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part 6
After amy and ridtz left nurses tries to give her seductive as Armaan ordered them as she needs sleep but seeing needle mansee got scared and just slapped the nurse with her tiny hands nurses was used of it also. But mansee just pushed her and got down from her tiny bed was trying her best to go away from them. Maan, Amy ridtz and kaka were present at side by room of mansee trying to save her from them glancing back at nurses with the help of wall mansee just holds maan's leg as he was leaning on wall talking to armaan.
Maan just admired her seeing her he can say she was very small looking like star in that white frock her hair was messy but flowing with air rhythm she was looking soo cute and innocent. He knelt down in front of mansee seeing tears in her hazels which oozing out innocence his heart pained a tear escaped from his eyes seeing her cry. he wipes away her tears nodding his head for no while mansee cries out loud seeing his tear she wipes away maan tears with her tiny and hands laughed out loudly just hugged him while maan embrace her welcoming her whole heartedly.
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Khurana mansion
Aniee, dev and meera were discussing something in whispers sometimes laughing at aniee childish ideas sometimes praising meera for her ideas they were engrossing in their talks they failed notice dadi and naina who were trying their best to listen their talks. At last dadi somewhat understood they were planning some surprise but for which occasion for whom she was last in her thoughts where naina drop the topic rose from sofa to go to kitchen as today she wonna prepare maan favorite dishes.
The door bell rang gaining every one attention aniee excitedly opens the door as she was waiting for them form morning ignoring questioning looks of dadi and naina. An event organizer assistant entered into mansion after greeting aniee with smile along with some more people who were carrying decorating items and some stuff. Dadi already guessed what they were planning she was happy and decided to help them she glanced at naina who is looking tensed seeing her horrified expression dadi understood what naina was thinking. Dadi makes her way towards naina placed her hand on naina shoulder to calm her ensure everything will be fine through her eyes not voicing anything as their kids were looking soo excited and happy.
"so ajay did you brought all things that I had ordered and yeah what about the work which I given to you to done"
asked aniee the assistant Ajay trying to show some authoritive voice just like maan dev and meera rolled their eyes seeing her attempt but she was looking soo cute they smiled warmly
"Yes mam everything will be ready as per your choice and the gift was also ready you will get it by evening"
answered ajay he knows khurana's very well as he was associated with functions that were conducted in khurana mansion. One mistake he will be thrown out of his event management company but he know he is already impressed them in previous functions.
"mam I came here to discuss about arrangements with you so shall we start"
with that dev and meera also joined with them after coming into conclusions Ajay bid bye saying they will come by evening to start arrangements. Aniee was super excited and the most happiest person now
"So everything was set now we have one more thing to do now as we already decided will invite family friends and our close friends only"
said dev concluding what to do finally as aniee and meera eating his brain with their stupid plans. He was not sure maan will agree for all these but he is praying to god to set everything seeing his sister happiness no one was stopping her
"ji pati dev I am damn excited as it was my veer ji's birthday after I stepped in to this mansion now come fast we will go for shopping"
saying so meera just dragged him with her whose eyes was fixed at naina and dadi. Dadi assured him everything will be fine through eyes where naina face expressing how tensed she was to seeing all these after informing to both naina and dadi they left for shopping. Aniee brought both of them to her room she laid on dadi's lap where naina just sit there last in her thoughts.
"Dadi bhai is now here so I want to celebrate his birthday at any cast but dadi I need your help this time as you what happened at last time when last year we planned surprise party for him at London I don't know why bhai refuse to celebrate his birthday so you have to make him say yes this time"
dadi nodded her head in agreement but she know this it not at all possible but she will do it this time
"No need to ask me beta I am with you so just tell me what you wished to do"
assured aniee that she will help her. In her excitement aniee just kissed dadi maa on her cheeks thanking her no of times but her face expressions changed instantly remembering last year incidents
"aniee beta you trust me right so now tell me what u want to do" asked dadi realizing aniee was lost in thoughts which makes aniee to start her chatter
"dadi maa now tell me which flavor cake you want I know maan bhai loves black forest but you say what u will want I brought that also and maa what about you and on cake what name you suggest full name of bhai or simply maan"
asked aniee she herself know it was all funny to ask them all these questions she knows everyone's taste but she was not happy seeing her maa lost face. Dadi ruffled her hair slightly she knows aniee loves her bhai soo much but to this extent she was not surprised but she was admiring her lovely daughter who brought colors in everyone's life with her arrival in khurana kandan after dreadful days of past.
