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DoubleCheese

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Posted: 12 years ago

#601

Originally posted by: crazy2012
Awesome update Dipu behena😊
Thank God that gang realised its mistake..warna..
umm tauji is good

and my suggestion for mehendi songs:

1. Banno Raani Tumhe Sayani, Hona hi tha Hona Hi Tha

2, Banno re Banno chali sasural ko from YJHD

3. Mehendi hai rachne wali haatho mein gehri laali

4. Banno ki mehendi kya kehna..banno ka jora kya kehna - KKKG

Hope this helps you, I have got lots of knowledge😉

thanks behena...

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DoubleCheese

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Posted: 12 years ago

#602

Originally posted by: lakshluvsD3nHHL
Unred comment on page 91😊

ya i saw...thank u...

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DoubleCheese

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Posted: 12 years ago

#603

Originally posted by: Karan_TaaRey
Super Amazing update di..
Plz plz plz plz Update soon :( -_-
Excited to see TaaRey In Park...with sam😆👍🏼

thanks karan...

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DoubleCheese

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Posted: 12 years ago

#604

Originally posted by: riachandnani
Awesome update loved taani tauji meet!!! N glad d gang realized their mistake!! So sorry for late comment! Thnx for d pm...

thank u so much...

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DoubleCheese

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Posted: 12 years ago

#605

Originally posted by: dance_with_me

the screen says erro plz i realy want to see your work
i try to add you but somehow i cant
can you try to add me because i am new
and i dont go on computers alot and i dont have fb
i just have hotmail which i dont realy use more the this
can you help me
it is the first time i am intrested in entenet
plz plz help

u can read it now dear...

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DoubleCheese

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Posted: 12 years ago

#606

Originally posted by: chinudolly
dipu , i read d first part just now and i was like 😲
m speechless yaar , dont know what 2 say , i like that taani gave answers 2 all d rude comments and then proved herself and after that dupatta part was lovely but rey couldnt recognize her was shocking , then she went from there far away very far away . and then karan shikhawat and pooja shaikhawat n all part was superbly awesome , amazing and damn interesting 👏,⭐️, taani gave name 2 their boy " swayam " and then their accident😭😭 and now sam will call mumma 2 taani😳😳
i loved this story , really commendable yaar⭐️
and ya sorry 4 late comment but i was really very busy

thank u moni...and its ok...

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DoubleCheese

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Posted: 12 years ago

#607

Originally posted by: chinudolly
chapter- 2
beautiful , lovely , taarey's dreamhouse ,👏👏 
👏⭐️⭐️
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love those lines u wrote in blue , which taani say while seeing reyam's photo and missing them , totally outstanding 
taani caring 4 sam and sam also care 4 taani 
 and wow wow wow , rey will be performing in that marriage and taani will be planning that marriage , interesting 😳😳 ab taarey milenge - maja aayega , m super duper excited , 😳 i m running 2 read next chapter 😉😉😉


and ya hate that stupid idiot gang 😡
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thanks alot...

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DoubleCheese

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Posted: 12 years ago

#608

Originally posted by: chinudolly
cant comment in between while reading ch- 3 and ch- 4 , they were so damn interesting , superb , awesome , love them 2 d core , taarey 's meet and new twists were amazing , 😛i love sam , sooo cute , baby hehe and loved those childhood pics also 😳😳 so so cute , and rey got 2 know that sam's dad is no more now , 😲😲 , and 
gang ki to dishum dishum karne ka dil kar raha tha 😡😡😡 so hate them , and vp sir arjun's dad nice , and tauji searching 4 taani , great 😆,
in short totally loved both d chapters , m very excited 2 read more , 
DIPU U R REALLY AN AMAZING WRITER , AND NOW THIS FF OF URS IS ALSO ONE OF MY FAVORITES , I SO SO LOVED IT , READING SOMETHING VERY AMAZING AND BEAUTIFUL AFTER SO MANY DAYS 
👏👏👏
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again thank u so much for your lovely comment...

