'Aazmaaliya'/ 'I’ve Encountered'(poetry)

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Lady Zaib

@LadyZaib

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Posted: 19 years ago

#11

Beautifully penned dc, touched those heart strings, you and sareeta have an amazing talent!

put lonesome and aazmaliya together and it describes life perfectly! indeed the threshold of gauri n shiv life!

welldone n keep em coming 👏 👏

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JCluvs srk

@JCluvs srk

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Posted: 19 years ago

#12

oh....my....god.....this is beautiful.....it fits shiv/gauri sooooo well....oh my god i feel my heart breaking all over again. 😭 😭 gauri is dead...pata nahi aab shiv kaise jiye ga

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Areej

@Shezaadi

Inactive

Posted: 19 years ago

#13

Absolutely Amazing! I think I've said that to everything I've read written by you... but it's all that comes to mind when i finish reading! 👏

I think it's because you yourself are truly amazing! 😉

I loved the last 4 lines they were very touching 😳

Thnx soo much for sharing ur extremely talented posts!

P.S. haven't been able to catch on ur FF for the last couple of days, rly looking forward to catching up on all the parts once i'm done wid exams 😉

-Areej 😉

Edited by Shezaadi - 19 years ago

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desi chic

@desi chic

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Posted: 19 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: 3 angels
neetu just great and well-writen.. 😊 Thank you ji!😃

yeah it reflects the situation of gauri/shiv and esp the death scene ... does it? haha, it is purposeful!😆

good job and keep it up and these for you as you deserve it... 👏 👏 👏 thanks jaanu!! muwwaaah!!😆
Cheers,

dc

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desi chic

@desi chic

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Posted: 19 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: anika22
the last line just touched my heart.......and you say ur not all that good....
how is it that you can write hindi and then do the translation equally beautifullyy??? u amaze meeeeee..

Anika darling, you've touched my heart with your kind words... *sighs* You're too much!😳 ... Meh, translations are difficult sometimes as it appears as though Eng words are not exact in comparison to Hindi, but I try... Haha, yaar you amaze me with all these commentos!! I've got the trademark langoor smile because of you guys!!😃😆

Cheers,