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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gopi06

nice updt
waiting for mayur meeting
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice update. look forward for Mayur meeting
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I really want to thanks each and every reader for such an overwhelming response
I'll try my best to stand at your expectations
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Dil Ke Naazuk Dhaage

Part 3


pata nahi taqdir par to barosa nahi tha
pata nahi lakir par bhi to barosa nahi tha
phir bhi na jane kaise tum mere zindgi mein aye
mohbbat ki raho mein humsafar bankar aye
-By Deepa

At the Mall

Suhaani was getting extremly excited and was selecting every other dress which was liking, it seems her excitement is not for her brother's birthday but something else, Mayank too sensed something fishy and asked her,"Soni,kya baat hain tu itni excited kyu hain aaj ke din ko leker,Mana mera birthday hain but teri ye excitement dekh to lag raha hain ki kuch aur hi hain..".Suhaani quickly covered up herself from her super excited mode sensing if she caught than everything would be ruined she calmed down a bit and said,"Nahi..Nahi Bhai aapko aise hi lag raha hain..acha mene kuch dresses select ki hain to aap batao mein kon si dress pehnu..".

Mayank said smilingly,"Kuch bhi pehen le..tujh per to sab acha lagta hain...".Suhanni still convinced him,"Bhai mujhe aapki party mein apni saare friends ke aage sabse best lagna hain..isliye Please batao na...".

"Okay okay my sweet sis...he searched for a dress from pile of dresses being selected by her and than took out a one giving to her said ye le this will look awesome on you..."Said handling her the dress...Suhaani took the dress and the smile on her face broadens it was indeed very very nice, she hugged and him said,"Thanks a lot Bhai it's really awesome...!!!".He smiled to her as if conveying "Your-welcome".

"Acha ab aapki baari hain",Saying Suhaani dragged him to the men's section while Mayank was being very reluctant to it,"Soni iski kya zarurat hain rehne de...".Suhaani pouted very cutely,"Bhai Please..!!!".Accepting his defeat he said,"Acha thik hain...okay bata..".Suhaani went through some dresses and than said pointing at one,"Bhai why don't you take this tuxcedo and this Black jacket it will look awesome on it...".Mayank said,"Soni ...iski..".When she cut him in between,"Mene kaha na zarurat hain to hain...".

"Acha thik hain jesa tu chahe...".They packed up both the dresses ans went out when suddenly Mayank's gaze falls on the saari a maniquine was wearing , it was simple sea "blue Saari , he just felt something when he saw it, like if he imagines someone than no wonder it will look great on it, but than his mind raises a question "Whom".But his heart says,"Don't know but someone..".He was busy staring at that dress wondering a blurry image who will be extremely beautiful in it but the problem was his heart wasn't able to give him the clear picture of it , like the clouds in sky there were clouds in his heart which were not clearifying that image.His thoughts were broken when Suhaani came to him and dragging him through his arm asking,"Kya Bhai kahan kho gaye the chalo...".

He moved with her absent mindlely and moved out the showroom still in thougts when finally with a jerk he came out.Sunhaani tap him on his shoulder asking him,"Kya hua Bhai kya soch rahe ho...".She asked with a lines of worries on her face, he shrugged his useless thoughts because of them these worry lines appeared on his sister's forhead and said encircling his arms around her,"Kuch nahi Soni...bahut thaka diya tune itni shopping kara ke...Chal CCD chalte hain...".Suhaani smiled and said,"Okay..lekin tumhari treat..".Mayank said,"Haan Baba..Chal..".They moved to the caf which is the floor above the showroom , chatting themselevs.

As soon as Mayank and Suhaani moved inside the CCD, Nupur with her Mother Radhika Bhushan entered the mall.

Nupur:Haan to bolo pehle kya lena...

Radhika Ji:Pehle Gift le lete hain...

Nupur:Okay..

They went to a gift shop and searched for an appropriate gift for him, Radhika was seeing something very expensive for him, where Nupur was seeing a genuine type...after searching and seeing a lot Radhika Ji found a rare piece of stone studded pen and showed it Nupur...,"Nupur dekh kesa lag raha hain ye..?".

Nupur glanced at the gift it was indded very very nice she said,"Haan Maa..hain to bahut acha..".When her eyes fall on the price tag ,"Maa...but ye to..bahut costly hain..".Radhika Ji said,"To kya hua...".Nupur rejected it and said,"Maa, itne costly gift dene ki koi zarurat nahi hain hum apne hisab se bhi de sakte hain out of budget jaane ki kya zarurat hain vo bhi ek simple Birthday party ke liye..".

Radhika Ji:But Nupur beta...

Nupur said sternly,"Maa mene kaha na..koi zarurat nahi hain...mene thik gift choose kiya hain jo acha bhi hain aur humare liye economic bhi...aur iss gift ke paise mein dungi..".Radhika Ji retort,"Nahi tu rehne de..".Nupur again said glaring at her mother,"Maa, tum apne paiso se meri dress dilwa rahi ho na to koi zarurat nahi hain tumhe iss gift mein waist krne ki...mein le rahi hoon..".

Radhika ji getting convinced,"Acha thik hain..but ye to bata tune liya kya hain...".

Nupur:Ye...

She showed a very beautiful painting , it was giving a certain satisfactin, decent to the one who look at this painting, very srene..but still a painting her mother pputed,"ye kya painting...!!!"

Nupur:to..

Radhika Ji:Achi lagegi..??