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BeingFoodie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#609

GUYS...FINALLY I M BACK...BUT I CAN ONLY POST 15 POST IN 24 HOURS...SO SORRY IF I COULDNT COMMENT ON UR FF OR SS...

SILENT READERS PLZ ATLEAST HIT LIKE.

CHAPTER 7

at the park:

Taani and sam came in the park. Its evening so there are many peoples in the park. Taani was wearing a long skirt and a half sleve top.

"mumma...hum park me to aa gaye...but hum to yaha new hai..so mere to koi dost bhi nahi hai yaha par..."said sam with a sad face...

"aww my baby...dont worry...new friends bana lo...dekho yaha to kitne sare kids hai...u like to made new friends na..so go and play...me yaha bench pe bethti hu..."said taani

"ok mumma ...i will be back soon.."said sam and ran from there.

Taani sat on the bench . She saw that sam is so fast to maje friends. He made friends and start to play with them. Taani smile looking at him.

Rey was looking this from a distance. He came and sat beside taani but taani was busy adoring her baby. She didnt notice him.

"vese tumhari smile aaj bhi vesi hi hai...jise dekh ke dil ko bahot achha lagta hai"said rey and taani's smile fad away...she look at rey and get shocked.

"aap yaha kya kar rahe hai??"ask taani

"vo me bas yuhi ghumne aaya tha...tumhe dekha to yaha aa gaya...tumse milne..."said rey and went little closer to her.

Taani stand up and start walking. Rey also start walking behind her.

"vese sweetheart..."rey was saying but taani glare at him...

"taani...ya i know your name is taani...ha to ye batao ki angel name achha hai ya kiara ya khwaish???"ask rey coming beside her...both were walking...

"me kyu batau...aap ko jo achha lage.." said taani..

Rey came infront of her and start walking backword so he can see her face...(i hope u guys get it...)

"ye llo...ab jab hamari beti hogi to name bhi to dono ko hi decide karna honga na" said rey...taani's eyes become wide as he said this. Her whitish cheek become red but she controll herself and make an angry look.

"stop dreaming rey..."said taani...still both were walking.

"ab vo to mere bas me nahi hai...i cant stop dreaming about you..."said rey...taani look in to his eyes directly and for some seconds she get lost in his ocean blue eyes but soon she came back in her sense...

There was a little pond in the park...but rey was unware of that. Both keep walking...rey was walking backward so he didnt notice the pond and taani was busy giving him angry looks so she also didnt notice.

"i love youuu..."rey was saying this under his breath...but as he came to "you"...he fall in the pond because he was walking backward. Taani didnt realise that what happen because it happen in fraction of seconds but when she saw rey in the pond so couldnt help but burst out laughing. She was laughing full heartedly. When rey saw her laughing after so long he also smile but then he thought to do some masti. He make an angry face and said "taani...tumhe hasi aa rahi hai??how could you??"

Taani imidgetly stop laughing and look here and there..people were looking at them. Then she look at him. He was angry...

"ab khadi hi rahogi ya mujhe hath bhi dogi taki me bahar aa pau.."said rey..

Taani immidgetly give her hand to rey...rey put his hand in her and hold tightly. Both of them look at each other as they hold each others palm...current passed through their spine...taani try to pull him out but rey pull her forcefully and taani directly fall on rey in the pond.

"rey...r u mad??"said taani and look at him...both were extremly close...both were wet...her wet hairs were stick on her face...he gently put that hairs behind her ears. As he touch her face she close her eyes...her breathing become heavy. Rey smirk because he had same effect on her which was also years back. ..

People were watching them.

"no guys...i cant leave dance for taani..." this sentence came in her mind and she open her eyes...she jerked his hand and came out of the pond. Rey also came out...people were still looking at them.

She feel embarased and start walking.

"taani...taani..."said rey and he also walk behind her.

"rey please...leave me alone..." said taani...her eyes become wet...she remember her past moments with rey...

"listen taani...m sorry...i was just doing masti..."said rey...

Taani found an empty corner in the park. She went there..."rey pls go from here...i dont want to listen anything..." said taani and stand under a tree...

Rey grab her hand and pin her to the tree...

