! sorry i forgot to like the post!!!
it wassooo AWESOME!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Shayari-

BRILLIANT JOB AMERRA!! sorry i forgot to like the post!!!

it wassooo AWESOME!

it's ok! And thank a lot
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was cute..dance in the rain..and then their kiss..loved it :)

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