Tere Bin Na Jee Sakenge ...Kriyansh ... link added on pg1..

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TERE BIN NA JEE SAKENGE...

Hey guys my first os ever...dnt knw how it turned out to be...but still thought to share with u all...it is my version how i wanted kriyaansh story to proceed...my first attempt to write an os..fingers crossed.i wish aly u hv been here..missing u so much b back soon...guys do leave ur feedback...


story starts from FL..the scene where rey tried to talk to kria but kria moved off but b4 she can leave rey said something tht brought krias whole world crashing down

humesha ke liye chodke jaa rahi ho aur ek bar goodbye bhi nahi bologe..

rey said making kria stop in her tracksshe was shocked is definitely an understatement..she just stood their like a statue..Getting no response from her rey moved towards her while looking into her eyes he said

Dehradun ja rahi ho aur bathaya bhi nahi dont I deserve that much atleast 😭

hurt evident in his voice evn krias eyes were filled.she was not getting what to say..she was completely shocked + confused tht how come he knew bcoz she hadnt shared it with any1 may be bcoz she herself was nor ready to accept it..

kria: app ye kya kehrahe ho I m not getting u??🤢

rey: plz kria dont try n pretend mujhe sab pata hai ur moms condition n ur promise he replied with moist eyes n chocked voice..as he was trying hard not to break

kria: aapko kaise patha?😲😲

Rather replying rey took her to a nearby room n locked it n then turned to kria who was waiting for his reply

Rey: actually jab who sab horaha tha,,I was there itself

Kria:kya???😲😲


Rey: ha actually kal raat tumahri mom ka phone n uske baad tumhara ph switch off aur aaj tum late bhi thi I was very tensed kyuki main jantha tha ki tumahre liye FL kya hai n I sensed tht something is wrong..isiliye ye jante huye b ki neha n sab tumhe lena aa rahe hai I thought to visit u..mujhse raha nahi jar aha tha so I came to see u I was abt to meet u when ur mom came in ur room..uske baad tum dono ke beach job hi baat huye I heard..i came to know that you are going to leave me forever😭

Kria was shocked 2 know this but when rey said last lines tht broke her she just lowered her eyes.how is she gonna face him? How is she gonna tell him y she choose her friends over him OVER THEIR LOVE..

Sensing her thoughts rey hold her by shoulder n brought her close

Kria:rey I m sor..😭

Rey:sshh dont be..

Kria looked @ him n he gave her a lil smile with moist eyes

Rey: dont b sorry kria bcoz I m proud of u..i m proud ki maine yehsi ladki ko chunna hai jo khud se pehle apne dosto ke bare main soch thi hai I m proud tht ur mine u knw galti meri hai agar maine tumhare mom ke samne apne good image banayi hothi agar main unke dil main jagah bana patha tho sayed aaj tumhe ye face nahi karna padtha I m so sorry for putting u in this situation😭😔

Kria: sshh..rey aapki koi galti nahi hai ..galti meri thi maine mom se jhoot bola its all my fault..maine unhe hurt kia.aur ab apko bhi hurt kar rahi hu😭

Rey:dont u dare say tht tum mujhe kabhi hurt kar hi nahi sakti LLHH Kria cant v b together hum kuch kar nahi sakte.i dont wanna lose u..i dont wanna leave without u😭

While saying this hurt n pain was crystal clear in his voice kria lowered her eyes she hv no words to say evn she cant leave without him but they hv too..may b destiny wanted this

Kria: kash kash hum kuch kar sakte par nahi kuch nahi hosakta.. rey mom kabhi nahi manege not @ any cost🤢

Rey: main ek bar unse baat karu plz I mean main unse puchunga ki unhe mujhse kya problem hai I promise main who sab karunga jo who chahte hai I m ready to do anything but not ready to lose u I cant leave without plz let me try atleast😭😭.(he sounded so desperate)

Seeing him in that state was killing her .may b any other girl in her place would hv been so happy to have a guy like him in her life who can love her this much but kria was shattered to see him like this n was cursing herself for doing this too him

Kria: rey plz dont make it more difficult for me hum saath nahi ho sakte.. just accept it may be humara saath yahi tak tha rey plz ek last promise karoge mujhse?

Rey was not able to say anything he just nodded his head signaling her to continue

Kria: move on rey..plz move on just forget me..(she said stammering as she was well aware of reys out brush)

Rey:kria have u gone😲 rey was about to shout as he was hell angry never in his worst nightmare he can evn think of moving on..then loving some1 rather thn kria was totally out of question but kria stopped him

Kria: Rey try n understand humara koi future nahi hai..apko kya lagtha hai ye mere liye aasan hai..apse yeh khena ya apko kisse aur ke saath imagine bhi karna its killing me rey but v have too..this is wht is decided for us plz rey yehse future ke sapne dekhne se koi fayda nahi hai jo kabhi sach nahi ho sakte hum saath kabhi nahi ho sakte n moreover u deserve some1 far far better than me..jo apse beintehan pyaar kare jo aapko who har khushi de jo aap deserve karte ho..(wiping his tears) jo apke aankho main kabhi aasu na aane de..na ki meri tarah jo in tears ke wajah hai.. jo apka saath har kadam par de na ki meri jase jo apko humare safar main ke beach raha main chod kar jarah hu😭😭

she said all this closing her eyes..as each word was cutting her..her heart was breaking into millions of pieces with evn the thought of rey with somebody else.but she knew she have too as she wanted him to be happy she was abt to continue but..

