FanFic: Shiv loves Gauri. Pt 19 pg 13

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Part 1- Where Gauri sees Shiv and Ipshita hugging what will she do read this part to find out. - Page 1

Part 2- Gauri finds out the full truth of Shiv and Ipshita's relationship, to find out the full truth read this part. Ipshita has a doubt on Shiv's love for her. - Page 1

Part 3- Shiv realises something about himself and Ipshita finally gets an answer to the question she asked in Part 2. What will Alokji do after Gauri tells them everything about Shiv and Gauri. To find out all this read this part. - Page 2

Part 4- Alokji tells Shiv that he and Gauri are to get divorced. Ipshita is about to tell Nikhila about Shiv and Gauri when she gets a phone call from Shiv asking to meet her. She meets him and promises not to say anything to Nikhila about Shiv and Gauri. Gauri then without knowing goes to the park where Shiv is sitting and Shiv and Gauri talk. Gauri leaves Shiv in the park alone after she says that she can not forgive him. -Page 3

Part 5 - Shiv and Gauri are really sad they cry every moment they remember each other, they cry for a month. Then Shiv's family decide that they should move back to Mumbai. Shiv asks Gauri to meet him just once, he then tells her that he loves her. - Page 4

Part 6 - Shiv and Gauri go to Gauri's house Alokji forgives Shiv, Shiv tells Alokji and Gauri a plan. Shiv and Gauri go to Shiv's house where they find out Daksh has been kicked out by the family because he was caught by his wife Shayla. Vivaan and Shayla are fine and happy. Then Gauri wants to go out so Shiv says she is not going alone at that time of night so he goes with her but on the way their car breaks down on a bridge, Shiv and Gauri get out Shiv is looking at the car while Gauri is out. Shiv tells her to sit in the car she refuses, just then a truck comes out of no-where and hits Gauri, Gauri flies into the river. Shiv runs to the edge of the bridge. - Page 4

Part 7 - Anupam proposes to Ipshita, she accepts. Shiv calls his family and then the police about the accident. Mahen calls Alokji and they all go to the accident spot. The police search everwhere for clues but do not find any. Everyone goes home, Shiv goes upstairs sees his and Gauri's picture cries a little then punches the painting of Ipshita. His hand bleeds and Vivaan puts bandage on it. He tries to sleep but can't and then he recieves a phon call. - Page 5

Part 8 - The phone call is from a man that says that Gauri was murdered but notby his mother. Then the Inspector calls Shiv to tell him that they have found a body that may be Gauri so the Inspector tells Shiv that he has to identify what she was wearing, then he gets sad at the table when he forgets that Gauri is dead as he waits for Gauri to serve him. He then gets into the car kisses a picture of Gauri, he then goes to the hospital and is taken to the body by the Inpector and he lifts up the cloth... - Page 6

Part 9 - Shiv lifts up the cloth he says it is Gauri. Then he asks if he could take the body, the Inspector says yes, Shiv then goes home and tells his dad they can take the bosy home and 2 prepare 2 receive the body. Then he and Mahen leave 2 collect the body, Ipshita calls Nikhila 2 talk 2 her they go into the corner. Ipshita says that Gauri's killer is her mum Suguna, then at the hospital Mahen and Shiv reach the hospital and r about 2 take the body when a girl appears at the door. The girl is....GAURI!!!!. To find out how she is alive read on. - Page 6

Part 10 - Gauri is alive. She wants 2 find the person who is tryng 2 kill her, she tells Mahen and the Inspector not 2 say anything. Then she leaves, they take the body home and act like it is Gauri. Shiv tells Alokji that Gauri is almost there, then they do the funeral for the body and emerse the ashes in a nearby river. Then Nikhila and Ipshita go to Suguna's house and say they know that she killed Gauri. Suguna keeps saying she didn't but finally she says 'Yes I killed Gauri, because she was the thorn in ur way Ipshita.', then someone must have recorded their conversation because that part plays. - Page 7

Part 11 - Police arrest Suguna, Nikhila and Ipshita. Nikhila asks who told them, they call Gauri who is wearing a gonnghat so they can't see her face. Anupam then bails out Ipshita, and Shiv bails out Nikhila. Nikhila asks whether Mahen sent them, Shiv says that Mahen didn't want her 2 be bailed. Suguna can't b bailed out. When they get home, Ipshita calls Anupam 2 the side and says that she can't marry him, he asks why. She says that she can't tell him, but after a lot of persuation she tells him that she can't marry him because she loves Shiv.- Page 7

