...GooDByE...An AR fiction by VerOniCa..

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Hey guys,I am Ranya.And this story is not mine and neither it belongs to me.The writer of the story is Veronica.As I know her,and with her permission,this post is made.I will follow the whole story on her behalf here and will reply to you all.So here goes the description,for her story... Hope you will like it...
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Being happy,takes practice
When will somebody see?
I'm like a sun,covered by a cloud
I'm like a song,covered by a sound
I walk down on the road to see you
Our eyes met and I knew
You were the one,we are meant to be
We were together,if only it was so easy
Sooo... Oh Boy! It's time to say GOODBYE...
See me suffer,see me drown
You put me under,You put me down
But it's okay,cause I'm alone in my mind
I really tried to make our love very kind
My heart is crumbling at my feet
And I just want to scream
You were the one,we are meant to be
We were together,if only it was that easy
Sooo...Oh Girl ! It's time to say GOODBYE...

"The story of life is quicker than the wink of an eye.My breaking heart and I agree, that you and I could never be, so with my best...my very best, I set you free.And one more thing,I beleived,I was a little bit in love with you.But I think we should sbid a GOODBYE,I suppose so.Take care." The reason it hurts so much to separate is because our souls are connected. Maybe they always have been and will be. Maybe we've lived a thousand lives before this one and in each of them we've found each other. And maybe each time, we've been forced apart for the same reasons. That means that this goodbye is both a goodbye for the past ten thousand years and a prelude to what will come."
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Note By Writer-Hello people,I am Veronica and this is my story.I have no account on IF.And I am an old blog member,a info to the members who are from blog.I therefore allow Ranya to post my stories on India Forums on my behalf.This is my first ever story,hope you all will enjoy.
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<font size="4">Chapter-1:It is the world mad in Love...</font>


"'SANJEEVANI'-A health care institution providing its patients the best ever treatment by specialized staff and equipments.From the past 10 years,this hospital is the most recommended medical institute all over the India and has occupied the first position as it is capturing it from a decade."The door knocked,I kept the Medicine magazine aside on the side table next to the couch I was sitting and marched towards the door to open.As soon as I pulled the door I got a tight chase on my shoulders,rampling me two steps back,"Muski! Control"I pushed her away growing my eyes wandering what was that?"I can not control more yaar."She stepped in and directly goes to her favourite place in my house,What a foody person can want?-Yeah Kitchen."What is this Ridzi?You are not yet ready in pink?"Her voice echoed in my ears,"Pink?"I whispered.I was confused,I closed the door behind followed her,"Pink?"
I asked her who was gulping a glass of guava juice.She finished that few mLs in one sip and now had her hand cleared on the dark chocos which were in the freezer."You know what I was looking for you there.Haven't you got a text from me on your cell?"She said having bites of my, sorry,now hers' chocos,"Text about what?"I increased the wrinkles on my forehead because three weird things are disturbing me-first,she hugged crushing all my ribs in powder.Second,Why she talked about wearing a pink?and the third,Text?."Muski,y aar will you please give a relax to your hungry tongue and mind to clear the confusions."I begged joining my hands."Yeah yeah for sure,"I text you because,it's valentines,I asked you for pink because it is valentines,I hugged you so crushingly because it is valentines."She screamed in joy everytime at 'its valentines' throwing her hands in air,"So now get change in pink because we are going to the valentine's party."She dragged me towards my room ignoring what I was blabbering.
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"You know Muski,that I don't like this day at all.Please don't give a dirt to this day."I said and she gave me sour look because valentine's day is her favourite day.I immediately wear a smile and giggled but she got a devil in her soul giving me a tuff look,"Okay I am getting ready."I took out the royal blue colour knee length dress from my cupboard and she ran towards me as if I took out a pistol,"What happened Muski?"I frowned."Come on yaar Ridz,today is Valentine's day,wear pink for god's sake."She searched my wardrobe and handed me a pink dress,"Come on yaar,it is a valentine,wear this Katrina Kaif pink tonight."I laughed seeing the tag of Katrina kaif on the hanger of my dress
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"Why are you laughing?What is so funny in this? Without wasting any time move to your washroom and change into pink."She ordered me and I said,"It is Valentine's day.Everybody wears red then why should we wear pink?""Madam because our heart is lacking its love in our life,when we will get our love then we will wear red."She puts one arm around mine's hugging and dragging me towards my washroom.I pouted my lower lip out nodding my head."By the way,one more significance is emphasised by our pink."I closed the washroom door and replied to her changing myself into pink,"Whats that now?""Our pink means we are single,which reflects the handsome hunks in the valentine's party to get committed with us.I am sure my pink dress will surely give me a boyfriend tonight."said her."Wow Muski,what a waiting for a boyfriend.I can't take that how girls manage to have boyfriends."I screamed from washroom."Ridz,everything gets manage.First,you come out and have a glance in your drawer."She said."Drawer questionmark,"I thought.I get out of the washroom,and turned attention to the drawer,I see a paper heart,as soon as I took it into my hands,I examined it had a patterened white lace design and had a pink velvet letter on it outside addressing:Riddhima:As soon as I opened it,I jumped thrice my height and hugged Muskaan."Muski...Muski...Muski... Wow Muski..."I screamed continously in joy."Hayo Rabba! What happened Riddhima?You are well na."She examined the temperature keeping her hand on my forehead."Yeah..I was okay but I am more okay now.Muski...we are going to Mumbai tomorrow.""What?But why?"She made a face."Because,because we got appointed as new interns in Sanjeevani,Mumbai."She was about to faint so she confirmed the news again,"We means you and me or only you?"I held her arms and smiled,"We means us.Dr Muskaan Chaddha and Dr. Riddhima Mallik.""Babaji,I can't beleive.You get wrong indication Ridzi,read this again."She joined her hands looking upwards and then ordered me to read again"You know what Muski,I was reading an article about Sanjeevani in the magazine again before you came.And only thing in my mind was to work in Sanjeevani.And you see the letters read,"I Dr. Shashank Gupta appoints Dr. Riddhima Mallik as a new intern in Sanjeevani,Mumbai.Wish you best luck ahead."And the other one reads,"I Dr. Shashank Gupta appoints Dr. Muskaan Chaddha as a new intern in Sanjeevani.Wish you best luck ahead."Listening this Muskaan fainted."Muski...Muski..." I called Bro who gave this surprise to us and tbhus Muskaan fainted.

