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Posted: 11 years ago
i am scared.is maan going to hurt in any way lately???oh no..anyway i am loving this ss.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Jaana I just love this FF ..
it's so different in a way and kind of innocent and I like that !!
I love Geet's character in this, she is so soft and calm, and innocent and mature in a way...I guess some might call her weak cuz she is never really standing up for herself when it comes to Maan...and even though she thought they had been physically close she never blaimed or accused him..but that just makes her stronger of a person..

I just like the feel of the story, it's definately one of my favorite ff's right now and I really like this Geet..
Maan is still confusing me, I don't understand why he always want's to avoid her and it wouldn't surprise me if Geet would start to feel insecure around him...after all it's her husband and he should want to be close to her not act like she is some kind of booj .. I know that they don't love each other yet but you still want your husband to appreciate you naa...well, the bus ride made me feel better about him cuz he is not ignorant about what's happening around her and he cares :D

Acha abh Jaldi update karna and please ree itne lambe gap mat lena..tumhare gap ke chackar mein main bhool jaati hoon !!
I just can't wait to see them fall for each other. !!
update soon and lamba update chahiye...Kanjoos !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
You have written so many stories...
i need time to read the stories which has more parts...
so just come across this story of yours as it has less parts...
really loved the way story is heading..
though nothing is revealed yet i mean about maan's character,, story is really interesting...
curious to know more..
loved ur writing..awesome works..👏
and sorry can't press like button
will be waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting for an update

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -AnushaGurtian-

Updating Today.! 😃



waiting dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago

HIS UNBREAKABLE VOW



PART 5

The ride was a bumpy one, occasionally everyone bumping into one another while Maan just shielded her from everyone, bumping into her himself. After a couple of hours, they reached their destination where the first thing Maan did was make a call to KM, asking them for a car while Geet stood there admiring the people around her, but to her surprise the group of men were nowhere to be seen.! Where did they go suddenly as she saw them on the bus.? She looked at Maan, who was busy on the phone and her thoughts went across the possibility that Maan could have something to do with it. But how.? Her thoughts were broke when Maan came towards her asking her if she was hungry, and being famished as they were they proceeded towards the dhaba to fill in their hunger, much to Maan's dismay. Maan was reluctant to have food, eying the place with the most disinterested looks while Geet closely listened through the menu deciding on her order. She quickly placed hers and looked towards Maan and laughed out loud seeing his face. He had the funniest expression on, making her burst out.

" What.? " he asked her raising his eyebrows. She immediately sealed her mouth shaking her head in a no. She gestured him to place his order, confusing Maan more.

" Can you just care to speak up.!.? " he asked irritated.

" He is waiting for your order " she said giggling, still bearing his funny expressions. Maan stubbornly nodded in a no, asking the boy to go away while Geet was disappointed with his sudden mood change.

" Order something, how can you remain hungry for so long.? " she asked out of concern.

" I am fine Geet. You eat, I can't eat dhaba food. I am not used to it " he said, trying to switch on his phone.

" Just eat a little bit. How can I eat while you are not.!? " She asked him innocently, making him smile at how pure hearted and innocent can she be.?

" But I don't like wasting food. I can't finish the entire thing they give, so it's better I wait for sometime till I reach home. I'll eat something, but you have yours.!." He said, asking her to eat.

" You can share with me.! Just eat a little bit. It will take long to reach home and I wont allow you to starve for so long.! " she insisted again, making him angry for her stubbornness. He calmed himself reasoning it to be her care for him, so he agreed to her wish nodding in defeat. Soon the food arrived and they had it in silence. Geet enjoyed most of the items while Maan just pretended to like the food, as he was finding it difficult to eat the food, but he ate nibbles of it just to keep her heart. Once done, Maan and Geet sat there waiting for the car to arrive when Maan decided to ask her things which were bothering him. Clearing his throat he spoke.

" Geet, can I ask you something.? " he asked hesitantly, while she looked at him confused .

" Sure.! You can ask me anything." she said smiling but honestly confused.

" Are you scared of me.? " he asked, closing his eyes leaving a shocked Geet to wonder what made him ask that.

" No... I.. Am...not. I mean I was a bit initially, but... But... You are nice to me too. So I am not scared anymore. But why are u asking me like this.!.? " she said hesitantly.

" Why didn't you tell me about those guys teasing you.? You think I didn't see it, I was coming to you thinking you will tell me but you changed the topic. Hadn't it been I seeing in the bus, what would u have done.? " he asked her the thing which was bothering him. Was she hiding it because she was scared to talk to him, or scared to share her worries.?

" I only hid it because I didn't want to create any scene over there, not cause I was scared. But I didn't mean to hurt your emotions, believe me. I trust you, and I know you are nice and care about everyone. " she said, honestly confessing.

" Please Geet, don't.! I am not as nice as you think. Without knowing anything, don't make any opinions about me. It might only hurt you later.!! " he said painfully, not able to listen to her praises for himself, shocking Geet yet again with his sudden rudeness. He got up to leave, when her words held him back.