Part 12 - Anupam and the whole find out the truth about Shiv and Gauri's marriage. There is alot of tension in the house for about 8 months, then Shiv and Ipshita have the courage to say that he wants 2 marry Ipshita. Suguna is in jail sentenced for 10 years, guruji comes and says that according 2 Shiv's kunli Gauri is still alive. Guruji says there is still something wrong with Shiv's kunli. - Page 8

Part 13 – Guruji tells the family that there still is a problem with the kunli even though Gauri has died, Nikhila tells guruji to try and sort out the problem and make it go away. When leaving Shiv pays guruji to lie about his kunli and say to his mother that the problem has disappeared. Anupam thinks about Ipshita marrying Shiv and her says that he is giving her permission to marry Shiv if that makes her happy, as he can't see her unhappy. Next morning guruji phones Shiv while he is thinking about Gauri and tells him that his kunli has changed and that the problem has disappeared. Shiv thinks that how is this possible and how is he going 2 tell Ipshita about this. When he can live with Gauri what is the point of marrying Ipshita. - Page 8

Part 14 - Shiv is confused doesn't know what 2 tell Ipshita, she comes in he says he has something important wil c her l8r. He then goes, in his car while driving calls guruji and asks him how kunlis changed. Guruji says because of Gauris praying. He then goes 2 a house and calls Gauri, they hug and she hits him. Shiv tells Gauri all about the kunli and then is scared wot 2 tell the family. Gauri goes and puts a plaster on her head, Shiv thinks it is real so gets worried she says it is fake. She tells him wot 2 tell the family, then he kisses her they stand there when Gauri's baba tells them 2 go. They go 2 Shiv's house. - Page 9

Part 15 - Gauri explains 2 them wot happened 2 her after the accident, Mahen on the side so no-one can hear wot reallt happened as in the morge she told him she would explain everyting. Ipshita and Anupam go on a little holiday, while Shiv Gauri again get passionate. Then Ipshita faints and Mahen asks the doctor whats wrong. Gauri is eavesdropping in on their conversation when the doctor says Ipshita is pregnant - Page 10

Part 16 - Gauri falls to the floor Shiv comes and picks her up and she goes to their room and starts packing her bags. Shiv asks her many times what she is doinh but she does not answer, finally she tells him that Ipshita is pregnant. Gauri has an inkling that the baby is Shiv's as he used to loveher, But he loves Gauri now. Gauri asks him if he ever drank so much alcohol that he can't remember wot happened the night b4. Shiv starts to realise that Gauri may be right. Gauri leaves the house and Shiv asks Ipshita who the father is she says he is the father. - Page 11

Part 17 - Gauri goes to her Baba's house, her Baba is angry again and shouts at Mahensaab, he says that Gauri and Shiv will have to get divorced. Gauri tells him to w8 for the DNA test in case Shiv is proved not to be the baby's father, her Baba is still angry but agrees to wait for the DNA test b4 issuing divorce papers. 2 months l8r Gauri faints, her Baba checks her over then rushes her to hospital where he has a blood test done. The results are positive, b4 the doctor can say anymore Alokji stops him and they go home, Alokji phones Mahehsaab and tells him 2 hav a paternity test done as there is another person's future as stake. – Page 11

Part 18 –Gauri finds out she is pregnant her Baba tells her after much persuation. She thinks about whether telling Shiv or not but she tells him as he is the father he has the right 2 know. So she phones him is not able 2 tell him over the phone after he gets tired of hearing her stuttering over the phone he decides to go there, but on the way there his father phones him to tell him that they r going 2 the hospital for the paternity test. He decides not 2 go and carries on to Gauri's house where she finally tells him that she is pregnant. Page 12

