virman ff:journey of life thread #2 - Page 82

just read last four updates.. amazing...so sweet of virat he took care of manvi so nicely..but happiness doesnt stay long..feeling bad for manvi first she lost her child n then virat also lost his memory n didnt recognize manvi..cont soon n plz pm me wen u update. .nw wil coment regularly...Edited by shabsem - 10 years ago

hey im soo sorry for not commenting for da last few updates!! I got up with my college n all! n coming to da updates!! oh my poor poor virman wat happen to them! they lost they baby n now virat forgot manvi! its so sad. but its gonna get intresting! can't wait to read more.update soon dear!!

Originally posted by: shaanu0111

Sorry for late reply

But an awesome update and you are going to start my fav storyline.

I just like when someone looses his memory and he fall in love.I just loved it.

I'm happy that both are fine...Anyhow feeling sorry for manvi.

You just explained manvi's love on virat is just excellent.

And the feelings of vadhera family especially jeevika's.

Loving their bonding so much.

And shiv I like this style of writing and i'm saying about this. Love this so much.

Thanks for the PM. Do update soon.

Takecare

Originally posted by: ashishi

Mum mum mum mumaa🤗

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nice update di...thanks for pm...🤗

update ke end mein like button bhi hai jisko press karna hota hai 🤣

sannu donno Jagha kar ditte hain 🤣
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unress
shivali I don't have problem with ur note and its brilliant Idea to try something new not repeated
now coming to update
it was really very splendid 👏 👏
it was super long and love the way portray the manvi's feeling
and the song suit it a lot 😊
but feel sad for manvi, she didn't know about her miscarriage...omg
the way virman meet again on terrace was fab
loved Virat and his Jealousy ❤️...seriously I loved the line where he says, her tigress and this one

* why am getting jealous from her husband?

* why it is bothering me that her husband cares for her or not?
brilliant work
thanx 4 the Pm
eagerly waiting for next part 😃
update soon 😊

With Love ❤️
ur Old SISI 🤣
Janaat😉

Edited by Jannat94 - 10 years ago

kaha hai like ka button o.O

Originally posted by: fatima06

kaha hai like ka button o.O