OS - Razia-Ghafur-Haseena Bi

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A fine evening... i was busy doing my college craps... It was so boring that i finally got bored and threw the books away.. Doing homeworks for the past 1 hour? How nerve wracking? i just got fed up with it... Man.. just give me a break.. It was then i took my phone and found two miscalls and 10 message from Sheethal.. My girlfriend! How cliche is she getting god! I deleted her entire 'baby baby' messages and opened my FB a/c

Yeh kya hai , Facebook mein bhi same thing... i mean just check my wall... That bitch has just fired it with her messages.. And i found my friends commenting to her post instead of me!

Sheethal Raguvanshi: Hey baby... jaanu kaha hai tu... I miss u..
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Raghav Malhotra.. Hmmm i can understand ur feeling babes.. I know how lonely ur feeling right now, just come out for an outing with me tomorrow, u'll defo enjoy my company 😉

Ugh! If he wants to ask her for a date.. just directly ask yaar.. Afterall i'm just so fed up with her.. Atleast let me leave in peace for a while..

Deleting every silly posts on my wall... i clicked on the news feed section hoping to find something interesting.. It was then my eyes gazed a unique picture.. A picture of a girl..

I just bought my mobile close to my eyes.. Examing her face.. I think i've met her somewhere.. Some of her friend who by chance became her friend liked one of her photo and i got to see it cz she has set d privacy as 'Friends of Friends' .. I know so lucky i've got..

I clicked on her profile.. Do i know her? Is she related to me? Has... Oh no .. no away its gonna be her.. i mean how could she? I just checked the about section and found her details similar.. same place... everything..

It was then i realised that she was Haseena my childhood bestie.. Her father got a transfer at Lucknow so she had to leave ... evading every sweet memories i had with her.. Eventhough i really don't remember our good old times but her face is still crystal clear in my mind.. I mean she wasn't that beautiful and all that tym but now she just looked so beautiful.. her eyes.. her features were really cute.. Was she the same old Haseena, i used to play with??

omg i just gaped seeing her pics.. Finally after few minutes of my gawking section, i send her a friend request.. She didnt accept it.. I know she might be online.. What if she didnt realised me?? Oh no.. I just straight away messaged her about me and lo i got what i wanted

She replied and accepted my request at the same time.. We chatted a lot for a while and it was then i found out that she was in Delhi.. same as to my place.. One day i asked her out and she easily accepted...

I told my granny everything and when i was about to go, she stopped me..

''gaffur? You forgot to take this.." I turned and found what she was talking about... My granny was basically interested in astrology , superficial stuffs so she used to create weird spells on certain things.. Nd this time she created a magic spell on daisy flower.. Well the magic of this flower is that it'll never wither..

After a while i reached the park and haseena was waiting for me..

''Hey Gafuuu..'' She came running towards me and hugged me tightly.. Woah.. she never used to be like this before.. She used to be the shy types

''Hey Hasee..'' We talked a lot and when she was about to leave..

''Hey hasee.. i need to tell something to you..''
''Yes.. tell me.. dude if u wanna say 'ILU' just give me some time.. i need to rethink about it''

I gawked at her unbelievingly.. I mean i liked her a bit but how come she went that fast!

''Eh.. umm.. not like that.. but just take this flower.. its really special'' I stuttered
''Special as in?''
''It wont wither..'' I shook my head

She smiled at me, accepted the flower and tucked it onto her hair..
''Is it? wow then i'm gonna wear it everyday.. Thanks Gaffi..'' She hugged me for once and kissed me on my cheek

'Aila... ek phool ke liye mujhe ye gift mila toh.. what will happen if i gift her something more than this??''LOL


We started meeting daily and one day it was one of her friend's bday.. She invited me too.. It was in some local pub.. I reached the place... I checked the time..

''UMM... 1 hour early than the time she told me to reach'' I went inside and waited for her.. Times passed by but she never reached.. I felt a bit sad because i thought of proposing her ... I thought she was the right person for me.. But she ditched me..

It was then i found a girl drinking tonnes of beer.. I went towards her and tapped her shoulder..

''Her ssup..''
''Can't u see // i'm drinking.. don't disturb me jerk'' That girl pushed me back.. Woah.. what was she seriously made oF? Iron?

'I went towards her and snatched the glass from her hand.. She glared at me.. I t was then i saw her face completely.. OMG.. what should i say?? sHE looks so angelistic..

''Hey give that back..'' She tried to snatch her glass snapping me out of my thoughts..
''But before that .. just tell me ur name..'' I shot back..
''K fine..myself Razia.. now plz.''
''Umm sorry lots of alcohol consumption is equal to liverscurosis, livercurosis= death, death= end of ur life, end of ur life= loneliness in my life, i cant loose you dear..''

''That's fine... my bf ditched me .. i dont want to leave anymore..'' She replied.. sorrow evident on her face..

I cupped her cheek and looked straight into her eyes.. ''Don't worry... hell with him.. now i'm there with u... and i'll never let a single tear fall from your eyes'' I admitted

She looked a bit melted by my confession and smiled.. 'Really?''
''Hmm'' I replied..''Just take this flower..it'll look u more beautiful and can i tell u something , it wont wither...''