Part 19 – Shiv tells Gauri that the paternity test is being done, and he manages to persuade her not to leave him if the test proves positive. Gauri says that she 4gives him 4 the pain that he gave her b4 but he cannot 4give him 4 this pain at the moment. Alokji becomes angry that Gauri has 4given Shiv so easily , but Gauri persuades Alokji to 4give Shiv. Just then Shiv's phone rings and he finds out that Ipshita has had the paternity test done and it will take another week for the results to come through. Shiv then tells Mahen, with Gauri's permission that Gauri is pregnant. Then Mahen asks wot wud happen once the results come through, Shiv says that Gauri has agreed to stay wit him, then Mahen wants to know how they can stop Ipshita from getting humiliated. Shiv suggests getting Anupam and Ipshita married as planned, Mahen agrees and tells Shiv to phone Anupam. Shiv phones Anupam and manages to persuade him 2 marry Ipshita, then finally a week l8r they go to the hospital to find out the results, and they find out that the father is Shiv Kapoor. Ipshita finds out that Gauri is pregnant after she tried 2 persuade Shiv 2 marry her. – Page 13

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Hey KAAjians
I know some people are upset with the sudden-death-to-be of Gauri Kapoor aka Pallavi Subhash. So I thought of writing my own version of how I think the story of Karam Apna Apna should go. I know that it cannot beat Ektamai's version. I would also like ur comments on wot u think of the story.

Karam Apna Apna.
(Story will start from the time that fake court case with the girl called Kannan)

After the court case Anupam rushes straight to Gauri's house as he knows that she has taken things the wrong way. Gauri is in her room crying she has thrown a picture of her and Shiv (played by Iqbal Khan NOT Yash Tonk) on the floor. Just then there is a knock on her bedroom door, she goes to the door and opens it and sees Anupam and then she goes to the her window. Anupam follows her to the window but as he is following her he sees the broken photo on the floor.


Anupam: Gauri what have you done? What is all this?


Gauri(still crying): I have broken all my dreams, my hopes and my trust.


Anupam: Wait Gauri you are misunderstanding things it is not..


Gauri: I don't want to hear anything Anupam.


Anupam: Please Gauri just hear me out then make your own decision. It's not the way you think it is. Whatever Ipshita said in court was a lie.


Gauri looks at him in confusion.


Anupam: Yes Gauri, whatever Ipshita said in court was a lie. We had spoken to the lawyer and he said that without a witness there was no chance that Shiv was going to be saved from going to jail. So Ipshita lied to say that she was there with Shiv when Kannan had come in and forced herself onto Shiv. So there is nothing going on between Shiv and Ipshita.

Gauri wipes her tears. Then we see that Ipshita is pacing in her house when Shiv comes rushing in to the house and rushes straight to Ipshita.

Shiv: What have you done? Why did you say all that? Do you know what people are saying about you out there?

Ipshita: Shiv whatever I said I said it to save you from jail. I don't care what people say about me because I know that I love you and you love me.

Shiv hugs Ipshita and then we see Gauri coming up the drive to Ipshita's house and she sees the security guard.

Security: Hello memsaab


Gauri: Hello, is Ipshitamemsaab in?


Security: Yes and Shivsaab is also there.


Gauri (thinking): Shiv? What is Shiv doing here?


She then goes inside the house and sees Shiv and Gauri hugging. Seeing this she walks really slowly to Shiv and Ipshita. Then Shiv looks up and sees Gauri walking towards him.


Shiv: Gauri...

Ipshita turns round and sees Gauri coming towards them. Gauri reaches them and looks at Shiv then Ipshita and then at Shiv again.


Shiv: Gauri... wait. It's not what you think.


Gauri starts crying: Then what am I supposed to think Shiv. Anupam tells me that there is nothing going on between you two but when I come here I see this, you and Ipshita hugging. I thought you were only friends.


Thats all for now. Please tell me what you think of my version of the story. Part two will be written soon. I will also write a contents page so that all you have to do is read the contents page and remember what part you were up to.
Edited by KAfan - 19 years ago
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What happened in the previous part? Gauri saw Shiv and Ipshita hugging and she in her hearts of hearts knew that what Ipshita said in court maybe true.

Part 2

Shiv: We are friends.

Gauri:Shiv don't lie to me, Aaj maine jo kuch bhi dekha use mujhe lag raha hai ke tum dono dost nahin kuch aur ho. Aur aaj mujhe sirf ek sawal ka jawab chahiye. Kya Ipshita ne court mein jo kuch bhi kaha tha ya woh sab sach tha?

Silence

Gauri:Shiv jawab do, kya Ipshita ne court mein jo kuch bhi kaha tha kya woh sab sach tha? Shiv main tumse pyaar karti hoon is liye tumhe mujhe jawab dena hi hai.

