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Posted: 18 years ago
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i would like to thank all those woh posted their valuable comments for my previous stories...and hope u bear with this one....and also thanks to some of u who encouraged me to write a story from my side....i hope this lives up to your expectations.....and is not soo boring...


it's 11pm and g is still in the restaurant as there was a lot of rush today ...
she was so tired and wanted to leave but couldn't ...now 11 became 11:30pm and she is about to leave and close the restaurant when she hears some people outside who r totally drunk making weird noises...
but she ingnored them and came out to find that they were heading towards the restuarant...she stepped back...but they came close to her and were so out of their sense that they started passing stupid comments on g(physical comments...mush have gussed what sort of comments)
she is very scared wanted to run but they were 4 and she was alone...no one to protect her from them...
she even tried to tell them that leave me or else my husband will not spare u ...
but all vain...

one of them touched her and was about to kiss her when she gave him a kick and ran inside and but the others caught her but she somehow managed to get 2 bottels of cold drink and banged them on 2 of thems head ...but 1 was still there...who was coming closer and closer to her...
in order to catch g he tore her left sleeve of her blouse...but he did not leave her g started crying out loudly 4 help...and as usual...
p how was about to leave heard this noise of g ...and realised that she was in some gr8 pain...her voice madeit clear 4 him...
he just ran inside and to his shock he saw that guy who was trying to kiss her but she was fighting back with all her strenght 4 not to let him kiss her and just get out of his hold...
p came from behind and gave him such a big punch that he fainted on the spot...but g who was in a complete shock...just sat down with her hand on her knees and her hands covering her face...she was all shivering...
p then came towards her like a caring husband to take her home...with him...he sat down on his knees
put his hand on g's head but g simply lifted her head with a complete shock ....her eyes itself expressed it...
p felt so pity 4 her...he thought to himself kash meine issi choda na hota to aaj yeh sab na hota...aaj g ko meri sabse zyada zaroorat thi lekin mein time par na aa saka..../
g:mujhe mummy ke paas jhana hai...(the same way in which she told p soon after he tried to rape her but when he realised his mistake and came to her...and tried to put his hand on her head of hand-don't remember)
p had tears in his eyes on seeing g's condition...
first he wrapped her saree on her and then lifted her up i mean made her stand up...
p:daro mat g woh ab nahi aayenge...
G:p pls mujhe ghar le chalo...mujhe mummy ke paas jhana hai...she was crying bitterly...
p realised how sweet she was....there was still a small child ...in her...(even no matter how big we grow on such matter we always remember r moms...don't v???)
he wanted to take her into his arms...hug her .....but he did not know what within him did not permit him to do so...
he started to walk and g followed him...
he was about to leave 4 the parking lot when a hand caught hold of him...it was g's...
g:p jaldi aan mujhe dar lag raha hai...(stammering) woh log wapas to nahi aayenge....p put his hand on her mouth...
he could feel her breath...g felt so relieved when he touched her...
a chill ran down her spine.....
p left and when he sat in the car he saw a shadow.....

it was g...
she followed p...just like a small puppy...waging his tail and following his boss...
p:tum yahan...
g:haan woh mujhe daar lag raha tha.....
now p could no more resist her .......her being soo afraid ...he knew g who was very brave and courageous and faced all sorts of situation confidently...but this part of her he saw 4 the first time.....
he came close to her ......and hugged her.....and g who too was longing 4 his touch....his hug.....gave herself to p.....
but soon she realised that this was not right as they were going to get divorced .....
she moved back from p grip and p also did not force her......

now both r in the car nad it's 1am...g's mom was constantly trying her mobile but she had shut it...
then after sitting inside the car she called her up and told that she is coming home and is with p...her mom on hearing p was iwth her ...
all her chinta vanished...and was also a bit happy that there is still a ray of hope of them getting to together...


