AR/ARSH & Sid FF |Yarian 2|Part 6|PG15|| - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
great start maria sis.
continue it soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
awesome!!!

looking forward to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wen ull b updatin dear... 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey doc!

awesome writing...loved the plot and its real interesting too!👏

update it soon...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Awesome part...loved it so much.
Please continue super soon.
Thanks for the pm, take care.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys hope you all doing great..sorry for my disappearance ..
i promise i'll update tomorrow..updates are ready i have bank of 5 updates:)..wait till tomorrow..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2

'Don't worry Mrs Modhi,he is fine absolutely"Nurse told her patiently.She had been trying to be patient with this lady but now things are getting out control So, she says bit irritatedly"If you still want to call the doctor ,I'll do that"
Taking a sigh she says "no that's okay,if he is fine.You can go now.Sorry for my behavior"Nurse nods and went away..


Sitting again on the bed,she saw him staring at her intently.She just kept staring at him.She knows he wants to say something to her ,as she saw him trying to move his lips.She wants to stop him doing that bcz it can tired him but also She didn't want him to speak at all.She is liking this silence because she know if she heard his voice all the sympathy ,pain she is feeling for him will be again replaced by hate and anger and she will leave him.And right now he needs her.Standing up she went away from him before she loose control as the memories came back...

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He saw her talking to an other lady.He was not able to hear properly what they are saying.He just wants to see her.He is seeing her after long time,too long time.He was desaprate to meet her ,feel her,hear her few days ago and now she is standing in front of him but he was not able to touch her,feel her.He tried hard to move his hand but even his finger isn't able to move.
She sat beside and was staring at him with her emotionless eyes.Those same emotionless eyes few years ago has love,respect,faith for him but now there is nothing...

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"E hmm.I want to ask doctor.Can i take him to home now and is he able to travel?You see I have to go back to London.I had told my family that I'll be only for few days in Manchester but now its has been a month"She asked the doctor.
Well Mrs Modhi seeing his condition I would prefer not to travel but as you have to go back to London.So you can take him.But make sure he didn't strain his muscles.And as you know his kidney are not in good state so,he is not able to undergo any kind of stress or harsh whether..that can cause renal failure or even...See you around Mrs.Modhi"

She sighed finally she will able to move out of this city which had so many bad memories.She sat on the bench and kept thinking about her life.Many question arose in her mind now what?.She can't leave him?She just can't..!
Her thoughts broke with the shrill sound of her mobile .She looking upon screen and saw "Baby" flashing.A faint smile crept upon her face..!
She pick up the call and heard a babyish voice"Mom..wen do ale tomming bat..(When you r coming back..same way my little cousin abdullah says:)
Smiling she replied"Soon baby soon..remember one thing ..Mom miss you.misses you soo much baby so much"As soon as she says she heard her baby saying
"Ani mishes you too..tome bat..papa bad..ani..muma(Ani misses you too..pls come back.papa bad)"
Sure baby now be a good boy and give phone to papa "Before he could make any protess she says"Muma promise to bring chocolates and eclairs for you..now be happy and give the phone to papa"
The little one quickly give phone to his papa.
"Hey..?? How r you"She can hear the concern in his voice and the brave mask which she was wearing melt away and she finally broke down
I am not fine Sid ..I am not..I don't want to go through the same hell but I saw..him..the blood...I was not able to..I took him ..doctor...Sid he is in very bad condition very bad...Sid and you know what irritates the most even after all those things he done to me I still care..I still care ..I always sees him as a composed person now and now he is just lying ..why all this happen why??"
He didn't say anything just kept listening to her.He can hear the tiredness,anger,helplessness in her voice.
After a long pause he speaks"Hold your self riddhima..It took too many years to bring you out of those memories ..Don't remember bad things..He right now needs us and ..we..we'll help him"
"Even after all those he things he done to us"
"Yes even those thing he done us riddhima..we'll help him and prove him what he thought about me,about you ,about his family was all wrong.We care for him.we do.Bring him back to London.Your flight is day after tomorrow..."


next update before eid:)..pakka..



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sneak Peak for next part;)



"Haww arman you stole my candy..give my candy back" A girl of about 7 years shouts on a boy almost of her age.
"why should i give you my candy"The boy protest.
"You are a lier I Don't want to play with you not any more.I hate you arman..I am going to play with Sid"The girl run away calling "Sid".The boy kept standing there.


"Sid will you play with me??"She ask a boy who is elder to her.
"Why not riddhima..Hey I bought candies for you..here have"He gave her candies and she hugged him tightly and say:"I love you said"
When she felt someone jerked her away from sid and then he slapped her...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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armaan cant b the villian yar. What has he done to her nd sid. U mystery girl. Itna suspense rkhti hai k kya krun tmhara. So want to knw wt he did to her. Nd plz armaan villian nahiii.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20

Hey Maria

How r u dear?

Love the update

So Ridzy is married to Sid

Waiting to read more

So do continue soon

Thanks for the PM
Take care

Lots of Love

Geet

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