Ipshita: Haan woh sab sach tha.

Shiv (looking shocked):Ipshita!!!

Ipshita:Nahin Shiv main aur jhoot nahin bol sakti. Ek na ek din Gauri ko sab pata chalega to aaj kyun nahin. Haan Gauri maine court main jo kuch bhi kaha tha woh sab sach tha. Aaj main tumhe sab bataoongi. Hum ek doosre se bahut pyaar karte hai aur aaj se nahin kahin salon se. Hum dono 14 saal ke the jab humein pyaar hua tha. Use waqt hum bahut chote the shaadi ke liye aur jab hum dono shaadi karna chahte the to Shiv ki kunli ...

Gauri went to a step and sat on it and kept staring forwards. Shiv rushes to her and kneels down in front of her.

Shiv: Gauri dekho main tumhe sab kuch batana chahata tha, kahin baar koshish ki thi. Yaad hai woh cassette jo maine on ki thi lekin mari maa ne woh moka haath se jaane diya. Usne neend ki goli jo khali thi.

Then Gauri gets up and walks out

Shiv: Gauri. Gauri! Gauri!!

Gauri keeps on walking on the roads just remembering wot she saw today then she remembers the times that Shiv had gone to the hotel Those must have been the times when he was with Ipshita. She remembers the times when Shiv could not be found; she also remembers the time when Shiv turned on the cassette and she was listening to it when Ipshita had shouted to Shiv from the other room and Gauri and Shiv had rushed to Nikhila's room to find her on the floor. She reaches her house and goes to her room closes the door and slowly sits on the floor.

Shiv: Ab hum kya karenge Ipshita?

Ipshita: What do you mean 'Kya Karenge'?

Shiv: Gauri ko tumne sab kuch bata diya hai

Ipshita: Haan to?

Shiv: Mujhe apne aap par nafrat ho rahi hai.

Ipshita: Tumhe apne aap par kyun nafrat ho rahi hai Shiv?

Shiv: Maine Gauri ko dhoka diya hai.

Ipshita: Shiv tumne Gauri ko kis liye dhoka diya hai? Tumne use dhoka is diya hai taake hum dono ek doosre se shaadi kar sake. You know Shiv mujhe kya lagne laga hai?

Shiv: Kya?

Ipshita: Mujhe aisa lagne laga hai ke tum Gauri ko pyaar karne lage ho.

Shiv: Ipshita!!! Tum kya bakwas kar rahi ho.

Ipshita: Shiv main bakwas nahin sach ke rahi hoon. Mera dil yeh Mujhse kahene laga hai. Kya tumhe lagta hai ke tum Gauri se pyar karte ho?

Shiv: Nahin kyunki main tumse pyaar karta hoon.

Ipshita: Agar tum Mujhse pyaar karte to tum mere hi samne Gauri ki fikar nahin karte, har waqt tum ek baat kahete ho, ke tumhe Gauri ko dhoka nahin dena chahiye. Shiv apne dil se poocho kya tum Gauri se pyaar karte ho ya nahin?

So will Shiv admit that he may be in love with Gauri the girl that is dying so that he can marry Ipshita. What do you think? Does Shiv love Gauri? Please do comment. If any of you need the English translation then tell me I will translate this into English for those who want it translated.

Edited by KAfan - 19 years ago
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Hey thats a brilliant idea... KAA, the way it shud have gone! Looking fwd to reading ur version of it!
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What happened in the previous part?Gauri saw Shiv and Ipshita hugging and she in her hearts of hearts knew that what Ipshita said in court maybe true.

Part 2 posted again

Shiv: We are friends.

Gauri: Shiv don't lie to me, Aaj maine jo kuch bhi dekha use mujhe lag raha hai ke tum dono dost nahin kuch aur ho. Aur aaj mujhe sirf ek sawal ka jawab chahiye. Kya Ipshita ne court mein jo kuch bhi kaha tha ya woh sab sach tha?

Silence

Gauri: Shiv jawab do, kya Ipshita ne court mein jo kuch bhi kaha tha kya woh sab sach tha? Shiv main tumse pyaar karti hoon is liye tumhe mujhe jawab dena hi hai.

Ipshita: Haan woh sab sach tha.