Nupur:Tesion na lo..bahut achi lagegi...tumhe kesi lag rahi hain..

She glanced at the painting for while , the way the cold vibes touched her heart seeing that painting she easily can agreed that they would gift this , after buying it and getting it packed they moved to the dress showroom , it was the same showroom from where Mayank had brought his and Suhaani's dress...What a coincidence right..?? Well let's see how many coincidence destiny will bring in their life you have wait and watch..!!!.

They entered the showrrom and starts looking at the dresses, Nupur glanced at her mother who was busy seeing pretty and much gawdy dresses, She wondered why always her mother is upto all this, they could buy simple one also...shrugging her head she went towards her mother excusing the sales man she said in her almost whispering,"Maa, ye kya ker rahi ho...".

Radhika Ji:Tere liye ek payari se dresss le rahi hoon..

Nupur:Maa tum jaanti ho na..mujhe gawdy gawdy dresses nahi pasand..

Radhika Ji:But beta..

Nupur:Maa..vese bhi ye bahut costly hain , aur ek birthday party ke liye mein itni costly dress kyu pehnu..

Radhika Ji:Beta wahan per bade bade log aayenge...

Nupur:To aane do na Maa...mujhe kya lena dena unse..kon sa mein centre mein rehne waali hoon jo sabki nazar padegi mujh per...

Radhika Ji:Samjha ker beta..

Nupur:Kya samjhu Maa...mene kahan na hum ye dresses nahi lenge kuch aur simple sa dekhte hain...

Saying she moved from there when her watch got stuck at a dress , she looked behind to find that it's a saree being wore by maniquine...Radhika Ji went upto her and glanced at her asking,"Kya hua..".

Nupur:Kuch nahi meri watch ka strap atak gaya tha...

Just than Radhika Ji's eyes fall on the dress being wore by the maniquine she said to Nupur,"Nupur ye to dekh..kitni achi hain simple and sober aur uper se tera one of fav. Colour sea-blue...aur tere per to saari's vese hi bahut achi lagti hain..."

Yes..!!Guys.. you have judged it right it was the same saari of which Mayank was staring at..Nupur looked at the Saari glancing it for dew seconds she said agrreing,"Haan Maa...bahut achi hain...".

Radhika Ji:Bus Fir aaj tu function...mein yahi pehenegi..

Nupur:Maa pehli baat function nahi birthday party aur doosri baat Sirf saari nahi saari k saath blouse aur bhi cheeze chahiye hoti hain...

Radhika Ji:Aaj kal sab kuch ready made milta hain..chal sales man se baat kerte hain agar sab arrange ho sakta hain ki nahi..

Nupur:Okay...

On asking with sales man they actually got the ready made blouse and the peticote, Radhika Ji was very happy as she could able to select a good dress for her where Nupur was fine as she got a decent dress from the dresses her mother was choosing , taking her suitable size and giving it for little bit of alteration both the mother-daughter duo thought to wait in the caf ear by till than.


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Edited by shafy_MN - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
@faria

Aajkal tu bahut demanding hoti jaa rahi hain
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Posted: 11 years ago
Me bohat late ho gyi..3 parts b ho gya..sorry shafy
Part 1
Very nice starting...pehla part me he rain sa our b acha lga..
Mayur hmm both r very cute +workholic...love their familys alot..
Interesting n different concept..bcz zada tar to Arrange marriage me opposite hta h per yha to dono ek jaise h..maza ai ga pardhna me..
Continue soon
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Part 2
Very sweet ..cute n funny..haha
Bechara mayur...both trapped in their mothers plan..haha
Nupur n her mother relation is very cute..jo hukam mataji...
N mayank n suhaani is also very sweet..

Mayank k birthday per nupur ja rhi h...woww..mayank have no idea osko apni life ka sab sa bara n special gift milna wala h..

Ap dekhta h first meeting bazaar me hti h ya party me..
Continue soon
Edited by rimshazeb - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rimshazeb

Me bohat late ho gyi..3 parts b ho gya..sorry shafy
Part 1
Very nice starting...pehla part me he rain sa our b acha lga..
Mayur hmm both r very cute +workholic...love their familys alot..
Interesting n different concept..bcz zada tar to Arrange marriage me opposite hta h per yha to dono ek jaise h..maza ai ga pardhna me..
Continue soon

they are not complete same thode bahut alag alag hain..
Hmm

Late to tum ho gayi ho...

I will try to give good parts
Thanks for liking it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rimshazeb

Part 2
Very sweet ..cute n funny..haha
Bechara mayur...both trapped in their mothers plan..haha
Nupur n her mother relation is very cute..jo hukam mataji...
N mayank n suhaani is also very sweet..

Mayank k birthday per nupur ja rhi h...woww..mayank have no idea osko apni life ka sab sa bara n special gift milna wala h..

Ap dekhta h first meeting bazaar me hti h ya party me..
Continue soon


Well you have too see Mayur ki meeting kese kese circumstances mein hoti hain...

Acha what about part 3

ye to batao
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Part 3
Bohat bohat he acha tha .mujhe itna maza a rha tha per ek dam sa end b ho gya...pardna me itna busy thi ka pta he nhi chala.. mayank feeling on seeing the saree is beautiful n well written..u described his unknown feeling for someone after seeing the saree very well...abi to nupur mile b nhi n yeh hal h bd me kiya ho ga...

Plz jaldi sa next part update kardo..mujhse bilkul wait nhi ho rha ..I m so excited for their first meeting. .

Continue soon..

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