~Good Girl And Bad Boy~#2 epi pg 111

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Posted: 12 years ago

#511

Heyy
nandy
u r a amazing writer for sure
sorry for commenting so late
I was not there in this forum for some week
I read all the update today
thank for pm
all the updates was really amazing, awesome, cool and superb
I just love all of them
and u rock

Edited by lovesim - 12 years ago

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Aakriti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#512

Hey nandy 🤗

That was truly amazing !!

I knew rishab had something really big in store for madhu 😉

But something this big !!

I really didn't expect this much 😆

As always i loved reading it !!

Don't know how u manage to write this long even when u r busy...

Lovely update !!

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BikewithGirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#513

Lovely update nandy..i loved rishbh's suprise..continue soon..

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take_a_hint

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Posted: 12 years ago

#514

PART 43

*Madhu's POV*

I beamed happily as we both walked back to the room hand in hand looking at each other's eyes. This is what people describe as picture perfect. We love each other. Rishab shared a room with Ranveer which is just adjacent to us, so we stood in front of my room still not able to wipe the grin off our faces.

"I have a gift for you" i said shyly.

"Really!! I thought you hated me" Rishab said excitedl.

"Well its not as special as yours but..."

"Barbie doll everything about you is special for me" he said cupping my face.

I disappeared into the room and returned after a minute with a gift box.

"I bought it long time ago but wasn't sure if i should give you after the little scene you in the park" i said

Rishab looked at me with guilty. He is not at fault anyway.

"Open" i insisted.

Rishab's surprised expression turned into huge smile looking at the gift. It was a specially designed watch with straps and dial that have our photos together.

"That is really thoughful" he said " love it"

He immediately wore it in his hand. And i flt really proud seeing him happy.

"So good night then " i said

"yeah see you later " Rishab said but he didn't move from his place but stood there scratching his head.

"what?" i asked

"are we going to give away good night kiss ritual?" he asked sheepily.

I laughed throwing my head back. Now that is the Rishab i know. My moron Khundra is officially back. I tip toed to place a peck on his cheeks.

"Am i kid?" he asked disappointed.

"That is it for now " i said waving dismissively.

Pouting he went back to his room. Awww my Rishab.

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"And he said those words?" Ishita and Ranveer echoed with wide eyes looking at me.

"yeah?" i said looking at them a bit offended.

" and Rishab did all those romantic things ?" Ranveer asked shocked.

I nodded biting my lips.

"You are talking as if i am a robot " Rishab said sitting beside me.

" i am proud of you brother " Ranveer patted Rishab's shoulder encouragingly.

Rishab made a professional bow grinning at his brother.

"I was plotting to kill you" Ishita said narrowing her eyes.

Rishab rolled his eyes.

"keep her happy" she said in a matured tone.

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"Where are we going?" i asked Rishab as we were walking through market.

" I am going to buy something for you" he said

"what? Why?" i asked

"You are my girlfriend and i have rights to buy things for you" he said

"Fine then why did we leave other behind" i asked

"Barbie doll don't you want to be alone with me" he asked pulling me near him.

I rolled my eyes.

We went to a dress shop. Rishab wanted to take me to saree section but i directly pulled him to western section.

" We will check some tops " i said

"size mam "the sales girl asked

I looked down at myself unsure.

"32" Rishab said without thinking.

The girl looked us both giggling. I smiled shyly.

"How did you know?" i asked Rishab once the girl went to fetch tops.

"Is that even a question? Do you really want to know how i know?" he asked waggling his eyebrows.

"Shameless" i hit his elebow.

"try this " Rishab said pointing at a sandal color top with black dragon it reached just below my waist.

I took it and went inside the trail room. After a minute not before i slipped out of my old top i heard a knock. I know its him so i ignored. When i was about to put on new top my phone rang. I sighed and took it.

"No Rishab you can't come in" i said

"barbie doll " he pouted.

"Yor. Are.Not.Allowed.In" i said each word stressing it.