Oh god she fell,and thank God,Bro was here,"Ha ha ha Muskaan is drama Ridzi..."My brother comes with a glass of water and sprinkled a few droplets on her eyes to wake her.Muskaan sits and,"Muskaan and Ridhima how was the surprise?I think you both should never give me a complaint again for not giving you any gifts and all."Bro asked."Awesome surprise bro.Muskaan what you say?"I hugged him and Muskaan again confirms the news but this time the tears of joy comes in her eyes.She hugs me,"Thank you Ridzi,it is only because of you and Prashant bro that I am able to fulfill my mummy ji and papaji's dream."

I looked at my brother's face and he nodded to let her fall her tears down.Her mom-dad died when she was five.But she had a huge Punjabi family which she nevers enjoy.And those people never takes a risk to call her.Obviously she can't because her family was the far away twinkling star in the universe who loved her.But I know she has a grandmother who call her once in a month and Muskaan waits for that call everyday.


."Riddhima may I?"Brother takes my permission and wrapped Muskaan in a tight brotherly hug.Muskaan was crying more and more and Prashant bro was consoling him giving all the family love she wants."Omg,when this brother-siater love comes to an end,then please you chatter box come downstairs.I will be waiting for you in the car."I smiled and moves out of the room climbing the stairs down and suddenly stopped when my eyes caught the sigh of a photograph with a golden photograph hanging with the wall.A tear drowned from my eye and I cleared it saying,"Sorry,I promised I will not cry"and moved out.I have seen Muskaan craving for love in her eyes what a mother and father could gave.And I could feel that.I look up in the sky folding my arms in front of my chest,"My father- Late Mr. Anish Mallik-the famous cardiologist of Sanjeevani and my mother-Late Mrs. Anna Mallik- the most successfull business women in India bid a GOODBYE to me when I was in my 12th grade."I faced towards my home's building whose's some portion gave it a royal palace look.I could still live that day when I and Prashant bro got heartstopping news in the television.We couldn't felt the earth down our feet.We both left living.We both were quite as if we had damaged voice box.Muskaan was the chirpest thing which made me realise that she had nothing in her life.She is living alone since she was five.I had my brother but she...?? She have a huge family who didn't ever took a look on her growing face ever.As the time passed,we started to live again always remembering our parent's last words in the hospital,"Prashant and Riddhima...promise that you will never ever cry...For your parent's sake.Always remember in every difficult situation of your life we will be always there for you.Just close your eyes and ask us whatever you want.And whatever reply,you get from your heart,suppose that it is our answer."I close my eyes and a river of tears flowed from my green eyes.I sounded,"Sorry,I...I...""Its okay Riddhima.But no one has my valentine's yet.Will you be?"I was amazed like Oh come on Mr. DevD."Ah...I am sorry Devan...I don't want to hurt you.But I never felt something for you the way you feels.I don't love you.I am sorry."I tried to explain andhe understood because he was the most intelligent guy I knew.I always loved his intelligence,soberit y,frankness,friendly nature aand above all his kindness.But today is the day,I never think to run away from him because we were friends now,"Will you be my friend then?"Devan forwarded a yellow rose.I smiled and accepted the proposal,"For sure,DevD...oops Devan"I bit my tongue as I said DevD as it was the name by which we call him behind his ears.DevD as Devdas because he loved a girl before me which all college knew about,and when she left this college,he became Devdas.


