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Hiii guys I m again with a new os on my most favorite couple taarey if you will find this boring or bakwass so.plz don't kill me as when I was hearing that song so I just opened my word pad and pen down what I feel that time after ending the song I saw that I write a os, its my fastest os ever because I wrote it in 5 minutes where the music end and end in next 5 min so I wrote this os in 10 minutes I know too fast ohkk leave all this and enjoy os ohkk one last thing this os is dedicated to my three sweethearts Sam ( saumya) , cutiepie ( shikha) and Neha ,its a small gift for all you three from your yashi diii ,...



Everyone is sitting in a very huge ground but today its not looking so huge because the space in ground is not enough for crowd , crowd is in multiple number than the space , many people are on their terrace for program, and many more are sitting here and there for one glimpse of him, now its time for show , for the show of their favorite pianoist ( sorry guys don't know what exact say to the man who play piano ) curtain rises slowly slowly, the heart beat of every one start rising with the curtain, now curtain are fully rised, yeah there he is sitting on a stool piano is kept in front of him, as soon as girls saw him they start shouting his name " reyaansh , reyaansh " yeah guys the pianoist is non other than reyaansh, but he is list interested, now he start playing his piano, his fingers are moving on piano smoothly , everyone in the ground is become silent , there is pin drop silence in ground ...

*Music starts *

He closed his eyes and face of beautiful girl come infront of his eyes , automatically his lips curved into a most beautiful smile , that girl is playing with the pallu of her saree, she is smiling ...


Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera...
Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera...




Now he come in the scene, she is twirling in happiness, he come there and hold her from her waist, she stop with a jerk and look towards him, there is so much love in his eyes , her hands are on his shoulder, his attention is now on her lips, he is moving close to her lips , she pushed him slightly and ran from there , he start chasing him but girl is running around bed , she is continuously laughing, its enough for him he climbed on bed and finally catch her, he hold her from waist but she is still laughing , he pulled her more closer to himself , their nose are touching their closeness make her conscious she stop laughing and start looking in his deep brown eyes...

Tujhse juda gar ho jaayenge
Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho...

She moved towards her window, bedsheet is covering her bare body , she is staring a full moon , rey come from behind, he is wearing a low waist, he hugged her from behind , his both hands are on her belly , his head is placed between her crook of neck and shoulder, he start kissing her neck, she bent her head for giving him better access , he give her open mouth kisses , she moaned his name in pleasure which make him go more wild, he bite on her shoulder, she cried in pain but soon he start licking that place for readucing the pain, her one hand is moving in his rough hair giving direction to his head , he turn her slowly and lift her in his arms , he placed in her bed and make love with her...

music

She is sitting on stool moving her long slender fingers on the keyboard of piano , her eyes are closed she is totally lost in the aroma of song , magic of tune which she is playing on piano , suddenly she felt some weight on her shoulder, she opened her eyes and look towards her left side, her lips automatically curved into a smile , the Guy is non other than rey her hubby, her love, her life everything for her, now they divert their attention on piano they both start playing piano again this time, the aroma of song and magic of tune is hundred times more than before because this time two heart with one soul are playing it and with so much love and passion ...

Tera mera rishta hai kaisa
Ik pal door gawara nahi
Tere liye har roz hai jeete
Tujh ko diya mera waqt sabhi
Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina
Har saans pe naam tera



Now they are in car, rey is driving the car but his eyes are on his love, his life, his angel , she look towards him and gave him a most beautiful smile of this world or should I say this universe, look look hawa hawa for sometimes but it break by that bloody air just because of that her hair come on her face , he lift his hand towards her face, slowly slowly he remove the strainds of Ger hair from her face and tugged them behind her ears, now he caressed her cheek, he cupped her face from his left hand, they both looking deeply in each other eyes, they forgot their surroundings and all the only thing they could see is infinite love for eachother in their eyes, they both lost in eachother suddenly girls eyes fell on the road, she saw a truck coming towards them, she shout " reyyy.." but its too late truck hit the car, because of hit car rolled four times in air, rey fell from the car, where girl is still in the car, now car finally touched the ground , after some time rey opened his eyes , first thing come in his mind is that girl , he saw the car little far from him, he tried to stand up on his feet but because of pain its difficult to stand up but he didn't give up his hopes,

