TAAREY OS - KARLE TU BHI MOHABBAT

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey frieds its me hima and m back with another os on our fav couple taarey..

TAAREY OS - KARLE TU BHI MOHABBAT


Rey loves his mother a lot.. he is a totaly mamma's boy.. rey can't live without his mother.. but unfortunately his mother died in an accident.. taani and rey are best friends and as always our taani loves rey a lot..rey never belied in love , firstly bcoz of his dad left them and after his mother's death he lost all his believe in love.. the story starts from the next day of rey's mother's death..!!

Rey was heartbroken.. the most precious thing in his life his mother died infront of him n he wasn't able to do anything.. he was sitting in his room lyk a body without soul.. he can never imagine his life without his mother.. he was holding his mother's photo and crying..

While taani was watching all this from door.. she felt a pang in her heart.. she can't see her best friend her one and only love of her life lyk this.. she promised herself she will make rey back to normal and make him believe in love..

Taani went in and sat near him.. rey noticed her and hugged her tightly and cried aloud.. taani consoled his broke the hug and wiped his tears..

t- rey agar aap aise royenge to aapki mom ko acha nhi lagega na fir vo aapse naraz ho zayengi na...

r- aur kitna naraz hoyengi pehle hi itna door chali gyi hain

t- rey aap unse bahut pyaar krte hain na to unhe aap aise reh kar dukh pahuchayenge .. unhe bhi kush rehne ka haq hai na aur agar aap aise rahenge to vo kush kaise hoyengi..

r- vo kush hoke vapas mere paas to nhi ayengi na..

t- shh rey bas ab ekdum chup.. mein abhi aapke liye khana laati hun aur khabardaar jo mana kiya..

she was controlling her tears bt as soon as she left his rooms tears started falling from her eyes..

taani goes in the kitchen takes some food n again goes to rey's room..

t ' rey plz khalo

r- taaani mann nhi hai

t- mere liye bhi nhi

rey agrees and taani started feeding him with her hands...


in dino dil mera
Mujhse hai keh raha
Tu khwaaab saja
Tuu jele zara

Hai tujhe bhi izaazat
Karle tu bhi mohabbat


rey was staring at her how much she cares for him how much she is worried for him..!! taani decided to live with rey only for few days..!! it was night time and taaani made rey sleep and went in her room.. she cried alot

t-mein rey ko aise nhi dekh skti plz plz plz krishnaji meri help kro mujhe kch samajh nhi aa rha hai mein kya karoon kaise unke chehre smile laon.. kaise batao ki I love u rey..idea.. hope rey ko acha llage..

she also went to sleep with her plan ready for nxt day..

morning

taani wakes up get freshen up and wents to check rey.. rey was sleeping lyk an innocent kid she went near him kissed on his forehead and whispered good morning rey... and went in kitchen for making coffee for both of them.. while rey could feel some soft feather touch on his forehead n hears some1 saying good morning as he opens his eyes he saw taani going from his room.. his lips curved to form a sweet smile..

after their breakfast taani asked him to come with her.. they went to an orphanage with gifts and balloons.. taani was giving colourful balloons to the kids and rey was feeling quite relaxed and happy too after seeing taani and those kids..


Beraang si hai padi zindagi
Kuch rang to bharu
Mein appni tanhai ke vaste abb kuch to karu


Taani saw him smiling and went near him..

t- rey in bacho ne bhi apne parents ko khoya hai per inhe pyaar per bharosa hai yeh jaante haai bhagwan jo karta hai ache ke liye hi krta hai agr aaj yeh akele hain t kal inka haath thamne ke liye koi jaroor ayega inhe khusde pyaar hai rey pyaar se hi zindagi chalti hai..

saying this she hold his hand n squeezed it to make him realise that she is always with him n he gave a assuring smile..


Jab mile thodhi fhursat
Khud se karle mohabbat
Hai tujhe bhi izaazat
Karle tu bhi mohabbat

Many days went lyk this only rey was finally being back to normal and was surely in love with taani.. and taani was happy that she finally succeeded to bring bach his smile..

One day taani was in kitchen making noodles for them.. rey was standing near the door and saw taani making noodles... he could see her face so innocent so pure and the most beautiful eyes in the world.. he was staring at her shamelessly..

Taani felt some1's gaze on her as she turned she saw rey staring her shamelessly a shade of crimson red appeared on her cheeks.. their eyes met and whole world stopped for them...

Usko chupa kar mein
Sab se Kabhi le chalu
Kahin door
Aankhon ke pyaalo se pita rahu
Uske chere ka noor

Taani came back to her sences and to avoid awkwardness she started looking here and there and stared making noodles..

Rey could feel now that he has aquite good effet on her.. he moved closer to her until his chect collided with her back.. she could feel his hot breath on his shoulder.. he bent down placed a trail of kisses from her shoulder to her neck..


Is zamane se chupkar
Puri kar lu mein hasrat
Hai tujhe bhi izaazat
Karle tu bhi mohabbat

taani was shivering with his touch amd closed her eyes.. rey went near he ear kissed it and said in the most huskiest voice..

r- I don't know when how or where bt I am madly in love with u..

taani can't belived.. did he jzt said that.. dis was all she could think.. she was socked..

rey turned taani towards him and said..

r- TAANI I LOVE YOU

taani was so happy she hugged rey as tight as possible

t- I love u too rey.. I love u..

tears were flowing from taani eyes.. rey kissed her tears away as if saying he will never let her cry again in her life..

they hugged each other passionately showing that they are made for each other and will never get away from each other till their last breath..!!


THE END


so here it ends.. hope u guyz lyk it.. pllz leave you feedbacks and sorry for spelling mistakes..


love

hima


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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres !
Awesome ! 👏👏
Loved it to the core! 😳
You wrote it beautifully ! 👏
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Really Beautiful OS and with many emotions attached to it. Enjoyed it Thoroughly ! Great Work !👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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haaye... me marjaawaan...
ossom os hai!!!
hona hi tha...
meri behen jo hai!!!
the way taani took care of rey,
when he was in lot of pain...
and finally she was successful!!!
the song is one of my fav. and
apt to the situation!!!
romace toh maar dalaa!!!
love u lots and lots my sishooo!!!
keep writing!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey nice one!!
thnx for d pm dear😃😃
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Super amazing update dear...😃😳
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Awesome and beautiful os
loved it
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Cute OS😳
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thnku guyz.. thnku for ur comments..!! they mean alot to me thnku..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome awesome awesome
i just loved it
i could feel the pain the love
it was amazing
i m in ove with this os
good work hima

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