''Is it?? How sweet of u... mmm??''
''Gaffur..'' I smiled.. She hugged me tightly.. ''Ur really sweet..''

We broke the hug and after a while i found a warm arms around my neck...

''Hey gaffi...'' I turned around and found Haseena.. Oh shit what is she doing here right now.. I found Razia looking at us a bit confused.. I mustered a fake smile at her

''Hasee.. what ru doing here?''
''Hey... i know ur angry with me... I became so late yaar... but u know what , i love u and cant leave u ever.. that;s why i'm here leaving behind all my busy schedules..''

'''Yes i know u love me'' I giggled and found Razia glaring at me..
I guess she might've found the flower on Haseena's hair..

''Is he ur bf?'' Razia asked
''Yup he is..''

Razia gave me a cold look.. ''Then what am i to u Gaffur??''

''MMM... Girlfriend'' I admitted without facing both of them

''What?? How's that possible... u get lost bitch.. Gaffur's mine..'' Haseena shot back... I found both the girls glowering at each other

''No.. Gaffur is mine..'' I felt Razia pulling me towards her by my arm..
''Let go off my BF..'' Haseena too pulled my arms on the other side

OH Allah... What kind of a trap i'm into now!! I thought suffocated by the hard clutches of these two girls...
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''Haseena and Razia.. just stop it.. let me clear the situation''

''No Gaffi no worries .. i'll handle this bitch'' Haseena replied.. her hair all messed up due to constant tackling with Razia...

''Gaffur baby, ur mine.. nd plz stop stressing ok.. i'll take care of this girl'' Razia too shot back with full on attitude...

Oh no this is seriously gonna be worse.. Finally i stood in between both the girls and tried to stop them only to get a tonnes of punchings and slappings...LOL Finally i used my whole strength and pushed both of them to which they collapsed on the floor..

''Stop it guys.. just stop it!!!'' I shouted.. My voice was so high that it seeked everyone's attention..

I sighed in frustration...

''Guys.. this is only about my life... u shouldn't do like this... Haseena i thought u loved me but when u never showed up today... i thought u ditched me.. that's why i interacted with Razia... and it was then i realised that both of us were same... so i felt a bit sympthatetic for her.. and just before i was about to accept her as my gf u came again... i really donna what should i do?? Give me some time.. i need to think about it ok..''

Saying so, i left the pub without even giving one last glance at the girls... tHt night i was lost in thoughts.. Who should i select?? I was confused... I never realised when i fall into sleep thinking about it...

It was then i heard a peculiar song on my ipod...


''Tum Paas Aaye, Yoon Muskuraaye
Tum Paas Aaye, Yoon Muskuraaye
Tumne Na Jane Kya, Sapne Dikaaye
Tum Paas Aaye, Yoon Muskuraaye
Tumne Na Jane Kya Sapne Dikaaye
Abh To Mera Dil, Jage Na Sota Hai
Kya Karon Hai, Kuch Kuch Hota Hai
Kya Karon Hai, Kuch Kuch Hota Hai
Alka:
Tum Paas Aaye, Yoon Muskuraaye
Tumne Na Jane Kya Sapne Dikaaye
Abh To Mera Dil, Jage Na Sota Hai
Kya Karon Hai, Kuch Kuch Hota Hai
Kya Karon Hai, Kuch Kuch Hota Hai
Udit:
Na Jane Kaisa Ahsaas Hai
Bujhti Nahin Hai, Kya Pyaas Hai
Alka:
Kya Nasha Is Pyaar Ka,
Mujhpe Sanam, Chaa Ne Laga
Udit:
Koi Na Jane, Kyoon Chain Khota Hai
Kya Karoon Hai, Kuch Kuch Hota Hai
Alka:
Kya Karoon Hai, Kuch Kuch Hota Hai...
Kya Rang Layee, Meri Dua
Ye Ishq Jane Kaise Hua
Baichaineeyon Mein Chain
Na Jane Kyoon, Aane Laga
Udit:
Tanhai Mai Dil, Yaadein Sanjota Hai
Kya Karoon Hai, Kuch Kuch Hota Hai
Alka:
Kya Karoon Hai, Kuch Kuch Hota Hai
Udit:
Tum Paas Aaye, Yoon Muskuraaye

Tumne Na Jane Kya, Sapne Dikhaye
Alka:
Tum Paas Aaye, Yoon Muskuraaye
Tumne Na Jane Kya, Sapne Dikhaye
Udit:
Abh To Mera Dil, Jage Na Sota Hai
Kya Karoon Hai, Kuch Kuch Hota Hai
Alka:
Kya Karoon Hai, Kuch Kuch Hota Hai... ''

Eventhough i feel the same for both of the girls... I really dont think both were my true partner... If they had true feelings.. they wouldve done sacrifice, cz i believe true love is all about sacrifice... all they want is to win, in either way their ego should'nt be hurt... I dont think any of this girls will ever make me happy!!

So next day i gave the flower to both the girls and bid adieu... Well thats a sweet side of rejecting someone.. I guess...

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