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho



after so many try he finally stand up on his feet, he goes towards car with his stamble feet, her one hand which was coming from window is deadly lying on the ground, tears automatically flowing from his eyes, he pulled out her from car , now her body is lying on his laps there is no movement in her body, he shook her but still there is no movement in her body, her heartbeats are stop , her breathing are stop , now tears continuously flowing from his eyes endlessly, he shout " taaannniii... taani " and start sobbing after sometimes his vision become blur and he become unconscious ..

Tumhi ho... Tumhi ho...
Tere liye hi jiya main
Khud ko jo yun de diya hai
Teri wafa ne mujhko sambhala
Saare ghamon ko dil se nikala
Tere saath mera hai naseeb juda
Tujhe paake adhoora naa raha hmm..




Alone tears rolled out from his eyes to his cheek by remembered that moment, it about to dropped when someone catch it in middle, he look towards the girl, the girl is non other taani, his taani, she wiped his tears on the other side he continuously looking at her without blinking his eyes , she hold his both hand and made him stand up from stool, she placed his one hand on her waist and with other she intertwined her fingers with his, they start slow dancing, they both are looking in eachother eyes with so much love, now rey hold her from her waist and lift her, he is twirling her in air, her both hands are on his shoulder and she is laughing her heart out, which make rey so happy, he too start smiling with her, her presence make him feel alive, he too smiling her heart out in all those years first time he is actually happy from inside, now he placed her on ground ,

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho..
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho


now she slowly slowly start taking back steps, rey lift his hand in air in order to stop her she too lift her hand but she continuously taking back step as someone pulling her backwards , rey glues on his position after sometime she disappeared in fog and he fell on his knees , its like someone snatched his life for him again , he again shout " taaniii, taani " last one slowly because now no more strength left in his body, tears are continuously flowing from his eyes as destiny marked this tears for him for life long ...



*Music end *

Crowd had a tears in there eyes for sometime they all are still in the magic of his voice, after sometime everyone stood from there places and start clapping for him, now he come back to his senses, everyone shouting his name whole ground or should I say whole world filled up with the sounds of clapping, whole crowd is behaving like mad after hearing his voice ," he is perfect " a girl from the crowd said in her hubby ear while clapping for him, " no one is perfect sharon " he said while wiping his tears, " but why swayam " she asked confusingly, " he is blind sharon " swayam said, " what are you kidding with me , I mean the way he moved his fingers in piano was amazing its not a work of blind person and his voice is not only touch the mind it touched the heart " she complete with I won look, "sharon love have a great power which can't be seen or touched it only felt and rey is pianoist not by his choice he is pianoist for Mrs.taani shekhawat singania dream , and in one accident he lost his everything, his eyesight, his wife , his love and my ..." he didn't complete his sentence tears were flowing from his eyes and he ran from there but Sharon stood on her place or should I say glued to her position, " and your sister " sharon said shockingly , she covered her mouth with her palm tears flowing from her eyes, she turn towards stage where rey looking towards sky as he is talking with his life , his love, his taani, on his every breath her name is written, his heart beats are beating for her , " I don't need my eyes because from those eyes I can't see you so what's the benefit of that eyesight and you know taani I don't need eyes to saw you because I can see you from closed eyes, you live in my heart taani and whenever I miss you , I wont look for you in my dreams or try to hear your voice in your messages , I just put my right hand across my chest and feel you " he said still looking towards sky tears are continuously flowing from his eyes, " love makes life live ... absolutely true, today I understand the true meaning of love, you are right swayam love has a great power, which always teach how to live a life but always in different ways to different people " sharon said while wiping her tears and ran from there behind swayam, here on stage he again saw her she is smiling on him with a I m proud of you look, now he hold her hand tightly so that she couldn't go from there, he closed his already closed eyes, he put his head on her shoulder, after some time as he opened his eyes he saw his empty hand, she is not there , she already gone,

It hurts when you have someone in your heart , but you can't have them in your arms ...



