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Posted: 12 years ago
sry fr being late
thnx fr pms
i just came bak yesterday from hostel
both the updates were awsum dear
u write so well
chachi and manvi convo was heart wrenching... virat's dead past made me feel so sry fr him
i think manvi will gv him immense love like him ...
and dat karan ...plzzz make him rot in jail
and swamini ko laath marke bhaga dena ... jaha jati hai prob hi prob
continue soon
ananya
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Chapter 9: Building A New World

I woke up early in the morning to see Virat dressed and ready to leave. My heart began racing. Everytime Virat left me, Karan managed to hurt me, I didnt want to stop Virat but I didnt know what to think after all these attacks. He smiled and helped me sit up. I have to go in for a couple of hours today. I can cancel if you need me to, I will be back in the afternoon ok, till then you rest. I have notified the security guards and given them Karans photo. Bhai will be in and out with meetings and cases and we are working on Karans case tonight so you rest till then, you will need to give us a long testimony, he explained. I nodded my head yes still scared and saw di walk in with breakfast. Mannu, chal, I want to eat breakfast with you, she said as she separated the two plates and handed me one. She smiled and walked away when Virat leaned in towards me, I love you baby, be safe ok he whispered in to my ear as he kissed my cheek again. I dont know what got over me, but I ended up pulling him closer to me making his lips brush mine. I shivered at the contact and he pulled me close to him and kissed my head, Manvi you sure you will be ok, I nodded my head yes and he left after giving me a long list of restrictions for the day. Di teased me after he left and I just blushed not able to say anything.

Mannu, when is your next doctors appointment, Di asked, she was looking at my old medical files. Next week di, Virat says he wanted to come, its my first sonography,I said nervously. She smiled, I will schedule mine the same time so that we can go together, kuch nahi hoga, ok, she said kissing my cheek. Jiju came home and brought us samosa for lunch. I twas silent now that jiju left and the old memories started coming back and I screamed in fear. Di was scared initially and realized I needed something to do. She told me that we would be here for a couple weeks so I thought it would be best to unpack the suitcases. She helped me over to a chair and handed me Virats suitcase so I could fold his clothes properly while she walked over and fixed her and jijus stuff. She lifted my face and kissed my head, "Mannu, I want you to forget everything that happened, keep your self busy and keep your self within a strong wall. All of us are with you but you need to keep your mind off of all those thoughts. Do you need anything else?" she asked holding my hand. I nodded my head no and tried focusing on the clothes and forgetting all those memories that haunted me in the silence. I heard the door to our room open and two hands surround me as warm breaths hit my neck. I told you to rest Manvi, you didnt have to do this, he said hugging me from the back. I smiled and handed him his clothes, Virat I cant get up, can you please put these in the cupboard, I asked him. He came back and lifted me up to place me back on the bed as I placed my arms around his neck, I missed him so much all day. He was working again before dinner, and I fell asleep watching him because of my medications for my leg. After a while he gently shook me up, Baby, its time for dinner, utho you can sleep once you eat, he said helping me up. I groaned because I was till tired and hugged him with my eyes still closed. Manvi, please, the baby is probably starving, you have to take your medicines too, he said waking me up again. Di walked in and set my food down, Mannu uth, you need to eat dinner. Chal its your favorite, moong dal ka halwa, I made it just now, she said handing me the bowl. I gagged looking at it and just felt nauseous. Di sensed my nausea almost immediately and helped me to the bathroom as I puked. I felt Virat come behind me and hold my hair back. You ok, is the little one troubling you, he asked caressing my stomach. I nodded my head yes and he helped me back to bed.

