~MG SS~ ADHOORI ZINDAGI~ PT12/PG150 /Thread 2 added pg 157 3sep - Page 67

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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely ud
Maan loves kids and he picked maansi and did not let let anyone touch her
Maan's birthday planing is on
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Posted: 12 years ago
ADHOORI ZINDAGI





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@ preeti 555 hey buddy congrats u again 1st on my story

@ sandy mg, gill123, dhakdhak 22,tamanna, angel smily, kasikasi, dreamy, kashtilover, trishadcute, billy ritu,punam 2712, manikka, dreamy, trisha for ever, aditi maan, cute tommy, SPVD, thanks for ur comments it meant a lot
@ priya darsini64
there is more suspense is coming get ready buddy I love your comments u will touch all aspects of update thanks for that
@ sanjukta 19
maaneet relation yeah there is a lot to be ploted maaneet will meet soon wait u will know about there relation soon
@ priya 111111
heyy buddy woow you are also telugu after becoming I got soo many telugu friends I am happy to meet you
@ impooja verma
hey buddy the family don't know that he is not well as he hides it form them
@ valli 22
milky girl why maan didn't celebrated his bday will ans u later mai ans nahi dungi haha wait wait I dedicated this as u are my most imp person haa
@tamanna.m hmmm u r waitingfor bady party wait for one more update
@ Ru-21 , love 2 soma thanks for ur comments dears it meant a lot
@ valli 30
wow Andhra girl nice to meet you here maaaneet world. Buddy a lot to bevealed I wont reveal anything easily so just wait for it haha
@ madhuri 53 maan loves kids much so he get attached with mansee easily
@ niveditha hey buddy suspense will go on so get ready hehe
@ dona di thanks for ur comment di
@ NS kiran
I know re but as per story it was needed but after maaneet meeting there is no others involvement so just wait
@ maanshi
why mansee attached with maan quickly but y is ur question well when we met new people we get attached with few only they will became our friends but others only hi bye types same you can apply if ur still not satisfied just wait for the next updates
@ Dr rose
gulabi well corrections marked I did that also thanks di
@ praff
thanks for suggestion I will do that from next updates. Plz give me criticism if you feel anything in story flow also. Keep giving suggestions in future also. Yes revelations will be there but not soon wink wink
@ satana
I am fine now don't worry buddy hwww really u liked it that much I am sooo happy. And the suspense will go on sat wink wink haha wait for that haa
@ Rami
hmmm itna gussa uff we are friends right so u have evry right on me curse me criticism also welcome . next time don't say sorry to me haa got it. R questions wont have any end I am sure uff wait karo jaan. Iam fine itna gussa baby kise she sakthi hai ye haa hehe. Wow your long comment I am flattered yaar
@ sweetest pari
cherry missing u re ahaa keep guessing all things I wont give ans I am devil hehe. Hmmma aniee ki isa kuch nahi bolungi mai wait karthe raho haha. Oh my my itni badi comment thanks a lot cherry.
@ king of me
Heyy drakulla how are you congrats I am soo happy for you yeah one more update wait for maaneet





part 7

(dont judge the book by cover itself)


In the hollow regions of empty shell
I am living like a dead soul
In the dark shades of demon
I am suffering even to breathe
In the pool of sorrows and hurt
I am unable to see the ray of hope
Which stood in front of me
But still I can listen to my heart beats
Which are alive in the corner of empty shell
The pain was engulfing in my nerves
Making me loss myself in this demon thrust
She came to me like an angel
To embrace me with her love
To save me from demon sight
Making me to realize I am not alone
In my sorrows I forgot my angel who gave me Hope to live again
Reason of my existence in this cruel world
Forgive me god... Now I won't even thought to leave her
She is my breathe my soul
What name the world will give for our relation
I am not scared of anything but her
Save her form this cruel world
(By me)
With the continuous ringing of her mobile geet jerked opened her eyes seeing the caller id her she picked up the call instantly she is not in her senses up to now listening to Ritzy normal voice her heart beats came to normal rhythm. Ritzy informed her about manse condition where geet just said nothing but thanked her in her heart silently. Geet just cuts the call but in very next second her mobile again started ringing without even noticing the caller id she just picked up the call
"Geet beta missing me" a lady voice came from other side making geet shocking and also to fume in anger she cont forget her voice in her dreams also the silence prevailed
Sheela again asked "geet what makes you think that I don't know who were visiting my home in my absence" geet was startled at her statement means she known's manse came here but how that can be possible
"It was none of your business just tell me why you called me?" asked geet wanting to end call soon she was not in mood to listen to her non sense she know sheela was up to some thing
"Well you are not ready to answer me geet but I wonna tell you I know everything don't make me to do which I left long back for you" threatened sheela making geet to shake in fear but with firm voice she retorted back
"You promised right then how could you do that if you did anything you will definitely regret it mind it"
"You are playing safe game geet using my own cards on me ok just listen to me I am going to London you will get some surprise after I return back" said sheela to avoid that topic sensing seriousness in geet's voice.
"What makes you think that I will be happy listening you are giving surprise to me" asked geet it was the biggest joke of her life the destructor of her life herself saying all these but she is sure of one thing sheela wants to do something which she won't obey that's why she is telling all this bull shit thought geet listening sheela calm voice.


