TaaRey OS - Aankhon Ki Gustakhiyan (PM's later)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Back with another OS of mine … Something more on the cuter side, I suppose. This is one situation I would definitely enjoy watching. Missing TaaRey lots so in their memories; I am writing whatever I can basically imagine, especially with a song. But still warning ... My work most of the time turns out bakwas

TaaRey OS – Aankhon Ki Gustakhiyan

"Yaar Itni der kyun lagaya. Tujhe toh pata hai na ki hume rehearsal karna hai and I didn't expect ki tu itna late aayega" Rey hated it now when people were late or would not do their work properly, let's just say after Taani left, he had all those traits of hers which he missed a lot.

"Rey look Swayam was busy, He has a valid reason for coming late and instead of hearing what he had said, tum uss par chila rahe ho!" Sharon retaliated back at him. Sharon would not stand anyone scolding her boyfriend except her! And Rey wouldn't even listen to Swayam. But Rey was stubborn; he simply hated it if anyone was late. It somewhere reminded him that he was late, he was late to stop Taani from going away from him, and how his foolish decision ended his beautiful time with Taani.

"Look Sharon, I don't care! Late means Late so don't expect me …" Rey was about to continue before he heard a voice, a soft soothing voice which his ears were dying to hear.

Music
"Bhai" it said. Rey immediately shut his eyes. It's not the first time he had imagined her but this time it felt so genuine but his mind did not allow him to believe it's the truth.

He opened his eyes and slowly turned around to see her standing there; his Taani was right in front of him! His eyes glared at her and he really couldn't help it. She already had her eyes set on the floor, she knew what was coming and maybe she wasn't prepared to face it. Nothing was audible to him anymore. The girls came towards Taani and gave her hugs and said things but all he saw her and her smiling face. Everyone clearly noticed but didn't say anything.

Aankhon Ki Gustakhiyaan
Maaf Ho
His eyeballs were glued to her. She like everyone else noticed but did not dare to look towards him.

O Aankhon Ki Gustakhiyaan
Maaf Ho
She moved forward towards the boys and SwaRon. She wanted to say something but his intense gaze was making her feel nervous.

Ek Tuk Tumhein Dekhti Hain
Jo Baat Kehna Chaahe Zubaan Tumse Vo Ye Kehti Hain
She gave a weak smile to everyone. Rey came up to her and stood right next to her with his eyeballs still glued to her. She tried to take a glance at him but she knew everyone was looking at her.

Aankhon Ki Sharmohaya
Maaf Ho
A shade of crimson crept up her cheeks unknowingly when she realised he was shamelessly glaring at her like there was no tomorrow.

Tumhein Dekhke Jhukti Hain
A small smile took over her lips thinking about his actions

Uthi Aankhein Jo Baat Na Keh Sakin
Jhuki Aankhein Vo Kehti Hain
She quickly made an excuse of going to VP sir's cabin for formalities and rushed out. But upon reaching the door, she turned back and looked at him

Aankhon Ki
Aankhon Ki
Gustakhiyaan
Maaf Ho
They both were lost in each other's eyes. They missed that warmth so dearly that it was just so hypnotic for both of them

Music
Taani was walking towards VP sir's cabin and met a few people. While Rey, was following her catching her every expression, her every emotion which he missed deeply. She would look back at times as if feeling his presence around but he would just hide behind a pillar which would make sure he is not seen to her. It was like a game of hide and seek between them. But while walking, Taani's leg had twisted and she fell down. Rey saw that and immediately went towards her. Without any words, he carried her in his arms. She just gazed at him, which gave as a constant to bring her where ever he wanted.

Kaajal Ka Ek Til Tumhare Labhon Pe Laga Loon
La la la..
He brought her to the medical room and laid her down on the bed.

Haan Chanda Aur Suraj Ki Nazron Se Tumko Bacha Loon
Hmmm..
He was about to call the nurse when she held his hand indicating him not to go away from her.

Oh Palkhon Ki Chilman Mein Aao Main Tumko Chhupa Loon
Aa..
They both looked at each other, with the pain and agony of separation. He bent down towards her fulfilling her wish.

Khayaalon Ki Ye Shokhiyaan
Maaf Ho
He pushed away a strand of hair which was covering her face and she instantly closed her eyes.

Har Dam Tumhein Sochti Hain
Jab Hosh Mein Hota Hai Jahan Madhosh Ye Karti Hain
She rested her head on his hand while he looked at her mesmerised by her innocence

Aankhon Ki Sharmohaya
Maaf Ho
She quickly came back into her senses and moved her head slightly away

Music
While all this was happening, Sharon had seen this and used her fast thinking and quickly locked the door of the medical room making sure no one can go in and they cannot go out. They heard some noise coming from the door. Rey went to check and found it locked.

Ye Zindagi Aapki Hi Amaanat Rahegi
Ay Hey
Rey did not know what to say but Taani understood by his expression and actions that the door was locked

Dil Mein Sada Aapki Hi Mohabbat Rahegi
Ay Hey
He went to Taani and Taani pulled him back down to his knees. She held his hands and looked into his eyes.

In Saanson Ko Aapki Hi Zaroorat Rahegi
He looked back and yet again they both were lost. Their eyes were speaking for each other.

Is Dil Ki Naadaniyaan
Maaf Ho
She looked down, asking for forgiveness for her decision for leaving him as tears brimmed up her eyes

Ye Mere Kahan Sunti Hain
He made her face him by pushing her chin up slightly

Ye Pal Pal Jo Hote Hain Bepal Sanam To sapne Naye Bunti Hain
Before she could react, He pulled her into a hug with all his might. He could also feel his eyes welling up.

Aankhon Ki
Aankhon Ki
They both started tearing, but in happiness. Finally all that pain and separation was over.

Gustakhiyaan
Maaf Ho
Rey pushed away from the hug and linked her forehead with his.

Sharmohaya
Maaf Ho.
They both wanted to capture that moment which resided in their hearts forever.

Sometimes we let affection, go unspoken,
Sometimes we let our love go unexpressed,
Sometimes we can't find words to tell our feelings,
Especially towards those we love the best.
~ Anonymous
I'm Done with this one. I know how can 1 person write 2-2 bakwas in one day …
I'm still thinking how ..
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raddhi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
will do unres whn u send PM
could not stop my self from reading
haaye it was awsm OS
Edited by raddhi - 12 years ago
Goonies4Ever thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing os👍🏼 wnt taani 2 cum bk
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Neha!! That was really very beautiful..
I was so lost in it..
The way Rey closed his eyes on hearing her voice..
And the way he was just staring at her..
And then the medical room scene..
Really loved it..
True Love...
They did not even need words to explain their feelings..
Missing TaaRey so much..
Loved it a lot, dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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love u lots 4 this os dear...
tumhaare mu me ghee shakkar...
kaash aisa hoke taani will come back!!!
pls krishna ji... aisa hi ho...!
and their hug was to die 4!
love u! and keep writing!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
It was an amazing n heart touching os
loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
Neha, this is super awesome:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I'm so speechless yr...
U wrote it so well...
I loved it to the core...😃
Luv u for this dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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neha it was amazing
it was really beautiful , i just loved it
the medical room scenes
it was just wow
missing my taarey a lot
thanks for such a beautiful os
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Posted: 12 years ago
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di this was too gud..!!

i really wish ki d3 mein bhi yhi ho..

god this was so heart touching os..

and their hug was magical

and how can i forgot the song my fav one...

awesome os di..!!!

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