" What did you do to those men.? " she asked scared from inside, with the sudden darkness surrounding him, be it after his own words or her own fears.

" They are not going to bother you anymore. They were thrown out the bus after coming here. It wasn't me, the others did.! " he answered her and left towards the road waiting for the car to arrive, leaving behind a confused Geet who was fighting with her own confusions and his changing behavior. Why is he so unreadable and confusing.? May be she should just get used to his changing behavior and behave the same.?? His aura held some different charm which Geet was unable to recognize till now, but it was hardly hitting her. She sat there till the time the car rolled in to the parking lot, she went up to it and settled on the backseat with Maan next to her. The journey back home was a quiet one, while both looked out of the window in awkwardness which prevailed between the two yet again after the slight talk at the dhaba. Once reaching KM, both of them walked In quietly to be greeted by a worried Daadi. Maan excused himself on the pretext of work while Daadi and Geet discussed about what happened. After assuring Daadi with great difficulty about her being fine now, Geet immediately went into the kitchen to prepare something for Maan, who hadn't eaten anything. Geet was constantly observing his awkwardness at the Dhaba, but she chose to remain quite as he looked already irritated. She quickly filled the bowl with pasta and was walking towards their bedroom when was called out by Daadi. After consulting her several times about their health, Daadi informed her about the party which was to be held tonight, with an intention of introducing Geet officially into the society as Maan's wife. Geet looked hesitant initially, but Daadi convinced her for the party and left after asking her to inform Maan about it. Geet walked into the room when she saw him coming out of the washroom, just wrapped in a towel. She looked away, entering the room with the tray and placed it on the table. Maan was watching her intently as she was behaving quiet indifferently, which didn't bother him much. Placing the tray on the table, she walked towards the wardrobe pulling out his official dress along with its accessories. Taking them in her hand, she placed them on the bed intending to walk away but remembered Daadi's message for him.

" Daadi has asked me to tell you that there is a party tonight, and hope you are okay with it. If you have some other plans she asked you to go meet her and discuss with her. " she said softly and was about to leave the room when he called her back.

" Geet what's all this.!!?? " he said eying the food and things on the bed.

" That's Pasta for you as you didn't have anything since 2 days. You must be hungry, so please finish it without anymore questions.! The things lying on the bed are your clothes, in case you are going to office. If you need anything else, let me know I will get it for you. " she said and left the room shocking Maan with her behavior. What's wrong with her now, was she upset.!?? He ignored it for time being and finished his pasta relishing every bite of it, smiling at her care for him. So she knew, he didnt have anything at the dhaba. Once done, he was about to call the servants for his usual coffee when she came into the room with his coffee in her hands. Maan looked at her amazed, how on earth does she manage to remember his exact needs, when they dont even converse normally.? Thats when it hit him; they dont talk.!!

"Here is your coffee " she said holding it out, not meeting his gaze.

"Thanks Geet, um...the pasta was tasty. Thanks.! " he complimented her while she still avoided his gaze, confusing him But indeed she was happy inside, he praised her which was enough for her/

"Thank You. " she said leaving him and walked towards the room door, and left through it. Maan sat there watching her changing behavior, not able to relate to her sudden changes. What was it that had gotten into her.?! He decided to stay home for the day, owing to his tiredness and the party coming up in the evening. He worked on his laptop the entire afternoon, while there was no sign of her. It was soon going to be evening, he finally closed the laptop intending to check on the decorations. He walked out of the room, and he just stood amazed looking at the classy decorations in the house, making it look like the best Khurana's party ever. Knowing very well that it was only Geet who could do this as the decorations had class yet it didn't leave out the innocence she possessed, he started moving down just to get a glimpse of her. After grazing his eyes everywhere, he spotted her in one corner of the house instructing the servant on what to do. A cute smile played on his lips, Seeing her being so sincere with everything she does. He admired her innocence, and prayed to god to never make him the reason for tears in her innocent eyes. He walked back towards his room, his mind lingering around her thoughts. Though they shared one world according to everyone, but only he knew that how different their worlds were, each having its own set of destruction written for them. Who knows what it may bring with itself, yet he has to protect her, no matter what may come in his way. That was his promise he made to himself, and her.


Precap : Geet, what are you wearing.??


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Posted: 11 years ago
Caught up with the last two updates...
Awesome updates... he is caring inspite of being blunt and rude... but i liked it that geet expressed her view too when he tried to tell that he cares just coz of daadi..
so somewhere he does realize too that his words hurt her...
And the hut thing... it was good that they didnt get into a misunderstanding.. Geet was mature enough and maan was sensible enough to clear all the misconceptions...
And the bus part was yet another incident to prove that he did care for her...
Lovely updates...
Eagerly waiting for your update aaj...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -AnushaGurtian-

Updating Today.! 😃

cant wait
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was an awesome update anu...
there is something thats stopping him.. he does care for her and feels protective.. and moreover her not telling him about the guys teasing her seem to affect him... He wants to keep her happy and protect her, but doesnt want her to have hopes of him being too nice... Quite strange...
Lovely update... Cant wait for the next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely updates...
Eagerly waiting for your update

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