Whenever she needs her word in taking up any film or making up some issues sheela will talk like this only with calm voice nicely. But she is not the same child who ones believes her blindly in her fake love sheela shows god already taught her soo many lessons then can't she understand sheela now?? She can but she fears for only one thing god known's it well also
"Come straight to the point" said geet
"Well I am unable to celebrate your birthday so you celebrate it by your own self I am arranging party" saying soo sheela cuts the call not waiting for her reply also. Geet throws her mobile on her bed birth day it meant nothing to her which will give pain to her.
"Thanks for info hotty I will do it as the way you wanted to do have a good time this evening" said sheela to the man who sat next to her. He smiled at her evilly thanking her no of times he left from there while sheela gives him pity look
"Enjoy for now hotty but at end you will to know what is sheela. I know you don't have any hand in it but I will prove your "dad" what I can do for making my life like this is" thought sheela to herself with grin continued with her show off at air port media taking her photographs and answering there questions.
"Sheela auntyyy I am not that Much innocent the way you think let's play the game" the man thought to himself seeing the drama.

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Khurana hospitals
Ritzy was not surprised for geet silence after the call she entered the room where dean, maan and amy were present. Manse was sleeping still in maan arms he tries to lay her on bed but manse holds his shirt in her firsts tightly without any option maan sat on chair along with mansee.
"So Miss ridhimaa did they left I mean my dad" asked maan hesitantly ritzy nodded her head saying yes with smiley face said
"You can call me ritzy sir" maan smiled at her for her humbleness
"Miss ritzy you go carry on with rounds I will join soon" ordered Amy with authoritive voice ritzy tries to talk but Amy cut it out said rudly
"We will discuss about mansee later now you can go I have something imp to discuss with dean"
Ritzy just left from there in next sec Amy pounced on dean hugging him says
"Hey dean wts up buddy how ru looking I missed you soo much like u got more weight you better do some diet control"

"Amy you are too much just shut up ok I am dean here not your dad's close friend not your crime partner and yeah what's that with ritzy don't you think you are very rude with her" asked dean glaring at him
"hey buddy cool ok that's I locked the door and you are soo much concerned about ritzy I must say have to complain to my girl friend about this" saying soo he winked at maan
"Amy you said to ritzy you wonna talk very imp is it soo" asked maan smiling at his friend for his nautanki
"maan you just forget it I am here form last 15 minutes but you are not bothered to give me at least one hug" said dean with complaining face making maan to laugh his head out but stopped seeing manse stirred in sleep he pattered her back giving angry glares to both dean and Amy but both were admiring his smiley face
"Uncle don't be a kid see mansee was with me na so how can I?" asked maan muffling mansee hair