Rey: enough😡(thts it..rey had it enough..how can she evn think tht he would move on!!!!!!...doesnt she trust him enough to believe in his love.) enough kria..its enough how can u even think tht I would move on?? Tho tumhe ab bhi yehi lagtha hai ki main ek Casanova hu..jo tumhare jane ke baad kise aur ke saath😡😲😡(making a disgusting face) n with a hurtful expression asked dont u trust me kria..mere pyaar par yakeen nahi hai na??

Kria was trying to say something but rey never gv a chance..

Kria:rey I didnt mean😒

Rey: then what do u mean kria ..tum ye chahte hu ki tumhare jathe hi main kise aur ke saath.tumhe bhula kar kise aur se pyaar karu tho WHT THE HELL DO U MEAN??😡😡 Shouting at the top of his voice.

Kria: rey I just want u to b happy..

Rey: n u think I will b happy without u.with somebody else..kria tumhare is baat nahi mujhe bahot hurt kia hai..😭😭

Kria: rey kise ke janne se zindagi nahi rukti..🤢

Rey: aur puri duniya milke bhi us insaan ki kami puri nahi kar sakti...😡😡

Now kria was irritated he was not ready to understand her pov

Kria: fine.tho kya chahte ho aap wht do u want us to do??

Rey: just trust me kria

Kria: rey y cant u just aceept tht

Will u be able to move on kria?? Kria was shocked by reys quesshe dont nw wht to say but she thought may be her answer may change reys mind

Kria:may be rey..times can heal everything may be main kise aur se...

She said not meeting his eyes.while rey just smiled with moist eyes n brought her close to him

Rey:dont kria..dont pain urself more ur already going thru so much ab plz mere liye jhooth bol ke aur takleef mat do apne aapko..😔

Kria just hugged him n cried her heart out..now only her heart was working while his brain had taken a back seat

Kria: nahi rey kabhi nahi..apke alava kise aur ke bare main tho main soch bhi nahi sakti agar chahu bhi tho nahi I cant leave without u rey apke jagah meri life main koi nahi le saktha koi nahi..u mean world to me..apke bagair main nahi reh pavonge but v hv too rey v have no other option mom kabh nahi manege I dnt wanna leave u rey I NEED U..I NEED U WITH ME FOREVER..😭😭

both were crying their heart out n were trying to stop this moment..with every passing sec reys grip was getting tighter n he was pulling her more into himself as if hiding her from the whole world so that no 1 can try to steal her.but who can stand against fate ...kria atlast broke the hug but rey didnt left her he once again pulled her back in a tight hug saying..kria plz just let me feel u.i wanna feel u plz.kria too joined it as she knew she woild b carving for those arms forever forgetting everything they were just leaving in the moment but it was broken by ph call..they broke the hug but still they were close to each other..kria saw the caller id then reality stuch her..she looked @ rey who was already looking at her..

kria:mom ka phone hai..

rey just gave a nod n steeped back

kria:hello maa..

sm: kria kaha ho tum? Abhi tak tumhara competataion katam nahi huya??kahi tum..

kria: maa plzz

sm: fyncome home soon..kal subah v have early morning flight to catch n u hv to take rest to b fyn

kria: I cant be fine maa..looking @ rey who was closing his eyes as he knew tht the tym had come for them to get apart

sm:kya?

Kria: ha..wo ..kuch nahi maa..i ll b back soonbye.

kria cut the call n went to rey to do the most difficult task ever to say GOODBYE..

kria: rey..

rey: janna hai ?which seemed more like a statement thn ques..

kria: janna padega😭

rey:mat javona plz.ruk javo😭

kria: kash ruk pathe..💔

rey closed his eyes n took a deep breathe n holding her hands asked do u trust me kria?😊

Kria: zarurat hai ans karne ki? With a expression like do u really need to ask but rey stayed was determined more than myself..but rey u have too..