while driving ....p felt some pain in his knee.....and elbow.....but did not want g to notice it and he tried to hide it from her but couldn't...
g:kya hua p....
p;kuch nahi...
g:kuch to hai....kya hua.....batao ...na.....she tired to shake his hand ...and in doingso...
p screamed...
g left his hand and what she was very painful 4 her...
there was blood on her hand...yes our dear p had hurt himself while fighting with those pidhelas(drunkens...or say those keshto mukharjees)
she told him to stop the car and he did so...(after all cannot ignore miss ziddi's orders...)
she took out and ointment and a bandage from her purse...(imagine she keeps them )
she applies it on his wounds very carefully....when she first put it on his hand...p was like ouch.....
g:looked upto him...with concern...and was blowing air from her mouth...(hope u gotit)
p now did not bother of his wound but started staring at g...and how she was taking care of him...how much she still cared 4 him...when he suffered from pain...she 2 beared the same pain...when he got hurt tears poured from her eyes...
he realised that it was his mistake to leave her...divorce her...she was meant 4 him...he to cannot think of any1 else other than her...she was the right choice 4 him...
then he remembered these words told by his mom few yrs ago:kahin na kahin koi na koi tumhare liye zaroor bana hoga...tumhe pata bhi nahi chalega ki kab woh tumhari zindagi mein aaya aur tumhari zindagi ka sabse zyada important hissa ban gaya...
some1 somewhere is nade 4 u.....and he realised that it was none other than g...use pata bhi nahin chala ki kab woh uski zindagi mein aayi...aur uski zindagi ko badal di.....kaise use usase pyaar hoga...aur woh uski zindagi ka sabse mahatvapurn hissa ban gayi jho agar uski zindagi se chali jhaye to uski zindagi ek kora kagaz ban ke reh jhayegi...
p ke liye g woh raag thi jho uski duniya ko raag sakti thi...
lekin aaj uski aur kuch had tak g ki galti ki wajah se aaj yeh naubat aagayi hai ki woh dono hamesha hamesha ke liye aalag hone wale hai...lekin kya kabhie machali pani ke bina reh sakti hai???
kya manushya oxegen ke bina reh sakta hai...nahi....bas usi tarah p g ke bina aur g ke bina nahi reh sakti....they compliment each other...one is worth less without the other.....just like petrol ke bina car...ya diesel ke bina khatara(truck)
and the song was played in the background....when p was thinking about her...

Tujhe Dekha To

Tujhe Dekha To Yeh Jaana Sanam
Pyar Hota Hai Deewana Sanam
Tujhe Dekha To Yeh Jaana Sanam
Tujhe Dekha To Yeh Jaana Sanam
Pyar Hota Hai Deewana Sanam
Ab Yahan Se Kahan Jaaye Hum
Teri Baahon Mein Mar Jaaye Hum
Tujhe Dekha To Yeh Jaana Sanam
Pyar Hota Hai Deewana Sanam
Ab Yahan Se Kahan Jaaye Hum
Teri Baahon Mein Mar Jaaye Hum
Tujhe Dekha To Yeh Jaana Sanam

Aankhen Meri, Sapne Tere
Dil Mera, Yaaden Teri
Mera Hai Kya, Sab Kuch Tera
Jaan Teri, Saanse Teri
Meri Aankhon Mein Aansoo Tere Aa Gaye
Muskurane Lage Sare Gam
Tujhe Dekha To Yeh Jaana Sanam
Pyar Hota Hai Deewana Sanam
Ab Yahan Se Kahan Jaaye Hum
Teri Baahon Mein Mar Jaaye Hum
Tujhe Dekha To Yeh Jaana Sanam

Ye Dil Kahin, Lagta Nahin
Kya Kahun, Main Kya Karun
Tu Samane, Baithi Rahe
Main Tujhe Dekha Karun
Tu Ne Aawaz Di Dekh Main Aa Gayee
Pyar Se Hai Badi Kya Kasam
Tujhe Dekha To Yeh Jaana Sanam
Pyar Hota Hai Deewana Sanam
Ab Yahan Se Kahan Jaaye Hum
Teri Baahon Mein Mar Jaaye Hum
Tujhe Dekha To Yeh Jaana Sana

he realised her true worth in his bejaan life.....g hi woh fertilizer thi jho p ki banjar zameen ko hara bhara bana sakti thi....aur g ke liye p woh fertilizer tha......(i am sorry at present i am not able to getthe right word 4 fertilizer ...i know it sounds very different and does not even suit the situation but pls bear with it as i wanted to explain their situation...)

now g has finshed applying the medicine and the bandage...
g:p .....kya soch rahe ho.....
p:kuch nahi....
p;to himself...kya tum mere paas wapas nahi aa sakti....agar meri itni hi parvah hai...to wapis kyun nahi aajati ...i need u g......i promise not to leave u or not even think of leaving....u r the most precious thing 4 me in this world....whose real worht i realised after partially loosing it....
(hamein kisi bhi chiz ya insan ki importance tabhi pati chalti hai jab woh humse dur chala jhata hai...)lekin inke case mein abhi bhi der nahi hui hai...


g onthe other hand heard each and every word which came out of p's mouth....but still was waiting 4 his one sentence...
meri zindagi mein wapis aajao.....
and she would forget all the her bitter past and return back to him....as she too needed him....meanwhile she too even was lost in her thought and know what she too was thinking of the same thing which p thought when she was attending to his wound...oh god who there thoughts were so similar....
thye were made 4 each other...

