new fiction amnas entry part=2

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friends i know i am very very late in posting the second part

first part ended when bittu tells others that after shooting his father he blacked out. after this there was a long pause bittu was very quiet raj ne phir console karte huyebittu ke shoulder par haath rakha.

bittu slowly amna ki taraf dekhta hai aur amna wall of fame par actually raj alekh aur baaki sab ab wall of fame ke aage lage sofas par bathe hain

amna====alekh mein jaanti hoon tum is incident ke baaad bahut dukhi the tumneapne aap komeri death ke liye responsible samaj liya tha.

i was not dead us din phadi se mein ek pathr par gir far faint ho gayi thi .capt rajveer aur capt naveen vahan se ja rahe the jab

unhone bullets ki awaaz suni.then amna becomes quit.

raj== haan hum dono us din kma ke liye ja rahe the us in vahan students reunion ki party thi

everiyone including are bittu is shocked at this new twist in the story.

naina says==usi din bhayia arrest huye the.

naina even forgets that bc was to present there and when she relizes this she is frightened but to her surprise bc never reacted at this

raj==naveen aur mein jab vahan pahunche to dekha ke ek aadmi mar gaya hai ek ladka <alekh>thode se hosh mein hai main aur naveen uske paas gaye

behoshi ki halat mein alekh bas yeh hi keh raha tha di ko mar diya aur pahad ki taraf ishara kar raha tha. naveen bhag kar us taraf gaya aur jab usne neeche dekha to ek pathar par ek ladki behosh padi hai

bahut mushkil se mein aur naveen us ladki ko bacha sake .phir in dono ko paas ke millitary hospital le gaye.amna ne hosh mein aane ke baad saari kahani batayi.iske baad meine naveen ko kma jaane ke liye kah aur kaha ke mein yahaan ruk ta hoon .naveen chala gaya

amna nahin jaanti thi ke uske father ki death kaise hui.police case ban chuka tha mein alekh se baat karna chahata tha vo behosh tha.magar usse milne ka kabhi moka nahin mila.

yahan raj chup ho jata hai uski aankh se ek aansoo girta hai aur vo ise chupane ki koshish karta hai. bc raj ko console karte huye kehta hai====

us raat nvin arrest haya tha is liye raj ko vapas kma aana pdha vo navin ke case mein itna ulajh gaya ke us alekh ki help karne ka mauka hi nahin mila.jab usne amna ka pata lagaana chaha to use bataaya gaya ke amna accident vale din hi hospital chod ke chali gayi thi.aur uske bhai aekh ko uske father ki death ke liye sazaa huyi hai.rajveer ne amna ko

dhoondne ki bahut koshish kilekin koi faayda nahin hua phir usne is baare mein mere se baat ki.hamne court mein appeal kar kealekh ko academy le aaye.taaki uski life ek naye sire se shuru ho jaye.aaj subhe amna hamse milne aayi.alekh is very happy and thanking raj he hugs him amna also sheds tears of her happiness.

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frieds apne exams ke karan mein bahut late ho gayinthi
agar aap is story ka first part dekhna chahate hain to vo koi peechle pages par hai under the heading====new fiction amna entry
yeh story 4parts mein divided hai ab aap ko jo bhi loop holes dikh rahe hein vo khatam ho jayenge
please please please write ur comments i am waiting 4 them
thanks pinka_anshu 😳

why no one is replying
i am sad 😭

awesome story 😳 😳 😳 Raj n Navin part aur bhi achah hai. 👏 👏 Keep it up n do writting 👍🏼 gr8 but who is bittu... 😃

hi dolly
youra next part realy gud and the flow of stroyis quite convincing
but as you sad no loop hole i need to say this

yaar nevven k arrest mein aur RAJ k acedemymein ane mein 4 saal lage to kya alekh ko acedemy lane mein bc ko bhi 4 saal lage?
aaj 4 saal baad use achanak se kaise pata chal gay ki ALEKH khan hai?/

i am sorry if i hurt you but i think as viewer and your fic's fan i need to say this

apart from all these your fic-part2 is great 👏
👏 👏 👏

and plz next part so early

Originally posted by: Lrl_Diwani

awesome story 😳 😳 😳 Raj n Navin part aur bhi achah hai. 👏 👏 Keep it up n do writting 👍🏼 gr8 but who is bittu... 😃

bittu is our alekh😳 😳 😳

hey Dolly.. that's a real good story.. par kya aap ko pata hai ki ab se saare FanFictions IF ke FF section mein shift kar diye gaye hain??? Please continue your story there..
But make sure you continue.. coz its a real good one..

pinka_anshu wrote===
hi dolly
youra next part realy gud and the flow of stroyis quite convincing
but as you sad no loop hole i need to say this

yaar nevven k arrest mein aur RAJ k acedemymein ane mein 4 saal lage to kya alekh ko acedemy lane mein bc ko bhi 4 saal lage?
aaj 4 saal baad use achanak se kaise pata chal gay ki ALEKH khan hai?/

i am sorry if i hurt you but i think as viewer and your fic's fan i need to say this

apart from all these your fic-part2 is great


and plz next part so early


anshu raj kma vapas aakar naveen ke case mein bahut ulajh gaya tha .court martial ke cases mein kam time nahin lagata.isi liye vo kaafi time ke baad alekh ki help karne ke baare mein soch saka phi amna ko search karne mein,bc ko convince karne mein,court se appeal karne mein in sabhi baaton ke liye 3and a half years lag gaye phir bc ne alekh ko naye academic year mein kma mein admit kiya ia tarahan char saal lag gaye.........




i hope ab sab clear hai agar koi aur galti hai to please bataao
and dear ismein sad feel karne ki kya baat hai mere liye??? yeh to achacha hai ke tum meri fiction itne achi tarahan se padti ho

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luckyrobin wrote
hey Dolly.. that's a real good story.. par kya aap ko pata hai ki ab se saare FanFictions IF ke FF section mein shift kar diye gaye hain??? Please continue your story there
But make sure you continue.. coz its a real good one..
sorry i didn't knew about that.what's and where is ff i know nothing about that can u please pm me about that and thanks for informing me