Shiv (looking shocked): Ipshita!!!

Ipshita: Nahin Shiv main aur jhoot nahin bol sakti. Ek na ek din Gauri ko sab pata chalega to aaj kyun nahin. Haan Gauri maine court main jo kuch bhi kaha tha woh sab sach tha. Aaj main tumhe sab bataoongi. Hum ek doosre se bahut pyaar karte hai aur aaj se nahin kahin salon se. Hum dono 14 saal ke the jab humein pyaar hua tha. Use waqt hum bahut chote the shaadi ke liye aur jab hum dono shaadi karna chahte the to Shiv ki kunli ...

Gauri went to a step and sat on it and kept staring forwards. Shiv rushes to her and kneels down in front of her.

Shiv: Gauri dekho main tumhe sab kuch batana chahata tha, kahin baar koshish ki thi. Yaad hai woh cassette jo maine on ki thi lekin mari maa ne woh moka haath se jaane diya. Usne neend ki goli jo khali thi.

Then Gauri gets up and walks out

Shiv: Gauri. Gauri! Gauri!!

Gauri keeps on walking on the roads just remembering wot she saw today then she remembers the times that Shiv had gone to the hotel Those must have been the times when he was with Ipshita. She remembers the times when Shiv could not be found; she also remembers the time when Shiv turned on the cassette and she was listening to it when Ipshita had shouted to Shiv from the other room and Gauri and Shiv had rushed to Nikhila's room to find her on the floor. She reaches her house and goes to her room closes the door and slowly sits on the floor.

Shiv: Ab hum kya karenge Ipshita?

Ipshita: What do you mean 'Kya Karenge'?

Shiv: Gauri ko tumne sab kuch bata diya hai

Ipshita: Haan to?

Shiv: Mujhe apne aap par nafrat ho rahi hai.

Ipshita: Tumhe apne aap par kyun nafrat ho rahi hai Shiv?

Shiv: Maine Gauri ko dhoka diya hai.

Ipshita: Shiv tumne Gauri ko kis liye dhoka diya hai? Tumne use dhoka is diya hai taake hum dono ek doosre se shaadi kar sake. You know Shiv mujhe kya lagne laga hai?

Shiv: Kya?

Ipshita: Mujhe aisa lagne laga hai ke tum Gauri ko pyaar karne lage ho.

Shiv: Ipshita!!! Tum kya bakwas kar rahi ho.#

Ipshita: Shiv main bakwas nahin sach ke rahi hoon. Mera dil yeh Mujhse kahene laga hai. Kya tumhe lagta hai ke tum Gauri se pyar karte ho?

Shiv: Nahin kyunki main tumse pyaar karta hoon.

Ipshita: Agar tum Mujhse pyaar karte to tum mere hi samne Gauri ki fikar nahin karte, har waqt tum ek baat kahete ho, ke tumhe Gauri ko dhoka nahin dena chahiye. Shiv apne dil se poocho kya tum Gauri se pyaar karte ho ya nahin?

So will Shiv admit that he may be in love with Gauri the girl that is dying so that he can marry Ipshita. What do you think? Does Shiv love Gauri? Please do comment. If any of you need the English translation then tell me I will translate this into English for those who want it translated.


Edited by KAfan - 19 years ago
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mindblowing hunnii, this is the kaa which i would have died to seen on TV!!

please do continue!!!~
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Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

mindblowing hunnii, this is the kaa which i would have died to seen on TV!!

please do continue!!!~

Thank you please continue to comment. I will be posting part 3 in a minute. Everyone else please do comment so that I know whether to carry on or not. 😛

Edited by KAfan - 19 years ago
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What happened in part 2? Gauri found out about the real relationship between Shiv and Ipshita. Gauri then goes home and cries. Ipshita doubts Shiv's love for her, she thinks that Shiv loves Gauri as he keeps talking about betraying her.

Part 3

Shiv is in his hotel room sitting alone thinking about what Ipshita has said. He remembers that Ipshita said 'Agar tum Mujhse pyaar karte to tum mere hi samne Gauri ki fikar nahin karte, har waqt tum ek baat kahete ho, ke tumhe Gauri ko dhoka nahin dena chahiye. Shiv apne dil se poocho kya tum Gauri se pyaar karte ho ya nahin?' This keeps going round and round in his head. After this everytime he sits on his own all he can think about is Gauri, then one day when he is in his hotel room Ipshita comes in.