then they started staring each other...
both talk through their eyes...
g:p i luv u .....
g:kuch kuch hota hai p .....lekin tum kab samjhoge....
now g broke the silence and spoke...

g:kuch to hai p pls batao na....tum mujh se kuch nahi chupa sakte....aakhir mein tumhari pat.....she stopped ....realised what she was saying...
p:bolo g.....complete your sentence.....
g:mein tumhari patni hu.....
p:g agar patni ho to aapne pati ko beech raste mein akela chod ke kyun chali gayi???
g:p mein nahin chodna chahati thi.....tumhi ne mujhe jhane ko kaha tha ...tum hi ne kaha tha ki tumhe mujh se divorce chahiye....
p:g i am sorry.....tumhare jha ne ke baad hi mujhe is baat ka ehsaas hua.....lekin mein hichkicha rah tha....ki tum kaise react karogi....but then when u sent me those papers saying that i tortued u ...i was responsible 4 our childs death and then that vishakha thing...how could u g...after all this i thought u don't luv me anymore or never luved me...
G:no p i was not the first one to send the papers it was u who first sent me the papers saying that tumhe mere character pe shaq hai....p how could u....i never in my life thougth of any1 else other than u and will nver think of any1 else in future also....
p hum apni zindagi mein....paida bhi ek baar hote hai...pyaar bhi ek hi baar hota hai...shaadi bhi ek baar hoti hai...aur marte bhi ek baar bhi hotas hai...
then they solved out the whole puzzel with some cute fights b/w them....and came to a conclusion that they will not spare that laloo,hippo,bhensa,bhundu shah......4 his creating this large difference b/w p-g...

p:ab sab kuch hamare bech mein saaf hogaya hai.....i mean sab prob dur hogaye hai....mein tumse kuch kehna chahata hu..
g:haan bolo p....
p:g.....g.....mein......
g:bolo p suspense mat create karo....
p:kya tum mere paas wapis aaogi.....will u come back to me.....
g could not belive her ears....
G:p ek line kehne main....itna time laga diya.....mein isko sunane ke liye kab se bechain thi...
P:i luv u g......pls don't leave me.....again .....tumhare bina nahi jhi sakta.....(oh god this ghisa pita dialouge.....par chalta hai...)
g:i luv u to p.......but don't u ever ....not even when u r angry will even think to leaving me....
p:no i won't.....now i have realised the worth of my koinoor....
g:kohinoor now whos that...
p:oh god.....g kab samjhogi tum.....
G:mein mazak kar rahi thi.....oh god tum kab badloge p ......

then they hug each other.......and by now it's very late .....or say the sun is just gonna rise.....

now they strainght away head towards their home.....the mittal house...
it was gayatri's bday......
it was 5am in the morning and the bell rang....
she opened the door and she saw our duo standing infront of her.....
she tried to get into her senses .....1st she felt that it was a dream but then realised that it was reality.....they were back...
and it was the biggest gift gayatri had ever got on her b'day throughout her life.....


then end......

hope u liked this sense less boring story.....but u c i felt that it has been a long time or say it's hight time i write a story....since now a days i am out of good ideas as both the mais r making a mess of kutumb...even started repaeting the episodes......i am really out of ideas .....anyways i am eagarly waiting 4 your valuable comments......pls post them...
since i was watching dtph while writing this story i thought of writing some of it's dialouges and also it's title...and sincei am srk's fan so worte one dialouge from srk's film....kkhh other than his dtph...
also i did not get the lyrics of kkhh since there was a prob in my computer so pls bear with the ddlj lyrics.....(but they r also very good)

luv
AISHU I READ IT FROM KUTUMB LOVERS.......LOVED IT VRY MUCH........AISHU IS A VRY GUD WRITER.... HOPE U GUYS WILL LIKE IT!😊
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hiten&gauri fan thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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SO U GUYS LIKE IT????????????PLZZZZZZZZZZ POST UR VALUABLE COMMENTS!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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kudos 4 u.frm the time i came here i fink this is the 1st fanfic on hg.very gud work.ekta shud hire fanfic writers frm if to write her stories.its muchhhhhhh beta than her ghatiya ones.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thx yaar i really enjoyed it
kudos to u
keep it up
!!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I'LL POST ANOTHER FANFIC SOON!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey. thanks.. it was an amazing fanic. keep up the good work
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thankss...it waz really nice..I really Enjoyed it.. 😳

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