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Ash1991

@Ash1991

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#351

Superb update...
Loved it alot...
Glad both r ok n out of the jungle...

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farzu3008

@farzu3008

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#352

very lovely update. glad that maan clarified everything before any misunderstanding crop up. haapy to see his care for geet in the bus. waiting fir next

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nehapushkar

@nehapushkar

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#353

I liked ur concept , Maan is mature ,responsilble ,caring &

Thank u for not giving us over agressive maan

Plz make Geet a little more analysing character ,
We would like to know her dreams ,her aspirations
How she copes with this situation with maan

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#354

oh My God u hurt ur hand...take care yaar...don't need to stress urself...

will wait for ur update...u first get well...

wonderful update...

maan is taking care of her so well but still he maintained distance...

why...does he love somebody else ?...

his actions suggest that he is just doing his duty towards her as she is his responsibility but he don't have feelings as her husband...

will wait for next part...

thanx for pm...

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#355

part 4
nice part...
glad shes fine now...
Maan is a gadha...
why is keeping away from her?
they are married for God's sake...
but at least he noticed her discomfort caused by those rogues...
cont soon dear...

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Anusha

@..AnushaGeet..

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#356

TEASER

" Geet, can I ask you something.? " he asked hesitantly, while she looked at him confused .

" Sure.! You can ask me anything." she said smiling but honestly confused at his weird behavior.

" Are you scared of me.? " he asked, closing his eyes leaving a shocked Geet to wonder what made him ask that.

" No... I.. Am...not. I mean I was a bit initially, but... But... You are nice to me too. So I am not scared anymore. But why are u asking me like this.!.? " she said hesitantly.

" Why didn't you tell me about those guys teasing you.? You think I didn't see it, I was coming to you thinking you will tell me but you changed the topic. Hadn't it been I seeing in the bus, what would u have done.? " he asked her the thing which was bothering him. Was she hiding it because she was scared to talk to him, or scared to share her worries.?

" I only hid it because I didn't want to create any scene over there, not cause I was scared. But I didn't mean to hurt your emotions, believe me. I trust you, and I know you are nice and care about everyone. " she said, honestly confessing.

" Please Geet, don't.! I am not as nice as you think. Without knowing anything, don't make any opinions about me. It might only hurt you later.!! " he said painfully, not able to listen to her praises for himself, shocking Geet yet again with his sudden rudeness. He got up to leave, when her words held him back.

" What did you do to those men.? " she asked scared from inside, with the sudden darkness surrounding him, be it after his own words or her own fears.

" They are not going to bother you anymore. They were thrown out the bus after coming here. It wasn't me, the others did.! " he answered her and left towards the road waiting for the car to arrive, leaving behind a confused Geet who was fighting with her own confusions and his changing behavior. Why is he so unreadable and confusing.?

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Edited by -AnushaGurtian- - 12 years ago