Rey: sshh stop u just said u trust me ri8? Kria nodded.then keep that trust in me kria..i promise mujhe nahi patha kaise kab bas itna patha hai tht vll be together mujhe mere na HUMARE PYAAR PAR PURA YAKEEN HAI WE ARE MEANT TO BE

Kria: MAY B WE ARE NOT REY!!🤢

Rey:Kria😲😲

Kria: Rey just think for once..kyu jab bhi hum saath hote hai..humare beech kuch na kuch galat hota hai..jab bhi v start getting along there is always a wrong thing waiting for usphir chahe who rdx ki party ho,elections,rose day, ya phir humare saath hone ke baad apka who notice..sayed hum ek hone ke liye nahi bane haiisiliye tho humare beach itni mus hoti rehte hai.accept it plz tht we r

Rey:Meant to be😃

tumne sahi kaha kria..ur absolutely ri8 at the same tym completely wrongto which kria gv a confused look seeing tht rey smiled n continuedtumne examples bilkul sahi diye but conclude galat kia.kria destiny humme alag nahi ek karna chahte hai.nahi tho kaise hum ho ek party main mile the how did we ended up here where we r today.just imagine kria aaj tak har kadam par destiny ne humme ek dusre ke samne lakar kadha kardia..rdx ke party y did out of all we ended up being together.ab ye mat kehna ki ye ek coincidence hai kyuki tum aur main dono jante hai ki kya sach hai..har bar har mod par hum hi kyu??col. trip,elections,karan ne bhi humme hi chuna swaron ko ek karne ke liye.dance fest..y kriajust think tumne hi kaha tha ki destiny ke against koi nahi ja saktahere is the proof kria agar abhi bhi tumhe yakeen nahi hai tho tell me 1 thing Y DID I HEARD U N URS MOM CONVO..isnt thts destinykria tumhare universeji humme bathaba chahte hai ki V R JUST MEANT TO BE..❤️❤️

Kria:par main kal ja rahi hu rey!!!😭

Rey: pata hai..par mujhe ye bhi patha hai ki agar humara pyaar sacha hai tho tum nahi javoge agar humara sach hai tho takdir humara saath zaroor dege kismet ko humme ek karna hoga U WILL BE WHERE U BELONG U WILL BE MINE FOREVER KRIA

Kria: Rey thts😕

Rey: thts possible.idk ki kaise aur kab par patha hai ki humme koi alag nahi kar sakta.JUST DONT GIVE UP ON OUR LOVE😭..ye humare pyaar ki ladayi hai aur hum isse jeet kar hi rehenge..I LOVE but be4he could complete it kria stopped him by placing her fingers on his lips

Kria: plz aage mat kehna.warna main ja nahi pavonge.puri tarah tut javnge rey plz💔

Rey kissed her fingers n brought them down while kria closed her eyes n let her tears talk

Rey:fine abhi nahi kahonga but I m dam sure bahot jald bahot jald tumse apne dil ki baat kahunga mujhe humare pyaar par pura yakeen hai.🤗. he saw her crying n too cheer her up he added aur ha u be ready too..kyuki pehle ki tarah I will not wait this timemujhe be mera jawab chahiye n tht too fast😉

Kria just moved to him n wiped his tears n kissed his forehead n his ears whispered" ILL BE WAITING REY N I PROMISE I WILL NOT GIVE UP ON OUR LOVE.WE WILL BE BACK TOGETHER SOON"❤️

Rey just closed hie eyes feeling the moment while kria rushed out..kyuki agar who this der aur rukti tho wahi ruk jate but she knew she cant but now she is sure they will be back..unka pyaar jeet karhi rahegaas soon as she left rey broke down n feel on his knees n started crying HE HAD LOST HIS LIFE HIS REASON TO BREATHE but his heart knows tht no matter what THEY LL BE ONE while his mind is trying 2 protest tht hows tht possible but his heart knew ht THEIR LOVE IS DESTINED THEY R JUST MEANT TO BE N THEY LL BE ONE KRIA N REYAANSH WILL BE KRIYANSH SOON

So guys here it is...my first os😃...plz do leave ur feedback n let me know hw it is n also to continue r not.😕..i hv next part the kriyaansh reunion in my mind but i wanna knw if u guys want me to continue r finise this os her itself with a hope of them getting back together😉...plz mention it in ur comments...😳

second part:
Sasoo ki zarurat hai tu..KR os

third part:
Mera Wajood Tujhse Hai

other kriyaansh works..


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Posted: 12 years ago
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i hate u...tujhe ye abhi likna tha jab main nahi thi...
but i also love u for this ....
its so amazing...fabulous...
u made me cry so much...gosh missing kriyaansh so much...
i so wish kishw ke story main yehsa kuch hota...
chup chap continue kar warna..
i want next part n tht too soon...
missing u too...
i hate our princi jisne hum dono ko saath main holiday nahi di..he want 1 of us in col...mumma missing u lots.
love ya...
bye...take care cutey...will b back soon...

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superb start
amazing
it was wow!!!
my god what an amazing story by you
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me too res over here after it get complete... i will comment back for sure
and so pm me when whole is update... this was a super 😲 when i start reading this...
and rey know the whole truth why kria is do so and she is tak a promise from rey to
move on... this seem to really get interest to read more...
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superb os
rey ne sahi kaha
kriyansh r meant to be
loved it
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Obviously u shuld cont ..

awesum OS..👏

cant wait to read d next part..

do cont soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Supab os
love it
rey n kria ka convo was really sweet n emotional
hope they will be one soon
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Awsum os
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awesome and superb... loved it...
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Luved da os...
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Kash such mein ESA hota ki Rey ko sab pata chale aur kriya ko rok pata..
Pls do give da next part...
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