||Itti Si Khushi||- A VirMan SS Part3#2

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Part 1

'Sometimes in life,We feel so blue,
But someone,somewhere is not as happy as YOU!'
I noted down these words as they came to my mind. What if life has been harsh on me? I have always had the most amazing people around me who will support me to death. I have the bestest sister in the world,the most wonderful jiju,the perfect family and,and,and...my best friend,best of the bestest! :)
I heard the door opening up and quickly slipped inside my blanket.
"Partner." He said.
"Hmmm." I replied in a sympathetic voice.
"Time to go to the doctor." This was the lone thing I hated in my life,visiting the doctor. What if I had Cancer? Let me be at home na,why do create this doc fuss?
"Viraaat! Marne wale ko apno ke sath zyada samay bitaana chahie." I made a puppy face expecting that he'll cancel my appointment.
"Manvi,stop being careless and get ready." He sternly said & left the room.
Since the day Virat came to know about my cancer,he has slipped into depression. I'm the only person he talks to and the hospital is the only place he goes to with me. He talks to no one else. He doesn't come at the dinner table. He has locked up himself in his room. While at house,his movements are restricted from his room to mine and from my room to his. What I am worried about is Virat and not my disease. It hurts to see him so lost and lonely. I agree it hurts him too. But.. I feel guilty of destroying his life. I wish I could die and he becomes the Virat I knew. Di,Jiju & other family members know that Virat's this condition is because of the shock of my disease. But they never ever blame me and this eats me up. It eats my soul. I have started hating myself. At this point of time in life,I wanted Virat to be with me,being optimistic,but it's simply the opposite.
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Hope you like the start. Will update soon!

Love,
Palak :)


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Part 2-Page1
Part 3-Page2
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Syed695 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome Start.,!!! Waiting for the next..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is a fab start ... continue soon and do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Not only like but i really love it
sounds damn good n interesting
realllyyy looking forward to reading this
plzzz update quickly n do pm me 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome start palak
lovely please pm when next part is updated!
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Part 2

We reached the hospital. My every visit to the doctor unfolded a new story about my disease which stabbed through Virat's heart and tore him even more apart. I sat silently in the doctor's cabin and waited for him to come. On my left was Di,and on my right was Virat.
The doctor entered with some files in his hand and carried a rather tensed look.
"What do the reports say Doctor?" Virat questioned as soon as he saw him entering.
I could hear my heart beat. I gulped a lump and asked,"Doc,I am absolutely fine,isn't it?"
"Look,Ms. Manvi,things are not going the way they were planned. We will have to increase the amount of drug dosage and it will lead to increased side-effects. And if,I repeat,IF,this doesn't work as well..we have no option left." The doctor went on saying. I pity how tough the job of doctors is. Telling the patient that he's gonna die. A man needs a big heart to do all this.
"Oho,bas itti si baat? Doctor,you please do not worry at all! The half battle is already won by my optimism and rest...umm,I'll give your drugs a pep talk!" I winked,holding back my tears,with a huge grin plastered on my face.

Upon reaching home,Virat went straight inside my room whereas I was busy with others,convincing them that I'll be fine. How weird? Mujhe khud ko nahi pata kab mera sath zindagi se chooth jaaye aur main yahan duniya ko samjha rahi hoon? I wish,Virat could have this optimism. I entered my room and saw Virat changing my medicines. He was not aware of anything in this world,but by any chance,he never forgot to check on my medicines.
"Virat.." I whispered.
"You must sleep. Good night." He was about to leave but I caught his hand.
"Why have you changed so much partner?" I questioned him in his face.
"Manvi,I want to be alone. Please." Came a rigid reply from him
"Kab tak Virat? Kab tak??" I shouted at the top of my voice and felt short of my breath. I was unable to breathe. I lost my balance and held on to Virat tightly. He caressed my hair and rubbed my back. He carried me in his strong arms and made me lie down. He gave me my medicines,sat with me for a while,ruffling through my hair and then left. I was too weak to think about all that happened today and fell into a deep slumber.
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Happy Raksha Bandhan folks! :)
Really hope you guys like this part too. Will update by the end of this month. Tk cr! :)
Edited by -MoNayalicious- - 12 years ago
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Awesome Once again.>!!! Loved Maanvi's optimistic attitude and eager to read on how will she break through Virat..as he is 1 affected the most...Thanks for the PM..!!1
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really enjoying this story
but hating that virat has becime isolated
eagerly waiting for next chappy
thanx for the pm
continue soon 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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manvi being really positive is soo cute she just makes me smile with her words 😃
but virat needs to let out his feelings he needs to speak it out not to manvi atleast to his bro he should behave positive with manvi ...more than the disease hurting her its his behaviour she is hurt ...update next part soon and thanx alott for the pm 😃
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awesome lovely update!
thanks for the pm

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