Mayur FF-Dil Ke Naazuk Dhaage Part 20/Pg-136 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Mudrika25

interesting,..

both are so workaholic ...


Thank you so much
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@faria:
Ye pahucha hi page 15 per hain tune comment kon se page per kiya hain hai ladki
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Faria.

Shaffyyy
it was amazing update jani
wah- both mayank and Nupur were so engrossed in their work- totally workholic.
bapre its really very tough to digest Nupur as workholic.
but i loved it .
mayank , shilpa and suhanai scene was so nice- accha kya in dono ne jo mayank ko jhoot bolkar bula liya. aur kitna kaam karegi wo

it seems nupur was the bread owner of her family and she had struggled a lot.
wanna c how mayur will meet each other..

fabulous part
keep it up


Note:btw bahut der hogaya - ek OS nehi likha tune

plz do write an OS- pilishhh



Os..yaar i have no time for that but i will try..
and thanks a lot for the part..
Mayur will meet soon in a very awkward situation..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dil Ke Naazuk Dhaage


Part 2

After some time Radhika made Nupur woke up from her sleep and asked her

,"Ab kesa lag raha hain..".Slowly opening her eyes she said,"Hmm...acha lag

raha hai time kya ho raha hain Maa..".Radhika Ji said,"10 Baj rahe hain...".She

got up in jerk and asked her mother,"Kya 10 baj gaye" and said in complaining

tone,"Maa..tumne uthaya kyu nahi kitni late ho gayi mein..".

Radhika Ji: Koi late wate nahi hui hain tu...

Nupur:Kyu..?

Radhika Ji:Arey bhool gayi aaj office kahan jaa rahi hain...

Realizing that she isn't going office today , she relaxed a bit and said,"Oh

haan...acha mein change ker leti hoon fir bahut saraa kaam hain

Radhika Ji:Kon sa kaam..

Nupur:Bhool gayi tumhi ne to kaha tha ki work from home ker lena...She gave

her i-am-also-your-daughter-look conveying don't trip in your trap.Radhika Ji

pouted,"Haan haan to mene kab mana kiya pehle neeche aa ker breakfast ker

le...fir kerti rehna apna kaam..".Nupur gave a salut sign to her as if obeying her

orders and said,"Jo hukum Mataji..".She giggled and went to washroom to

freshenup herself.

[Sharma Mansion]


On the other side Mayank's full concentration and attention was on his phone

he even didn't realized that the toast which he was eating had ended very long

ago and he was just moving his actions of eating, Shilpa Ji and Suhaani were

staring him , after a couple of minutes he ended his call and found his mother

and sister were blankly staring at him , he asked them in puzzled way,"Aap log

aise kyu dekh rahe ho mujhe...".

Shilpa ji asked him,"Mayu beta tu kya kha raha hain tabse..".

Mayank:Toast Maa...

Shilpa Ji:Kahan hain vo ?

Mayank:Kya..?

Shilpa Ji: Tera Toast..

Mayank:Maa tum bhi kya baat kerti ho ye to raha..he looked at his plate as

showing his mother glancing there is no toast Shilpa ji and Suhaani couldn't

control themseleves and burst into huge laughter followed by a meek smile by

Mayank.He said in a complaining tone,"Haan haan has lo..ab mein phone mein

itna busy tha dhayan hi nahi raha...".

Suhaani said in little getting frustated,"Bro, aap aur aapka phone aapne promise

kiya tha ki aap koi kaam nahi karoge..".

Mayank:To Soni mein koi kaam kahan ker raha hoon..mein to bas phone per

thode bahut instructions de raha tha..

Suhaani:Mein kuch nahi jaanti aaj ke din no office work, no office calls get that...

Mayank:Ji Madam...

Suhaani:Gud..!! Acha ab mujhe shopping per le jaao..mujhe aaj sham ki birthday

prty k liye dress kahridni hain...

Mayank:Itni saari to hain to aur kya kregi..

Suhaani glared her brother and said in threatening tone,"Broo..!!!"

Mayank sensing her anger said,"Haan haan chalte hain kyu nahi , vese bhi baarish

kaafi halki ho gayi hain...Chal chalte hain..mein change ker ke aataa hoon..".

Suhaani smiled to her and said,"Okay..!!!".

As soon as he left she came and hugged her mother whispering,"Mom, mein tab

k liye bhai ko busy rakhti hoon tum poori preparations ker lena...".