End ...

I hope I didn't bore you so much...plz hit like and do comments what you feel and all the silent readers at least hit like button ...



Edited by --taareylove--- - 12 years ago

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DoubleCheese thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg...its perfect jaan...i love it so much...

first i thought ki rey is sad because taani left mumbai...but after i read further story i came to know that may be she died and yes she died...the way u expressed rey's pain...just amazing...he was imagining taani there...and when she was going back...really i had tears in my eyes...

their past cute memories were lovely but then the accident...that one day change the world for him...he lost his life and eye sight...its really heart touching os jaan...great work...

keep up the good work...
Edited by CrazyDips... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: .-Arpita-.

Dipu dii 😡 😡
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😉 😳 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome os
really very emotional and filled with love
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: .-Arpita-.

Dipu dii 😡 😡
Res



koi baat nai arpu ab tu jaldi se unres kar de or technically ur the first dear as pari ko maine pehle hi msg kar diya tha
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res!!!!!!!!!!
Unres!
Yashii!!!! Wat a come back!!!! 😲
Aate hi sabko rula diya!!! 😭 ... bad girl!!! Itna jyaada koi kaise rula sakta hai!!! 😭 😭
U dedicated dis os to me!!! Vo bhi as a gift 😲 😲 ... senti kar diya sweetheart!!! Ek to aisa os upar se ur soo sweet ki khushi ke aasu aagaye to hav a sis lyk u!! 😭 😭 luv u sweetheart!!! 🤗
Coming to d os!!! Mai describe kar hi nahi sakti!!!! Pehle to rey a pianist ( even i dont know ki use kya kehte hain😆)
Mujhe bhi pehle dipu di jaise hi laga dat taani left mumbai n rey is alone ...!!
N den those flashbacks of their sweet n romantic moments!!! Awww... really awesome!!
Chalo atleast flashbacks me to itna nai rulaaya!!-_- ... n it was really😳😳😳... no proper word to describe!!!
My fav flashback scene was d one where rey comes frm behind taani n keeps his head on her shoulder n both play d piano together!!! Mere liye imagining d scene itself was over rejoicing!!!!😳... sach me it looks lyk an eternal lovebirds... epic!!! 👏
N den d accident wala flashback!!!! 😭 😭 😭 ... cant even think of it!!! Rulalo jee bhar ke yashi!!😭
Rey missing taani!!!😭... just loved d whole os n d cherry on d cake was d song... d most romantic song... d most heart touching one!!! Awesome yaar!!!! 👏👏...
Rey is blind!!! 😲 😲 😲 ... ha ha itna rulaaya vo bhi kaafi nai tha to ye bhi daal do... aur rulao!!! 😭
God!!!! Amazing yaashi... d way swayam told about love n u wrote about love in d last few lines... hats off!!! Loved d wayu descibed about love!!! N sabse jyaada wat swayam told!!!...
In d end again dis superb line..."It hurts wen u hav someone in ur heart,but u cant hav dem in ur arms..." 😭... so true 😭
Hawww!!! U wrote it in 5-10 minutes!!!! Kyun shock de rahi ho behna!!! 😲... chalo ab iska credit mai le leti hu... after all ur my sweetheart!!!😉😆... itna rulane ke baad bhi i loved d is sooo much!!! Ab is se jelous mat hona... i luv u more😉🤗😆
BDW... WELCOME BACK!!!!!!🤗
Edited by shikha_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg...
it is perfect...
sooo touching...
loved it to the core...😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kyun roying ???
Me also roying 😭😭
Dipu di stole my first place 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Perfectly expressed.. It made me cry...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Seriously Yashi u made me speechless yr!!!!
I have no words to describe that how beautifully u wrote...!!!
Totally amazing OS!!!
Emotional too!!
Hats off to u👏👏

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