~ Kyun ~ A Zoya's Prov - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
Res :)
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That was deep
Wow, I loved it
Zoe's really feeling like this, I could tell
Really enjoyed reading it jaani
Continue soon
Arigato (thank you in Japanese) 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Happy B'day, Shormi and Anjali! (Belated!)

Ankie,

Great concept! I loved the way you left it...so that you can pick it up later if you want to...that shayari was too good!👏

Also noticed how tactful you were with Zoya's thoughts...all about the family until the very end when the cat is out of the bag in the form of that shayari...😉
Edited by chicksoup - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you everyone! 🤗

Noodle. Well Ahem Ahem! I Will let a part of a secret out. I dont know what you guys are talking about i didnt see IPK but yes that LOVE SCENE of Arhi where Arnav Saves Khush i was the part i had apparently seen, i had seen it and there Arnav remembers those dialogues that part i added 🤣

Was that episode really nicoo? O.o!

Noodle you see i really wanted to un-mute Zoya, she at the end of the day is a 16yr old confused girl. I dont even know if i am successful as a writer or as a story teller or a a PROV teller. This but was not as a Story that is all i can say. :P

Just wanted to share what Zoya might have been feeling at that moment :P .

Does that need another part?

Am tired. BIG time thats why 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this was really explorative for zoya's emotions...even at that time she couldn't stop her shers!!
i liked it...

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