AarYa SS Our Baby part 1/page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi.
I am starting new SS.
OUR BABY

"We are so sorry Mr.Scindiya, we cant save your child," Doctor said.
Yash mind is not registering his words.

"What doctor?" he asked not believing that.

Doctor holds his shoulder and says sorry.

Yash sits there heart broken holding his head.

His wife comes into his thought.
How will she react?
How is she now.

"doctor !how is my wife?" he asked praying god not wanting to listen any bad news.

"She is fine.
Will be conscious after some hours" dr said.

*******

"Bhaiya! Please go to aarti bhabi.
If you cant control yourself how will you control her. Please bhaiya" prateek comforted yash controlling his tears.

Yash goes to aarti room.
Aarti who is asking the nurse where is her baby looks yash coming there.

She looks at him with a wide grin.
She sits on the bed.
"yash ji! You are here.
Look no one is answering me.where is our baby.
I want to see him.
Why are you not saying anything?"
she talks in one breath even though hell tired.
Yash looks down not able to look at her hopeful eyes.

She turns to the nurse not getting any response from yash.
She is feeling weird about his behaviour.

"nurse where is my baby. Please bring him here. If not possible atleast take me to him.
I wanna see him.
Why the hell is everyone silent here?"
she is getting irritated.

Yash sits before her.
He holds her by shoulders and hugs her tight.

Tears are flowing continuous from his eyes wetting her shoulder.

"yash ji! I am all fine now. Why are you crying?" she hugs him back.

"aaarti ji! Our baby..."
he stops not able to continue.

"our baby is no more aarti ji!" he tells still hugging her.

Her heart almost stopped.

He looks at her not getting any response.

He shooks her
"aarti ji!"

Aarti looks at him.
"y..a..sh ji!baby"
she started to cry holding him.
Her small cry turned to loud cries.
He holds her tightly.

She faints in her arms crying.


So how is the prolouge?


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Posted: 12 years ago
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so heart breaking prologue dear😭😭

aaryas symbol of their love no more😭😭
i hope both support each other to get over this grief i know its not easy especially for aarthi but aaryahad long way to go

so waiting for ur update
i want u to continue as i want to know how aarya supports each other😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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a heart-breaking prologue🥺 dear...

so sad...our aarya lost their baby😭😭...their symbol of love❤️

continue soon...btw my name is also anusha😉


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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG... That's too 🥺 !! 😭😭😭 Pity AarYa and the family !! 😭😭

Excited for next...

Congo for the new SS and Thanks for coming up with this !! ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg!!! So emotional!!!
Looking foward to the story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was really emotional
looking forward for the story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Heart-breaking!!!! Is this when Aarti was hit accidentally in the stomach by the ball?!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Emotional but different...hoping to c a new turn of your story...Good one dear !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice prologue. Please continue soon. Waiting ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting prologue..will be waiting for update

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