Shilpa:Vo sab tu mujhe per chod de..tu bas usse busy rakhna...".

Suhaani:Haan haan tension na lo..mein to bhai ki bhi shopping krwa dungi lage haath

Shilpa Ji:Ye to best rahega...

They gave hig-Fy to each other when they heard footsteps of Mayank coming

down, Suhaani went upto her seat , while Shilpa Ji acted as if everything is

normal he asked Suhaani,"Chal Soni".Suhaani said,"Haan Bhai and then to her

mother Maa hum aaye..".Mayank too said,"Hum aate hain Maa..".

Shilpa Ji bid them and said,"Jao aur khoob enjoy kerna...".

[Bhushan House]

The other side at Nupur's home

Radhika Ji and Nupur were silently having their breakfats where Nupur was

engrossed in newspaper when breaking the silence Radhika Ji spoke,"Nupur

beta mujhe tujhse kuch baat kerni thi..."

Nupur eating the toast,"Haan Bolo Maa..."

Radhika Ji took a deep breath and said,"Tujhe aaj shaam ko meri friend ke bete ki

birthday party mein jana hain..".

Nupur winced,"Maa tum chali jao na...mera kya kaam..".

Radhika Ji: Mein Hamesha akele hi jaati hoon lekin iss baar Shilpa ne specially ye

bola hain ki mein tujhe bhi leker aaun...

Nupur:But Maa

Radhika Ji:Nupur bhool mat vo meri best friend hone ke sath sath usi college ki

Management Head bhi raha kerti thi jiss college mein teri Maa abhi itni achi post

per hain...Tu mere sath chal rahi hain bas.

Nupur think a bit and than said,"Acha thik hain gussa mat ho mein chalungi

tumhare sath ab kush.."

Radhika Ji:Hmm..That's like a good girl..!!! acha ab sun mere saath shopping

per chal..

Nupur:Maa..shopping mein jaane ki kya zarurat hain

Radhika Ji:Zarurat kyu nahi hain..!!! Ek to tere pass kuch bhi dhang ka nahi hain

pehenne ko..beta wahan per bahut bade bade log aayenge Uska beta ek bahut ki

achi company ka M.D. hain to aise rukhe rukhe aur simple se kapdo mein jaayegi

no..

Nupur:Per Maa...

Radhika:Aur vese bhi uske liye koi gift to kharidna hoga na...chal na beta...

Nupur:Acha thik hain tumhare aage kabhi jeeti hoon mein..

Radhika Ji:Very Good..!! Meri gaadi mein chalenge...paani bahut bhara hoga

isliye..

Nupur:Okay Done but ek condition per...Radhika Ji asked what by raising her

brows she forwarded her hands and said,"Car mein chlaungi..".Radhika Ji

handed her keys and said,"Le..tu bhi kya yaad kregi...Jaa ab change kerke aa..fir

chalte hain..".

Nupur:Maa..vese tum bhi kam nahi ho..aakhir kaar...tumne meri aaj ki chutti

kerwa hi di...

Radhika Ji:Mene kese...

Nupur:Mujhe khoob pata hain..tum aaj poora din shopping mein nikal dogi aur

fir kahogi Party mein jana hain...ab kya kaam karegi...

Radhika Ji:Vo dekha jaayega abhi tu chal...

Nupur:Khoob jaanti hoon mein tumhe...aati hoon 5 min mein.

Nupur headed upstairs to change...she felt a change in todays' environmeny

god knows what is enclosed,shrugging her thoughts she moved in.

Hope you like it


Edited by shafy_MN - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Lo g kitni koshish ki mein ne k aj tu first aa jaoon,,, bt Alas... mera net last moment pr dhoka de gaya.chalo koi bat nahi first nahi sahi second hi sahi.
I have commented below.😳
Edited by Irum. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76

Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
very nive update👏

thanx for d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Both part1 & part2 are awesome.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
very nice update.
Specially who Mayank wala ,,,,hehehehe,,,,, tu ne sahi kaha tha Shaffy yeh Mayank bhi kya cheez hai,,, toast k jaga hawa kha raha tha.He did not even realozed k kb os ka toast finished ho gaya. Koi itna bhi workholic ho skta hai.
Hmmm... tu yeh dono ki mothers and cupid suhani ka planing hai...who in dono ko milana chatey hein.
Lets see do sadu logon ki meeting kesi hoti hai?
Thnx for PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: arhi.sarun

very nive update👏

thanx for d pm


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