"taani...i m really sorry for today and for past too...trust me i was just joking...m also not angry with u...i just want to do some fun so i pull u in the pond..."said rey holding her shoulders...

"trust...wo hi to nahi kar sakti me aap par rey..."said taani and try to push him...but his grip was tight...

"taani i still love u..."said rey...

"but i dont.."said taani struggling to free herself...

"but tumhari aankhe to kuch aur hi keh rahi hai taani..."said rey

"rey plz...leave me..."taani said...

"ok..."said rey and leave her...when she was going but ones again rey grab her hand and said"just remember i loved u...i love u..and i always will taani..."said rey and leave her hand.

Taani ran from there.

Sam who was playing saw taani . He ran to her...

"mumma...aap bheeg kaise gayi??"ask sam...

"vo beta me...vo..."taani was searching answer...

"lets go home mumma and change ur clothes..."said sam and both left for home.

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*Night*

*Gang*

Gang was sitting in the hall after their rehersal for mehendi ceremony. Swayam was in his room. Rey notice that swayam is not there. He also went from there in his room. He reach in his room and sat on his bad thinking about taani. Suddenly he stand up and went in the balcony and look for taani. He wait for sometime but he cant see taani. She was not in her room. He become sad and just going back when he saw sam coming there. He was playing game in phone...maybe it was taani's. A smlile appeared on his face.

"sam..." he heard her voice..."baby why u came here??"ask taani coming behind him with her laptop.

"bcoz i will sleep with u today...mujhe aap ke sath sona hai...aap mujhe story sunaogi na??"ask sam sitting on balcony swing.

"why not baby...tumhare liye to me kuch bhi kar sakti hu..."said taani while doing something in her laptop.

Rey think something and ran in swayam's room. He grab his hand and drag him with him. When they came in his room rey put his hand on sw's eyes ...

"rey...kya kar raha hai??"

"surprise hai...bas tu chal..."said rey and bring him in the balcony.

Rey make him stood and then said...

"1...2...3..." and he remove his hand...

"surprise..."he wishper in his ears...swayam saw his baby sister there...his eyes become wet and he hug rey...

"u know what rey...me kab se taani ka address search kar raha tha...but taani to hamare itne karib hai..."said sw..."thanks yar..."

"le...isme thanks ki kya baat hai...i know tu usse bahot miss karta hai..."said rey...

"but rey...uska beta hai...means usne shadi kar li??"ask swayam while breaking the hug...

"no swayam...he is not her son..he is karan and pooja's son who were owner of the compony...they died so taani is his mom now..she loves him alot ..."said rey...

"tujhe kaise pata??"ask sw

"bas pata hai...tu zyada mat soch...ab to tu khush hai na??"ask rey..

"bahot...i got my sis back...bas uski narazgi dur karni hai ab..."said sw

"vo bhi dur kar denge..."said rey..."ab tu ja..."

"kyu??"ask sw

"bcoz i want to see my taani aur agar tu yaha raha to kabhi bhi possessive bhai bahar aa jayega...isiliye tu ja...ok...ja..." said rey pushing him out of his room..."good night saley sahab..."

"ok...good night jijaji"said swayam and rey blushed a little...and close the door.

He came back in the balcony and sit on the couch...

"mumma...i m feeling sleepy..."said sam

"ok baby...u go...me thodi der me aati hu..."said taani and kiss his forehead..."good night...story kal suna dungi..."

"ok mumma...good night..."said sam and went to sleep...

Taani was there working on her laptop when she notice rey standing there and staring at her...

She stand up ...

"what r u doing??"ask taani loudly so he can here...

"i m standing in my balcony and enjoying cool breez...tumhe koi problem hai sweetheart??"said rey...

"taani...mera name taani hai...good night..."said taani and went in and put curtains...

Rey also went in...taani slowly came out to see rey...she look in his balcony but he was not there...but suddenly rey came there...

"dekha...mujhse dur nahi reh sakti ..tabhi mujhe dekhne dubara aayi..."said rey with a smirk...

Taani immidgetly ran inside and put the curtains again so rey cant see in the room.

