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Posted: 12 years ago
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heyy guyss i am writing an ss on the foursome soo if you want me to continue then like and comment then only i will continue
This story is about 4 young persons,Viren and manvi are childhood buddies and soo are jeevika and virat but manvi and viren share a relationship more then friends jeevika virat dont know manvi and viren and vice versa jeevika and virat live in dehli and manvi and viren live in mumbai manvis dad is the richest business man in mumbai and virens dad is rich but not as much as manvis still their families are really close
jeevika is an orphan who was adopted by virats aunt they live togather they are upper middle class family this story is about 4 people who are meant to be meet and become friends but this friendship can break and effect old relationships.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Character sketch
Manvi kapoor:the only daughter of Mr Ram Kapoor and Mrs Priya Kapoor.S he is pampered by her father but her mom is strict at times she is always spying on manvi who she is talking to she is best friends with viren and likes him she completed her college this year and has applied in londons best uni for busniess she was the hottest and the best student in her college
Viren singhania
Viren is the youngest son of Mr Harish and Avantika he is pampered and has completed his college is manvis bestfriend and likes her he has applied in londons best uni for business
virat vadhera
virat lives in dehli he is a focused principle based guy he is the best student and loves his family he lives with his uncle aunt mom dadaji aunt and jeevika
Jeevika chaudry
she is swamini chaudry and rajendre chaudry adopted daughter rajender passed away 2 years ago when jeevika was 18 she is sweet calm obideient and topper in her college virat and jeevika got scolorship in londons best buisness uni
other characters
ram kapoor:best dad any girl can get he loves manvi ad fulfills all her wishes best business man and very rich
priya:rams wife and manvis mom loves her and even loves to spy on her
avantika:virens mother very pretty and chill she loves manvi alot and is very close to viren rich and classy
harish:chillest dad and best friend of viren he calls viren romeo and manvi cupcake
Vadhera family
vanshika is virats mom,virats dadaji,inder chachu kadambri chachi,swamini bua
london cast
manvis nana and nani:they live in london and have a big mansion manvi and viren are gonna live their manvis nana was friends with virats dadaji
mrs rita
mrs alice
chantelle
maya
tanya
samrat
tom
harry
virens elder brother aditya and bhabhi pankhuri lives in london but has shifted back to mumbai cause pankhuri is 9 months pregnant
okayy so only the awsome foursome are important and the story will be based on them the famil will play important part later on in last few updates their will be 20 updates and yaa maya and tanya are the antagonist

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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
Great start continue soon!👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
Nice concept
Nive character sketch
Plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
wowww this sounds exciting ...update soon and do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
prologue and cs look intersting update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ya plz continue
N pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kapoor mansion
ram aditya and harish are sitting togather disscusing about business and avantika and priya are with pankhuri instructing her to sit in one place and now comes viren
viren:good morning everyone
harish:heyy romeo supp
viren:nothing dad where is mannu
priya:tumhari mannu soo rahi jao utha lau
ram:priya viren kyu jaye tum jao samjho
priya:ram plzz stop it viren tum jao
viren:wait wait yeh kya hai why is uncle stopping me is mannu alright raat ko 2 baje tak tau thik thi shit raat ko icecream ki wajah se bimar tau nahi huwi
ram:ek minute tumhien kaise pata wo 2 baje tak thik thi and usne icecreamm khaye
viren:(thinking phas kya viren abb tau uncle aur shak karien ge)
manvi:uff ho dad stop thinking negitive dad i was talking to viren on the phone issliye btw good morning everyone
she went and hugged viren and kissed him on his chhek
ram:issliye you always wish viren first
manvi:awww my dad is angry you know na dad mein sab se naraz ho sakti hoon viren se nahi he is very special but i love you daddy
ram:more beta abb breakfast karien
pankhuri:haan buhut bhook lagi hai
harish:adi butterfly ko table pe leke aao
they all had their breakfast and it was sunday soo they all were planning to go out
the door bell rang
sundar:manvi maam and viren sir ke liye letter aya hai
manvi and viren read the letter and shout
everyone kya huaa
manvi and viren tell they got admission in london and they have to go next week
ram:thats fabb and waise bhi maine aur harish ne london aur america mein nahi branch start ki hai tau vikram is handling america and mein aur harish london shift horahien hain for a year or two
priya:apne bataya nahi
avantika:yaa and its pankhuris delivery time
harish:avantu we will go next month manvi and viren abhi manvi ki nani nano ke saath rahien ge
ram:i think it call for a celebration why not keep a party
avantika:i think thats fab
manvi:okiee btw viren lets goo for shopping
pankhuri:i wanna come
manvi:no bhabhi app aur doll relax ill get a XXL dress for you
pankhuri got angry and manvi and viren were laughing when pankhuri shouted aaa aaa
everyone rushed to her
pankhuri:adi the water broke
manvi and viren:baby is on they way they all rushed to the hospital after a while the doctor came congratss beta huwa hai
manvi:noo i wanted a baby girl
viren i wonn champ huwa
they all went and saw the babyyy
vadhera house
jeevika and virat were leaving today for london
dadji:virat yeh humare purane dost ka num hai tum log uske ghar pe raho ge apne khayal rakhna okay
virat:jee dadaji
jeevika came down wearing a anarkali she liked wearing traditional dresses
they took blessings and left
okayy so next update foursome will meet and it will be very interesting
manvi and viren will fight for the first time because of jeevika
manvi will start hating jeevika
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome cannot wait to start reading
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update really cute and sweet family 😃
but why was ram doubting them ???
and precap viren and manvi fight not good..
update sooon 😃

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