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Posted: 11 years ago
Updating today.!! 😃
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sweet part
liked their care for each other
when will this care turn into love?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing Update jaana !!
Maan is starting to like her !!
That's about time :P
will be waiting for part 6 !!
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yay finally udpating really excited to read ... i love ur ff awesome new things it would be great more comedy of maan and geet in the storyupddate as no other ff writer don't write much so plz update often thanks plz udpate often thanks i love ur ff so continue ur great works
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Posted: 11 years ago
hii anu sorry for super late comment dear...
but u know sweetie...meri prob.
net prob. then health prob.
anyways leaving aside all my prob.
i will comment...
i loved all the updates...till now..i have read then through mob.
but comment nhi kar paa rhi thi..so sorry again...
u are an amazing writer dear..and i love the way u write sweetu...
TFD PMS...
love u dear...

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So sorry for the delay guys...
Couldn't update due to voting for JDJ..Will surely update today at any cost...😳
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HIS UNBREAKABLE VOW


PART 6

He walked back towards his room, his mind lingering around her thoughts. Though they shared one world according to everyone, but only he knew that how different their worlds were, each having its own set of destruction written for them. Who knows what it may bring with itself, yet he has to protect her, no matter what may come in his way. That was his promise he made to himself, and her. The mansion resembled an aristocratic heaven, with silver and black decorations covering each nook and corner of the lavish mansion, giving it a grand scenic look. Though unofficial, the party would be entertaining some known persona's from business world and the media, who were associated to Maan. Geet was busy with the decorations, with Maan being busy in his work up in the room, loosing track of the time. With only a few hours remaining for the party, Geet wrapped up the preparations of the party and walked back to the room only to find him still immersed in his work. She walked towards the washroom, to freshen up before getting ready for the party. Coming out, she walked towards him and without a word she closed the files kept in front of him, making him look up, shocked. Closing the files, she walked towards the wardrobe fetching out his best suit for the party, while he just sat there gaping at her. His insides were fuming, seeing her action but he controlled as he didn't want to lash out on her, but she was forcing him to. She walked back to the bed, placing his suit in front of him.

"It's almost time for the party, please get ready. I selected this one for you but if you don't like it you are free to change into another one. I picked this out because it matches with the theme "she explained herself and was walking away when Maan held her wish, stopping her from leaving.

"What's happening Geet.? Why are you behaving like this.? " He asked her seriously, getting irritated with her aloofness.

" What did I do.? " she asked still looking down, not meeting his gaze.

" First of all look at me when talking to me, and you are asking me what did you do.? Why are you behaving so indifferent.? What's happened to you.? " He asked totally enraged at her.

" Isn't it what you want.?? " she asked finally looking up to meet his eyes.

" What.?? " he asked her confused.

" Isn't this what you wanted. That I stay away from you. " She asked him, confused with his sudden outburst.

" When did I say that.?? " he asked, even more shocked.

" Whenever I talk, you behave like I am irritating you. You only asked me to stay away at the dhaba. That's why I was not talking to you unless needed, and still you are angry at me " she said in a sad voice, surprising Maan with her words. She misunderstood him, and was obeying him.!

" Geet, I asked you not to form opinions about me, not that I didn't want to talk to you. As for my behavior, I can be unbearable sometimes. You better get used to it. " He said jokingly, making her smile.

" But.. " she opened her mouth to speak, but was interrupted by him. He very well knew the various questions her mind came up with, but he indeed wanted to keep her happy.

" Geet, I know this is all new for you. It's new for me as well, we got married in the most uncomfortable circumstances. We hardly know anything about each other. So instead of grieving over it, let's try to work this out. " He said in a solemn voice, while Geet gaped at him.

" What do you think.!? Frankly,It's going to take time for me to get used to your presence around me, but that doesn't mean I don't want you around me. I ain't that bad, Geet. " he continued.

" Woh..I... " She said stammering, but just nodded agreeing to his words. Unknowingly, his words made her happy that at least their relation will get the much needed chance.

" Geet, we can talk about it later. First we need to get ready for the party. " He said, to which she nodded with a smile. Grabbing his clothes, he walked towards the washroom while, leaving her to admire him. Why does he always manage to take her by surprise.? She sat on the bed thinking about him and his words, absolutely oblivious to the time ticking by . Hadn't it been for Maan snapping his fingers in front of her, she would still be in her own world. He came out of the washroom, only to find her staring at the ground lost in her own world.

" Geet, what are you thinking.?? " he said, she snapped out of her trance.

" No... Nothing... I was just thinking about something. " She said, looking away, embarrassed.

" Geet stop thinking and get ready. We are getting late. " He said sternly to which she just hurried into the washroom grabbing her packet, containing her attire for the evening. As she closed the door behind, she heard him warning her again.

" And yes, make it quick, I am waiting for you, Daadi wants us to come together. " he said, looking into the phone.

"Ji " she said, closing the door. Geet hurriedly stripped out of her saree putting on her new dress. Though it was something totally new for Geet to carry, yet she made a sincere effort to change her look for the party today, as it was very important for Maan and Daadimaa.

