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SCATTERED MEMORIES
He stood there rooted to his ground as he feared knocking at the gigantic doors , but if he stayed longer he would end up getting himself drenched completely and then would get a good amount of scolding from his mother but the little one had no idea that his mother would never say anything to him , ever again as he clunched the letter tighter into his hands and finally knocked the door , after several knocks the door was opened by a young man of about 25 , exactly of the description his mother had given him , his FATHER but dare he knew not to do any thing impulsive as he was aware of his father hatred towards him , as the man asked him all politely and lovingly
who are you dear ?and what are you doing in my house at this time?
my mom send me here to give you this letter
where is you mom now ?
she is sleeping in the wooden bed near the ghats i tried waking her up but the priest uncle put me away from her and they asked me to take you there fast
what ok wait let me read this letter than i am coming with you
as he opened the letter and a similar fragnance filled in the room , a memory of his beloved but the letter broke him apart into pieces
"Some love story are never meant to be completed , some dreams are never meant to be fulfilled and some heart are meant to broken . I will never question you why was you unfaithful to me ? why did you say all those things to me ? why did you avoid me ? i would just ask you WHY ME ? i was just a girl of eighteen trying to cope with the new college atmosphere and my life new life but you ruined my life before it was even started ...why did you hold my hands in the first place when you intend to leave it forever . this question arose in my minds at times when your son enquires about your indentity and i have nothing to do but simply smile i do not blame you instead thank you for giving me this wonderful gift which you never will except but to me he is my life , my three year old son Arya Kumar Chauhan son of Dr Manyata Kumari Chauhan , you are indeed right i did not give him your name as you did not give me the prevaleges to give a name to our relation what shall this be called a result of irresponsible teenage sex? let the society call it whatever for me it is none but a gift of our love yes those days of our sweet memories , the first time we fought in the debate , the other day when we exchanged a talk in the corridors. the last day of semester when i accepted your proposal and finally the day we were one during the last few months of our last semester i knew your reaction would be harsh towards me due to the preganancy and i knew i had to be ready to face it all alone but never am i unhappy the day you tossed our love aside all i did was to shade some tears and the very next moment my life was filled with colors as none but my own mom was by my side always and she had helped though at a point i miss her now , but there is actually no point of missing her as i too am joining her though i am not so sure after committing the sin of getting preganant before marriage will i ever get a place to the heaven but one thing i am certain about is i will die a few more breaths maybe as i am a patience of BLOOD CANCER i really care less about the breaths left for my life but what i care is about arya i cannot leave him all alone hence i am helpless but i have to leave him on the doorsteps of your house , i know you will never accept him , but please do give him a shelter , please put up an act of being a father to him , he is very innocent i know he will cry on my dead bed but please give him the tablets or he will catch cold , sleep with him that night as he has nightmares , appreaciate his little handiworks it will mean a lot to him , do not let him eat chocolates he already have so may dental problem even if he makes that puppy face , make sure he remembers his alphabet by heart he keep forgetting in the middle and for the last time make sure he never regret of losing his mother ... i know it is too much but at this point of life i am helpless and it is only you whom i can turn up to please do forgive me ..
your well do not even know how to address myself"

he did not have any words as his sister the only girl in his life came outside and asked looking at the tensed face of her brother
who is he dada?
he is my son chotti take him inside and dry him as if he catch a cold i will not be forgiven by his mother you do know how stubborn my princess was...
she got an indication as she took the little boy inside the house , and watched her dada walking towards the ghat , she had tears in her eyes as she could imagine the struggle of her brother ever since he betrayed her there was not even a day when he could sleep , he tried his best to search for her , but today the search finally came to an end as he walked towards the ghat looking completely lost ...
i am sorry to bore you all
but i wrote so long
so do have the decency to hit the like button
and please now do not start placing res for this also
thanks hugss
i am sorry for all my MISTAKES so do forgive me


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesum OS Anni.. 👏

It's a bit emotional... 😭

Bt Fab work... 👍🏼

Thnks 4 d pm...
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thank youu soo much
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Originally posted by: princessSonia

Awesum OS Anni.. 👏
thank you dear

It's a bit emotional... 😭
yes wrote out of utter frustation and sadness na
Bt Fab work... 👍🏼
thank you dear

Thnks 4 d pm.
well thanks for taking my pm as now they simply ignore it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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you made me teary!! but a great, emotional story. good job and excellent writing
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Posted: 12 years ago
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SO EMMOTIONAL.BEAUTIFUL.
I CRIED READING DAT LETTER OF MANYATA.
DANXS FOR PM.WRITE MORE.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hmmm good work by u anni...loved it soo much... it was abit emotional and u wrote it perfectly...very nice, thanks for the p.m...hugs.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww that was lovely anni"!
short but highly emotional!!
awesome!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome anni but reading this part all i could do was 😭 lmanyata letter was really emotional...im sure uday is going to take care of his son...loved it thanks a lot for the pm once again i really loved it
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beautiful os...and thanks for pm...

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