Eat this, he said holding out a spoon of Kichadi. Virat, do you need anything else, Di asked as she held my hand. I saw him just smile at her. No, thank you bhabhi, we will come to your room after dinner, he said feeding me another spoon. I stared at Virat as she left. Are we not eating dinner with di and jiju?, I asked confused. I wanted some time alone with you Manvi, I missed you all day when I was at the office. They said I could continue there and have a high chance of being hired too, it would just be perfect, he said pulling me in his embrace and kissing my hair. We can go eat with bhai and bhabhi if you really want though, my time with you can wait, he said pulling away, his face looked sad. I shook my head no and hugged his arm; I wanted this time with him too. He forced me to eat the rest of the kichadi while he ate his dinner and then took me out to the balcony. The sight in front of me shocked me. There were rose petals everywhere, and two candles lit the table in front of the couch there. I turned around to have Virat pick me and take me to the couch with a fleece blanket. I hope this makes up for the horrible confession sweetheart, I love you so much, he said nuzzling my cheeks. We were both covered with the fleece blanket, Virats arms protectively around me. I sighed. This was just perfect. I smiled and kissed his cheek and placed my head at the crook of his neck just taking in his scent, I felt so comfortable. He kissed my hair again and I cuddled in closer to him. I love you too, thank you I whispered into him. He pulled back awkwardly and I stared at him when he pulled me apart from him. I turned around to see Di and Jiju smiling at us. Jeevika, I think we should leave these two lovebirds alone, they seem to be too busy to even notice us, he said walking away with Di. Me and Virat instantly got up, No, we said at the same time, we were both bright red. Di and jiju joined us on the couch and we just talked for a little bit, Virat still refused to let go of me and had his arm around me the entire time just randomly caressing my hair or touching my belly to try to feel the baby. Jiju smiled at us, Virat, come sit by me mere bhai, he said teasing him. Virat pulled me closer, never bhai, I am not leaving Manvi for a second; you are more than welcome to come here though he said making room for him between him and Di by literally pulling me on his lap. After a while we headed back to sleep. I smiled seeing Dis sindoor and felt my forehead; I had never worn it after we got to Chandighar. When we got back in the room to sleep I handed the box to Virat, Virat, I want to wear it again? Please, I pouted looking at him. He smiled and in an instant made me his again. Mrs. Manvi Virat Vadhera, haye now you finally look the title, he said admiring my maang. Baby, would you feel comfortable giving the testimony to me? he asked nervously. I stared at him, where was this coming from. He cupped my face and sat me down. I didnt know how comfortable you would feel giving it to bhai. Manvi you have to give us each detail that happened that night. If its easier, you can give it to bhabhi, he said pulling me apart walking over to get Di. I held his hand, Virat, you have every right to know. Just please promise me nothing will change after I tell you? I asked worried about how he would react, worried that he would leave me. I promise, you trust me he asked sincerely as he sat me down in his embrace to listen to the story, I nodded my head yes and began.

It was Di and Jijus anniversary; once the puja ceremony was finished he called me into his room for help. I told him no and he dragged me just like yesterday. I began explaining to Virat every single detail that killed me that dreadful night. I was in tears at the end just sobbing in his arms. I felt Virat lift my face up, I couldnt do it, I couldnt look at him in the eye. He had done absolutely nothing wrong and I was denying him the right as my husband yet I was carrying the baby of a man who raped me. I felt Virat lift my face as he leaned forward and pecked my lips, Manvi, you dont have to be scared. Look at me Manvi, you have nothing to be ashamed of, what Karan did you was not your fault at all. Your decision to keep the baby makes me even prouder of you sweetheart, I love you. I want you to forget everything that happened that night Manvi. From now on, we live in a new world, just you me and chutki. No Karan at all, nothing to be scared of, just a family that loves you very much he said wiping each one of my tears off my face. I settled down after a while and Virat took the recording over to Jiju. I waited for him to come back and fell asleep hugging him yet again. I was finally ready to move on. Di and Virat were right, I needed to forget that incident and make my self stronger so that next time he wouldn't think twice about hurting me. I had a sister that loved me like her own daughter and a husband that thought of nothing except me. All those days I spent thinking how unlucky I was, I was so wrong, there is probably no one luckier than I am for having Di, Jiju and Virat with me. I silently thanked god and settled back into his arms and fell into a deep sleep thinking about the new happiness that lied ahead of me.