It was 11:50 in the almost midnight when I glanced on the watch.All were busy with their partners having a close dance on the music.And I was amazed at the picture,"Do Lovers look like this?"Anyways,I was searching for Muskaan and saw her smiling with excitement.I go there,"Hey Muski.Whats the matter up?"I asked and,"He is coming this way.He might pass us and stop...and"She was day-dreaming when she found a handsome guy in black shirt and blue denims forwarding towards us.As his figure was enlarging,I make out that he was Rahul-a blue eyed guy,ha ving a superstar personality and the only man whom our SIMS' girls wanted-and one was Muskaan."Stop day-dreaming you physcho...He is Rahul...and don't think he will send you a line of proposal."I laughed and she gave me a mad smile.I looked down putting my fingers on my lips to shut them.I lifted up my eyes only to confirm who was standing infront of me giving a shadow.I saw Rahul looking at me without blinking.I leaned on the stone pillar behind me and saw Muskaan's jealoused face"Hi Ridhima"He said.I gulped in my saliva wondering what is happening.I rolled my eyes just to avoid looking deep into his ones."Ummm...Hi"I said somehow causing my black strands behind my ears.I glanced at Muski who was standing with the hands on her hips making faces."I should go Rahul."I walked a step but he held my hand turning Muskaan's lips to curve into a big O for Owl.I held my hand with one hand and forwarded his other hand having a rose in it tightly close to his chest.The rose colour was deep red with the shade of lavender-my favourite colour."Oh I guess you didn't read the card?"He rescued my hand and scratches his head with it giving a cute boy looks"What? That... that was you?" I stammered. I could hear Muski snort behind me. Then, out of no where, he grabbed my hand,Muskaan turned to go,"Ridzi I'll be waiting for you in the car"I know she loved Rahul ,his other hand held the rose. He got down on one knee, and everyone within a mile radius turned their heads to see who the hottest guy in the party wanted for a valentine. He ruffled his hair again, and looked me in the eye. I glanced at my shaking hand in his, avoiding his gaze. "Will you be my valentine?Miss Muskaan Chaddha." He alouded when he gets up and faces Muskaan's dispersing figure.He turned his head and smiled at me.I gave him a wink and showed him thumbs up.And Muskaan stopped...Muskaan turns and finds Rahul in front of her."Muskaan Chaddha, will you be my valentine?" He asked sweetly, holding up the lavender rose, it's petals shining in the stars and moons. I heard everyone gasp, and the air felt like they had all held their breath, waiting her answer. "I...Ummm...I.."She mumbled.Muskaan takes a gaze on my smiling face and was wondering.I was like Oh my God,Muski is nervous when she swallowed,"Uh...you...you...told we...uh...we were friends and a minute ago you."Rahul got up,took her one hand in hers,and almost whispered a No I think.It was not that much audible.He was whispering something to her but my audio was weak at that time because it could only hear the frequency above 20 hertz.At the end I could see my friend smiling with her best ever smile hugging him.And all clapped.I was happy Muski's dream proposal come true.I looked at the crackers in the sky displaying,"HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY"I smiled and thought,"God! Where is my Valentine's?"I bit my lip as I always wait for him.


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[B]Chapter-1 Overs... Forwards the characters named Ridhima,Prashant,Muskaan,Devan and Rahul...A[B]
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Awesome one...
Luvd it a lot...
Update soon nd plzzz pm me...
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Hey Beautiful start Ranya... 😊
Lovin it, do continue soon... 😛
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Gd start ranya
Do cntinue n plz pm me wn u update
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A very Good start...Hope you will continue...plz pm me when you do update...😊

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