She turn off the light and ly down beside sam.

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All were in the hall.(not sam...sam is with arjun.) Its time for the mehendi ceremony.

Taani was wearing this...

she came here early to check all arrangements. She check it and all arrangements were complete.

The ceremony started. Taani completly avoid to talk with d3 gang. They try to talk with her but she everytime ignor them.

Gang perform on various songs.(i m skipping dances and all) Mehendi was done on geet's hands. "M" was written on her hand because groom's name is Maan...(ayesha...for u).

"are taani...tumhe bhi mehendi leni padegi chalo yaha aajao..."said geet...

"are nahi geet..."said taani but geet's mom force her so taani also put mehendi on her hand.

"kya tumhare hath pe koi alphabet likhna hai??"ask geet...

Listening this taani thought about rey...but she said "nahi..."

Rey was shocked as well as gang too...

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All guests were going now...few relatives are there.

Taani was standing alone...when someone tap her shoulder. She turn and was shocked seeing swayam...

"bhai..."was the first word came out from her mouth...

"taani...bhool gayi kya mujhe??"said swayam...both's eyes become wet...

"bhai...vo..."

"i know taani...mene kam hi esa kiya tha...kabhi tumhe samjhne ki koshish nahi ki..."said sw

"nahi bhai plz aap esa mat boliye...i m sorry ki aap ko bina bataye chali gayi...aur aap ko pareshan kar diya...aap mere bhai hai...me aap se naraz reh hi nahi sakti bhai..."said taani..

"no taani...m sorry..."said sw and wipe her tears...

"sorry me aap ke aansu naho poch sakti"said taani with a smile and show him her hand covered with mehendi.

"tum ghar kaise jaogi...drive nahi kar sakogi na??"ask sw

"driver aa jayega bhai...abhi aap jao...mujhe thoda kam hai..."said taani...

"ok..."said sw and went from there...gang and rey witness the whole scene...they all smile...rey saw taani going to somewhere. He follow her. Gang went home.

Taani was going from a corridor to geet's room...but suddenly rey grab her from her waist and pull her in an empty room. She close her eyes and was about to scream but rey clamp her mouth. Taani recognize his touch. Rey remove his hand...but his one hand was still around her waist...

"rey...kya kar rahe ho...leave me"said taani...

"pehle ye batao tumne mera name kyu nahi likhwaya?"ask rey...

"kyuki aap mere kuch nahi ho..." said taani...

"juth...sab juth..."said rey...

"yahi sach hai..."said taani

"apna hath do..."said rey...

"nahi...aap meri mehendi bigad denge..."said taani...

"Taani give me your hand" Rey hold her hand carefully and draw "R" in an empty place with mehendi...

"rey aap esa nahi-"

"tumhe meri kasam agar tumne isse nikala to..."said rey and leave her hand...he lean down and give a pack on her cheek and said "u r looking gorgeous today sweet heart...and ya..tumhari mehendi ka rang sab se gehra hoga because i love you so much..."

And then he left from there...

Taani was in a shock now what to do..because she cant remove R ...

Precap:

"dekha...mene kaha tha na tumhari mehendi ka rang sabse gehra hoga..."whisper rey in her ears putting her hairs on one side...

Taani immidgetly turn..."rey aap...aap mere bedroom me kya kar rahe ho??aap yaha aaye kaise...aap jaiye..."said taani...

rey pin her to the mirror..."pehle ye batao tum apni mehendi dekh ke smile kyu kar rahi thi...???"ask rey...

"n-nahi to...m-me kaha s-smile kar rahi thi?? App...aap jaiye yaha se...sam...ha mujhe sam ko breakfast dena hai...aap hatiye..." said taani and push him...and ran out if the room.

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"hey champ..."said rey

"oh hi...aap to wo hi hai na jo mujhe mall ke bahar mile the??" ask sam..

"yes...umm... Where is your mumma??"ask rey looking here and there...

"mumma to office gayi hai..."said sam..

"oh...hey want to play video game??"ask rey

"ha...chaliye...mere room me chalte hai.."said sam.