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Hi Nimi,,, new reader of ur story here!!

came across this story alot of times but i didnt read as i THOUGHT dat dis was innhindi(judged by the title).. but then i thought of checking it again and found out dat its completely in english! slapped myself for not checking it before, coz this one is freaking awesome!!

i love stories that had storng bond.. this is one such! i love the bond the two shares.. i loved the bond between the foursome and their extreme support to manvi..

according to the prologue, i never expected manvi's hidden secret to be her pregnancy.. i thought dat it must be something to do vt her health.. i was so wrong and once u revealed her being raped i was taken aback, 'omg vl virat bring back manvi & karan together?' again i was wrong! virat's step in marrying manvi to protect her from te society's eyes was brilliant!!! later revealing to everyone dat she's carrying karan's child was so neede to take karan under custody.. the realisation of virat about manvi's immense role in his life wen she left him for three hours was mind blowing!!! manvi's confession at the hospital bed and virat hearing it was sweeettt beyond limits!!! loved the innocence filled manvi and love filled virat!! loved manvi falling for virat while virat just realised his love for her!! love the support that each other shares thru thick and thin..

i adored the part where 'manvi goes away-virat searches for her like a maniac & realises his love- karan tries to kill her baby' part alot!!! i found it reality filled and not filmy.. well virat didnt get the ryt hotel she was stayin and knocked karan &saved her blah blah blah.. but karan from his cameras around vadhera mention and following her got hold of manvi to destroy the baby, manvi gained her strength to punch him and made it upto the reception, she landing up in hospital made the worried virat and virika to get her back and support her all over again... this is not at all filmy and so i love it!!

this chapter is really 'the new beginning'.. again & again the caring virat is heart throbbing!! the innocent manvi who is now dwelling in love, when she blushes and hugs virat tight is so cute and adorable!! virika helping their siblings and being proud about their matured decisions and support for each other is mind blowing!!

i loved this particular part alott!! "I was finally ready to move on. Di and Virat were right, I needed to forget that incident and make my self stronger so that next time he wouldn't think twice about hurting me. I had a sister that loved me like her own daughter and a husband that thought of nothing except me. All those days I spent thinking how unlucky I was, I was so wrong, there is probably no one luckier than I am for having Di, Jiju and Virat with me.''

in love vt this story alot!!! plss continue to give constant updates!!

and my first comment for this chapter as the first person!!! aint i lucky??? ofcoz um damn lucky!!

get going!!
Edited by virmanhus - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Emotional update..I am commenting on your story for the first time
Try to update soon & take care.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nimi another fab awesome and very well written update by you 👏👏
mein to tareef karte karte thak gayi falling short of words now 😛
this virat is just soo perfect ya reall;y understanding caring and loving tooo with all positives manvi is really lucky that she have got him besides her di ...
the awesome foursome moments were cute and fun alwayz a treat 😃
and virman moments just alittle is enuf to create magic ...and then manvi all set to move on with virat and face karan ..really happy with her decision😃
waiting for the net update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb nimmi...loved virat so much...ideal husband...awesome...cont soon
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Sorry i didnt got tym to read it... I read it today only... Nimi it was just amazing... U hav no idea what this update was to me... It was like a magical dream for me... A dream which i saw, felt n lived... Virman confession was so beautiful... U have no idea how much pleasant n wonderful it was... Just right amount of emotions... Claps for u...!!!! n this karan... I will kill him one day n swamini bua... Arghhh... Hope they rot in hell...
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Like button not working...
Coming to the update...
Virat's past is something i could have never thought of... He being a rape child n going thtough all the accusations,insults n humiliatitions... It hurted me soo much thinking about it... God knows what the people go through in real life given this particular situation... Vanshika' s husband was duch a great soul... Accepting somebody else's kid is a very big thing n virat is also one like him... Though it was pity in the beginning but now he knows that its all bcs he loves manvi... Virman moments were magical like always... N this karan... He is a miserable filthy creature... He is not to be blamed actually... He has it in his blood... All thanks to his father... Both are just disgusting... N jeevika is pregnant... Why is it always when manvi is expecting... Beheno ka pyaar thing... Ufff... Anyways i m happy virman left vadera house... Now they may live in peace...
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Wonderful update Nimi..!! 👏👏 Loved it a lot ❤️.. Virat is so perfect! I'm in love with him 😳.. His care and concern for both Manvi and the baby, his protective nature, his selfless love for Manvi, everything is beautifully portrayed ⭐️.. Glad that now Manvi is ready to move on in her life with Virat.. Loved Virman and Virika moments ❤️.. Hope Karan will be punished for his deeds.. Looking forward to the next part.. Take care 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE NIMI...
LOVE VIRMAN AND JEEMAN A LOT HERE😊

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