It was around half an hour since Geet entered the washroom, with Maan waiting outside. He was losing his cool, waiting for her. He paced along the room, waiting for her to come out but unfortunately there was no sign of her. Giving up, he walked towards the bathroom and knocked on the door.

" Geet, what are you doing.?? " he asked, with a tinge of irritation in his voice. She immediately stopped struggling with her dress and panicked hearing him.

" Woh...I...am.. " she hesitated, not able to point out her problem to him. Get fidgeted with her words, while on the other side he was getting restless.

" Geet.? What's happening.?? " He asked, knocking on the door again making her flinch back in nervousness.

" Maan, give me 5 minutes please. This dress... " She tried again to fix her dress, but failed.

" Geet, come out. Tell me what's the problem.? " He said flatly, shocking her.

" What.?? No, I can't " she said instantly.

" What do you mean by no.?! Are you going to stay in the washroom for the entire evening.? " He asked amused and shocked.

" Woh... No... I mean.. I can't come. " She said shyly.

" Geet, either you come out now or be ready to face the consequences. We are getting late for the party. Make it fast. " He said walking back.

" But... How can I .?? " She started to protest again, making him angrier by the minute and he ended up snapping at her.

" Fine, you enjoy your time in there and I am going down now. Come when you feel like. " He said, walking away.

" No.! Maan..Please don't go. " She screamed opening the door ajar, peeping out from the washroom. Maan halted hearing her, and turned back to see her peeing out through the door frame, looking like a small baby. He raised an eyebrow asking her what the problem was.

" Please, don't go. Can you help me.? Or please ask Dadimaa to come help me.!? I ca...can't.. Come to the party like this " she said, lowering her gaze.

" It will take long for Daadima to come, tell me what it is " he said walking towards the bathroom.

" Actually, my dress. I am not able to fix it. I... " she tried to explain.

" Thats it.? Whats the big deal about it.? Come out now, let me fix it " he said, beckoning her to come out. Not wanting to irritate him further, she opened the bathroom door standing in front of him. He stood numb at his place, seeing her new look for the party. To his utter shock she was standing in front of him in a silver off shoulder gown, looking gorgeous than ever, personifying an epitome of natural beauty. Her gown was decorated with several stones while diamond hangings, added to the shine of her angelic face. He could never have imagine that she could compliment any dress to an extent of perfection, nor did he ever expect to see her in such attire. A huge smile broke across his lips, seeing her while she lowered he graze feeling shy. He walked towards her, smiling and stood in front of her.



" Geet, what are you wearing.? " he asked her, with a smile playing on his lips.

" I thought the party must be important for you, so I asked Daadima if I can wear saree or I have to wear a modern dress, she said I can wear anything I want. First I thought I will wear a saree, but when you mentioned this being an important party, I chose this. " she said it all in one go looking down. Maan just couldn't help but awe at her innocence, how could a soul be so pure.? How was he ever going to match her purity.?

" Don't you like it.? I will change it right away if you don't " she said, looking expectantly towards him, upon receiving his silence.

"It's perfect. " he said, smiling at the innocent angel in front of him. How could it not be, when she was the one wearing it.

" But there is a problem, the hook, it's not fixing in properly as I think I tampered with it. I can't come like this. " she said looking away nervously.

" You want me to fix it for you.? " he said, waiting for her to give the consent. She hesitantly considered his offer, upon seeing no other way she nodded meekly and turned around giving him a view of her back. He held the hanging straps in his hand, his hand brushing on her skin, making her clutch the hem of her gown tightly. He bent down to take the hook between his teeth, fixing it while his hair teased her bare back. She closed her eyes tightly, feeling shy with the sensations building inside her. She didn't even realize when he fixed the hook, placing it in its slot sealing the dress tightly around her.

" Done. Now can we go " he said, breaking her thoughts. She immediately relaxed and turned around to walk out of the bedroom when he stopped her.

" Geet, thank you for thinking so much about me. I can't promise everything to change quickly, but I will try my best to be nice. If you don't like anything, please don't ever hesitate to tell me. " he said, to which she just nodded with her innocent smile. He smiled back at her and led her out of the room, towards the party marking a new beginning to their relation, in different senses for both the souls.


Precap : The party 😊


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There is the next part guys, I know many of you are confused about MSK, but trust me..he has his own reasons. I can't say anything as of yet, but the story has begun. Without giving away much, I will say its going to be sweet, but its not love. So I hope you guys bear with me till it actually begins.Her innocence is what making him to be nice to her. I hope its all is making sense, and is coming out the way I want it to be 😳😆

Will be waiting for your response eagerly.! Hopefully you all liked it 😳

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Edited by ..AnushaGeet.. - 11 years ago
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Updated 😊
Extremely sorry for the delay guys 😊
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loved da lovely n sweet update
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awesome and beautiful update
loving the way maan talked and made geet feeling better
hayee the gown scene was awesome😳
hehe i so want maan to fall in love with geet soon
but i know it will take time

continue soon

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