Ipshita: Hi Shiv.

Silence

Ipshita: Shiv I said hi

Shiv (forcing himself): Hi

Ipshita: Come on Shiv give me a proper Hi. Anyway yeh sab choro.

Ipshita goes to him and hugs him really intimately but he pushes her away. He walks away from her.

Ipshita: Shiv tumhe kya hua hai aaj. Har baar to hum aise hi milte the to aaj kya hua.

Ipshita has an inkling in her mind about what is bugging him.

Ipshita: Shiv maine kal tumhe ek sawal poocha tha uska aaj mujhe jawab chahiye. Kya tum Mujhse pyaar karte ho ya Gauri se?

Shiv does not say anything.

Ipshita: Jawab do Shiv.

Still Shiv does not say anything all he can think about is Gauri.

Ipshita: Shiv! Shiv!!

Shiv: Huh? Tumne kuch kaha.

Ipshita: Main tumhe kabse ek sawal pooch rahi hoon jiska jawab mujhe chahiye.

Shiv: Konsa sawal Ipshita?

Ipshita: Kya tum Mujhse pyaar karte ho ya Gauri se?

Shiv is slient

Ipshita: Bolo Shiv.

Shiv is still silent

Ipshita (looking sad): Mujhe mera jawab mil gaya.

Shiv looks at her confused

Ipshita: Shiv tumhare choop rahene se mujhe mera jawab mil gaya.

Shiv: kya jawab tumhe mil gaya?

Ipshita: Tum mujhe nahin Gauri se pyaar karte ho.

Shiv: Nahin Ipshita aisa kuch nahin.

Ipshita: To tumne mujhe jawab dene mein itni der kyun lagadi? Agar tum mujhe itna hi pyaar karte to tum der nahin lagate.

Ipshita then leaves.

At Gauri's house

Gauri is crying non stop finally baba comes

Alokji: Gauri tum itna kyun ro rahi ho? Kya Shiv ne kuch kaha hai?

With this Gauri hugs her baba and carries on crying

Alokji: Gauri beta kya hua mujhe tum bataegi?

By this time the whole family is in Gauri's room. Gauri tells everyone about Shiv and Ipshita. Everyone is shocked when they finish, Alokji gets up and mashimaa sits next to Gauri and hugs and Kaaya sits on her di's other side.

Alokji: Jaisa baap waisa beta, baap ne humein dhoka diya phir bete ne diya. Aur kitna dhoka meri beti ko sena parega. Uski itni himat ke woh meri beti ka pati ho kar bhi kisi aur ladki ke saat rishta nibha raha hai. Main abhi ja kar use…

Gauri: Nahin baba, aap kuch nahin karenge.

Alokji: Gauri! Usne tumhare saat itna dhoka kiya phir bhi tum ke rahi ho ke main kuch na karoon. Kis miti ki bani ho tum? Main abhi jaa kar use…

Gauri: Nahin baba aapko meri kasam aap Shiv ko kuch nahin kahenge. Please baba? Please?

Alokji: Shiv ko pata nahin ke jis beti ko usne dhoka diya wohi beti aaj apne baba ko ke rahi hai ke Shiv ko kuch mat kaho.

Kaaya gets up and Alokji sits in Kaaya's place and Gauri and Alokji hug each other and they cry together. At the hotel room after Ipshita has left Shiv thinks about what Ipshita has said and he realises that he loves Gauri more than Ipshita. He rushes to Gauri's house, he later arrives at Gauri's house.

What will Alokji say to Shiv? What will Gauri say to Shiv? Will Shiv tell Gauri that he loves her? To find out read part 4. Please do comment on my version of KAA please so that I know whether I should carry on with this story. Also if anyone needs a translation please tell me and I will translate this into English for you. Also look at the contents page to see what part you are up to so that you don't get lost in this story, I want to make this easier for you all.

Edited by KAfan - 19 years ago
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its really good 👏 👏
i wish the story went like in this in kaa
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Originally posted by: Rock_Star

its really good 👏 👏
i wish the story went like in this in kaa

Ty. Please continue to comment. Could also get ur friends to read this version of KAA and ask them to comment on it so that I know whether to carry on or not.

Edited by KAfan - 19 years ago

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