"One minute how come you know her name" asked Amy making question mark face
"Amy he is great business man ruler of business world not budhu like you for your info he heard her name when you are talking with ritzy" said dean chuckled seeing amy's facial expression and continued with serious tone
"I am warning you don't trouble her got it"
"You are saying it to me then what about me you are very strict with me at my time when we are in abroad I am just following my master ji" said Amy grinned at him
"You know one thing there is nothing to talk with you"
Said dean and turned to face maan who is enjoying their fight
"Maan Ranji was not at all in good condition plz take care of him" said dean with serious tone
"But uncle you said he was all right then what happen suddenly" asked maan with panicked voice
"Yes maan but he is getting old na so taking too much stress is not good for him I think it's time for you to take over business in India also" suggested dean.
Maan was silent this time his face was expression less he have to think over it now for his family.
"I know maan it's hard for you but plz do it for my ranji" pleaded dean for his friend. He knows ranji form soo many years. He is not aware of anything about what's happening in his friend family as Ranjith was same like maan but he did knows maan was not talking with Ranjith soo many times he tried to convince his friend but all in vain his stubborn friend Ranjith was stuck up with his words.
"Buddy this mansee stolen my friend I thought to go out with maan but see mansee was not leaving him" complained Amy to dean sensing the seriousness of their talks to lighten the situation
"I am not that type yaar better you look for someone for that" said maan shocking Amy as he knows maan was not that much talkative but he can guess he is taking excuse form dean so he continued
"Excuse me I wonna do masthi with my friend soo what wrong in that you better shut up ok"
Both gives deathly glares to each other then burst out into laughter maan thanked his friend silently Amy knows how to flow with situations
"Uncle Whats wrong with mansee I mean is she suffering from anything" asked maan to divert the topic. Dean signed seeing maan not answering his question he answered
"maan she was suffering from hypoxic brain damage means there is no growth in her brain which is effecting her mental condition worstly she was like this from her birthdays maan sad part is there is no medicine for her all she needs is love only love" maan given him a surprising look dean continued
"Don't be surprised maan by listening my talk but this is truth there are many more deceases which any doctor cont cure like mansee condition" stopped dean seeing maan face
"maan you should take some rest see your face is looking soo dull I think jet lag you take rest here itself we can talk later I have some surgery also Amy you also come with me " saying so he rosed form his chair
"Uncle I will do what you had asked me to do I know its my responsibility I love my family more than anything I won't back out in any means it's my promise to you" said maan before closing his eyes in the same place resting his head back on chair leaving startled Amy and dean
"I trust you my boy" said dean left the room
"Have a ahem ahem dreams maanu" saying soo amy followed him leaving maan to chuckle at his dialogue
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Khurana mansion
"Beta is everything alright how are preparations going on if you want any help just call me ok" said dadimaa with very low tone on her mobile with aniee
"Dadi why are you talking like whispers ha-ha let me guess tiger is back right"
Asked aniee form other side
"Aniee beta you became smart no bad yes your dad is back to mansion"
Said dadi in whisper manner
"Maa with whom you are talking" asked Ranjith who is taking rest on sofa while naina giving head massage to him dadi maa trembled with his sudden question but he is dadi maa the nautanki queen replied back casually
"Ms.chopra beta she wants us come to her grandson birthday but I am thinking to send aniee, dev and meera as it was youngsters party" aniee rolled her eyes listening to her dadi maa she very casually said lie. But this makes Ranjith to drown in pool of emotions he just left from there with storm speed. Dadi maa expected the same he eyed naina to be on his side she continued with aniee she don't wanted aniee to know anything about her son.
"dadimaa are you sure this idea will work?" asked aniee glancing at "Mansion" where she was there while all workers were busy in making preparations. Dev, meera and ajay were busy in assisting them.
"Aniee come here need your help" dev called her as she was at lane talking with dadi maa

"Yes bhai coming just few minutes" replied back aniee continued to talk with dadi maa
"Aniee beta I am sure beta this time we have to keep faith in god so now give me a smile and carry on with work" said dadi assuring her angel aniee gives her forceful smile they hanged up. Dadi knows aniee was still not convinced she can know it easily as she feared for her bhai reaction but she was 100% sure now maan won't say no as the place where they were celebrating is very precious for him. She thanked god for giving her that idea goes to her son room to set his mind.
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Geet was still at her room now she is in peace writing her diary about morning incident she don't have the habit of writing previously but after mansee arrival in her life she started writing diary the whole diary was filled with mansee only. There is no place at least for her own self the main maid came with her food but she just skipped her all food continued with writing diary. She glanced at the date while writing she felt suffocated seeing that again her pain was winning over her she just closed her eyes. Out of nowhere suddenly she remembered sheela party thing she wondered what else that she was there was preparing for all theses to shatter her heart again. But she don't know she have some un known excitement in her heart like this time she will get her happiness back like she will get some precious treasure back to her life.
"Let's see sheela what will happen this time I don't know what making me this much strong to reply back at you on call which I didn't done up to now but I have still faith in god" geet thought in her mind smiled admist of tears.
She was surprised with her thought but there is some un known happiness was surrounding her heart.
prev: part6 next.Part8
I am ready here u catch all joothis, stones what ever wait for one more update for maaneet plz

i can here all your curses. i dont know i reaced ur expectations or not but myself i likes this part now give ur views
@ sam see i given small update as said wil update next one soon


dedicating this SS to trio

muskan di, aniee di and valli di

(dont judge the book by cover itself)

pooja


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Edited by Twilightsparkle - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
no maaneet!!!!!😭

unhe jaldi laau ek saath...

update soon next part...

waiting to read more...


party time..,...

first comment...

Edited by kingofme - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update...
First part..what's Sheela's actual problem!!
N who's her hotty!!! But the hotty seems smart..
Maanse is still sleeping on maan :)
Amy is so funny...lolz ahem ahem dreams!!!
Bday party!!! What's gonna happen??
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
thanks fo rthe pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update pooja
like is not working..
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
maan amy bonding is too good
shiela is really a b*******
there is something with maan and his dad
cont soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
kitna confusion hai yaar
itni jyada suspense mujhe ab digest nahi ho raha
kitna suspense deti ho
awesome update
loved it
sheela is such a b****
who is that boy
maan ary bonding is too good
why geet is not with maansee
maan is caring for maansee
why is the problem betwwen maan and his dad
cont soon
thnx for pm
kuch to confusion dur karo i am scratching my head my hairs will come out due to my confusions😆
when will maaneet meet
cont soon
is maansee maan daughter?????????????
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Posted: 12 years ago
No maaneet in thiis update also but loved it waiting 4 next
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Posted: 12 years ago
hope...this time Maaneet will get back their happiness in life for Sure...

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