MG:SS Will u marry me???/pt 38 updatd on pg 71 29th june'14 - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part
geet going to india
hope maaneet met soon
waiting for precap eagerly
do cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
toh geet is coming back...if destiny wants maan n geet together den who r dey to stay apart...

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Read the whole ff
It's very interesting n beautiful
Geet had misunderstood maan n left him..dumb girl!!
I guess geet gave birth of twin n send muskan to maan...
But y?
Who's Armaan?
Hope their MU clears soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part
geet back to india
maan thinking about her
will they meet
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART 22
Geet, manav & neelum were on airport.
Geet:manav u have became a brave boy...u r nt afraid of landing at all..
Manav:haan so...I am on my dad...brave..hai na neelum...
Neelum nodes & geet smiles...
Geet:neelum tum manav ko lekar yaha bheto I will get a taxi...
She was about to leave when a pair of hands hold her.
Geet got shocked & turned.
Armaan:hey baby doll kaha chali...mey tua yaha hu...
Geet smiles & hugs him.
Geet:I missed u so much...
Armaan:haay...itna miss kiya..
Geet smiles & nodes.manav comes running.
Manav:armaan...where were u I missed u so much..
Armaan:ye agreez ki olaadh hindi mey bol...
Manav:armaan...mene tumko bhoat yaad kiya...
Armaan:kya baat hai tu 1week mey itna hindi sikh gaya..
Manav:mey hindi talking to mama har rooz..& neelum correct karti mujko..
Armaan:kar di na gaadbad..chal progress hai maaf kiya..par teri hindi ko tua main paka perfect karuga..
Manav:ohk kar lena par abhi ye bag pakdo..I m so tiered...
Armaan smiles & takes manav & bag both in arm's.
Geet also takes her luggage & walks near the car.
All hopped inside a classic BMW & marched towards handa mention.
Geet:armaan I want to go directly to hospital.
Armaan:par geet tum aabhi aai ho take some rest...
Geet:no armaan I want to meet papa & as soon as possible want to go back to London.
Armaan:par...
Geet:plze armaan.
Armaan:as u wish...
They all reached hospital & Armaan took geet to ICU.geet got tears seeing her papa in this state. Manav comes near geet.
Manav:mama I want to see nana ji...
Geet picks manav in her arms & make him see his nana ji..
Manav:mama why nana ji is surrounding by machine?
Geet:he is not well baby...
Manav:when will he get well..
Geet couldn't answer this she got more tears in her eyes.
Geet took Manav & sat on the chair.armaan comes next to her & hugs her.
Armaan:everything will be fine..
Geet:hmm...
By the time rano comes over there & hugs geet.
Rano starts crying seeing geet in front of her.
Rano:geet beta tumarey papa...
Geet:maa plze aap tension maat lo everything will be fine...
Rano:geet wo doctor ne kaha he is serious. .
Geet:maa plze aap yesa maat kaho..mera kya hoga fir..
Geet starts crying.armaan comes near them with Manav in his hand.
Armaan:geet kya hai rula diya wapas maa ko...ufff
Manav:uff...
Geet makes a balloon face & look at Manav & armaan. rano wipes tears & takes manav in his hand.
Rano:Manav beta come to nani maa..
Manav:nani maa...I missed u so much...
Rano:mera raja beta...missed u too.
Rano kissed Manav on his face & hugs him tight.
Rano:geet tum aur manav ghar jao...u must be tiered.
Geet:nahi maa I want 2 be with papa..
Rano:but beta..
Geet:Manav go with neelum...I will come home in some time ohk.
Manav:ohk mama...

On the other side maan gets ready for office & left.
He was stuck in traffic. There he was on a turning point when he got signal.he immediately put brake on his car.
He noticed his door lock was open he was about to lock the door when some one opens the door & step inside the car.
Maan saw a small boy climbing inside the car & he gave a wide smile to maan.
Maan also return a smile.neelum open the door.
Neelum:Manav baby this is not our car chalo...come fast..
Manav:neelum look here he is daddy...
Neelum immediately bend down & was shocked.
Neelum:sorry sir...wo madam have send a different car we can go in that.u must be here to see badey sir...you can go sir..
Maan was so confused what was going on & why this small baby is calling him papa...
Neelum:manav baby chalo lets go..
Manav says no & hugs maan...& round his arms around his neck...
Manav:daddy manav want to go with u...
Maan:wo...wo...
Neelum:chalo Manav mama dategi...
Manav:no I want to go with daddy...ask mama I will come home with daddy...
All dis was been seen by armaan he comes over der & pull Manav.
Manav:armaan daddy. ..he starts crying...
Maan also felt really bad but he cannot stop dat baby as he don't no who he is & why he is not feeling good when this boy is crying.
Armaan just takes Manav & march towards his car & takes Manav away from maan..
Maan was totally disturbed by this & was again not feeling well.
He cancelled all the meeting & asked adi not to disturb him for some time..

Precap:past.


Edited by nimi216 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
geet came to india very good...
waiting for maan meeting manav...
continue soon!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey ! not able to press like button for both parts ! both are nice parts !! atlast geet is in India !! waiting to see how they will meet...geet ek baar apni beti ko dekhna nahi chahti...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya.sravya

hey ! not able to press like button for both parts ! both are nice parts !! atlast geet is in India !! waiting to see how they will meet...geet ek baar apni beti ko dekhna nahi chahti...

I hv written more so read dat.
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Posted: 11 years ago
read both parts dear
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
agar manav ko maan se milwana hi nehi hai toh maan k tasveer kyun dikhaye...bachcha hai...kabhi papako pass nehi paya...abb dekha toh jaana hi chayega na...

awesome n wonderful update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Marry me, please.

How do you react when a man asks you if you want to marry him?

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