"Barbie doll i love you " he said

I have already heard him say that but still it gives me jitter feelings. I blushed hearing that.

"Am i alowed in now?" he asked

"No" i said smiling opening the knob of the door.

Within seconds he stood before me grinning like a kid on chritsmas morning. He frowned looking at me already wearing the new top. I winked at him.

"I thought i could help you dress" He said suggestively.

"Sorry Mr.Shameless i can dress myself" i said

"there could be something where i could help you" he said waggling his eyebrows.

I placed a finger on my chin making a thoughtful face.

"Maybe you can help me with a kiss" i said making a serious face.

Rishab's eyes glowed when he leaned forward to kiss me.

After about five minutes spent in trail room we both emerged out with goofy grin. The sales girl gave us a knowing smile when we were in billing section.

After spending more time with each other we went back to hotel. I was surprised when no one called to disturb us.

"Barbie doll i am starving. Refresh and wear your new clothes we will go for early dinner" he said

I got ready after a 15 minutes nap and waited for Rishab in my room. I texted Ishita asking her where she was but no reply. Isn't it strange.

"where are they anyways?" i asked Rishab

"maybe romancing" Rishab shrugged

"where is yash?" i asked

"barbie doll you worry more about my brothers. Worry about me" he said pulling me closer.

We both reached the restaurant when Rishab like a true gentleman opened the door and i entered.

"Surprise!!!!!!" everyone shouted.

Wow. Two surprise within one day. I turned to look at Rishab who smiled at me whole heartedly.

"Is this why you kept me engaged whole day?" i asked

"right answer" he said

"But Rishab its your birthday as well, but it is not a surprise for you" i said

He is not enjoying his birthday. I feel guilty. I looked at him with a puppy face.

"Barbie doll you are the most precious gift i got this year." He said smiling.

"i love you" i mouthed.

So sweet everyone was here. And all were dressed casually. There was a big chocolate cake in the middle with wordings 'happy birthday Rishab and Madhu'. Wow i am going to share the cake with Rishab.

"Cut the cake " yash insisted.

I took the knife and Rishab held my hand. We cut together and as we shared same birthdays we shared first piece of our cakes as well.

Later everyone started chatting when my phone buzzed. The ID flashed 'aman' before i could attend it Rishab took it from me.

"Happy birthday" i heard aman say

"Thanks " Rishab replied with a cocky smile.

"Rishab?" aman said unsure.

" brilliant guess" Rishab said looking at me. I rolled my eyes.

"Where is Madhu?" he asked

"busy" Rishab said

I glared at him. come on he is my friend and he wants to wish me. What is wrong with that.

"Maybe you should call next year" Rishab said

Before he could fight i snatched the phone.

"Hello aman" i said looking at Rishab.
Rishab made a puppy face and looked at me.
"Thanks " i said

Ishita was strangely quiet. She didn't do anything Ishita-ish. And that worried me.

"Why is Ishita upset?" i asked Rishab.

" Upset?! Is it why she is not talking? Good thing barbie doll lets have some peace" Rishab said carelessly.

Ranveer had a straight face and he was not seen near Ishita the whole night. Something is fishy. I need to find it.

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Clara20

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Posted: 12 years ago

#515

yipee me first🥳🥳

awesome update nandy...specially the shopping part...rishab is so shameless...

and everybuddy arranged surprise for madhu..loved it though its Rishabs birthday too bt he knw about surprise..

whts happened betn ishu and veer...i knw madhu and rishu wl help them to sort out😊

Happy friendship day u too😊

Edited by Clara20 - 12 years ago

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Aliya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#516

Ok I'm not first but I'm third after a long time
Super duper update 😃
The shopping scene was so sweet.
Rishab is such a sweetheart and his family is also really nice. Hmm he also deserved a special birthday gift but he has his Madhu 😊
Loved Rishab and Aman's convo 😆
Hmm.. I wonder what's wrong with Ishita and ranveer.
Maybe they had a fight and next will be RishBala bringing them closer again 😊

Edited by ..Aliya.. - 12 years ago