"As I know at younger age maan loves chocolate but now his taste changed so I prefer black forest and my taste also got changed now I love strawberry me also getting younger day by day"
saying so dadi pasted a forced smile on her face aniee didn't missed her longing and pain in her words
"maa you tell me na bhai will look good in black color right that's why I told babhi and dev bhai to brought black color dress only bhai will look handsome na?"
asked aniee by facing naina directly she was shocked to see tears rolling from her maa hazels and her eyes which showing her helplessness. Naina just left the room controlling her tears which were flowing continuously aniee tries to stop her but dadi makes her understand she will look after naina you carry on with preparations she left form there leaving aniee to pounder in deep thoughts.
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Mansee still not leaving maan and keeping her head on his shoulder she was hugging him tightly where maan just pattered her back trying to sooth her tiny heart with his love they were in same position upto 15 to 20 minutes. Mansee automatically goes deep slumber realizing her hug was getting loosened maan opened his eyes to see her peaceful sleep he smiled slightly seeing her innocent face. With at most care he stood straight taking manse in his arms not disturbing beautiful angel sleep looked at Amy with questioning eyes asking he needed to ask him what his duty is.
Amy just nodded his head in disbelief
seeing his friend audacity he can ask him directly right but he is "Mr.Maan singh khurana" who won't ask anyone for anything he was not at all surprised seeing what happened few minutes back he know his maanu loves kids whenever he came to visit him to hospital at London maan will take his sweet time to get return from there. Being children specialist he too loves kids but with maan it was very different he will give gifts and chocolates to all patients but he won't show up he will admire them will take them in his arms but won't show any emotion on his face he is his maanu who is tough to understand can say enigma everything of him was enigma a mystery to him.
They were friends form school met at London and they clicked with each other easily maan was not talkative nor silent soul but will talk with very few friends being toppers they used to participate in all competitions to accept amy as friend maan take time but he likes Amy his fears didn't allow him to accept his friendship as god snatching his beloved ones every time but a friend will break the hard stone also at end they became very close friends.
After school they used to meet weekends at maan's place as at college amy chooses career in doctor and maan in management their friendship get stronger, with amy only maan can do anything sometimes will burst out on Amy for asking questions which he denied to answer Amy asked dadi maa also but she didn't answer him anything without any option he left those questions un answerable still on by side of his best buddy. Throwing all his thoughts aside he glanced at maan who is busy in making sure manse was sleeping comfortably or not
"ji janab I am at your service this side come with me"
said Amy in typical style making ritdz and kaka giggle slightly. In instant reaction Amy glared at her while ritdz makes a face saying
"what did I done now" ignoring her he smiled warmly at kaka
"Kaka you be here if uncle came to know maan is here then we have to bear out janab angry avatar so along with ritdz you go to uncle room"
ritdz looks at him with questioning gauge listening his talk but thanking him for leaving her as she was carrying files of maansee from long but next set words makes her start his cursing program again
"ms. Ridhimaa after leaving kaka at uncle's room come to room along with dean inform him about maan arrival but make sure Mr.khurana didn't came to know about it do what I said only"
his every talk was making her curious more to know what was going
"ridtz focus this is not your work to became detective to know all those fishy better you do what he said if any mistake god knows what will happen yuck I hate this "armaan malik" what was he thinking about him huh" her cursing takes halt with maan voice
"ms.ridhimaa right I am armaan's friend maan singh khurana I request you to what he said exactly it's my personal problem hope you will understand"
asked maan introducing himself as his friend was hell bent making her irritate uff who knows when he will changes. Ritdz just nodded her in acceptance ritdz likes maan way of talking from now she understand maan is Mr.khurana son who is main chairman of KH he can order her but he is requesting her oh my boy she is flat for his politeness
"Sure sir you can order me also so why you are requesting me"
said ritdz with full of gratitude giving warm smile to him
"If your soo called ordering section was completed shall we move from there?"
asked maan seeing at Amy who is giving deathly glares to ritdz as she was grinning ear to ear for maan statement. Without option maan drags Amy from there, who is looking like lion ready to attack ritdz while Amy makes a note in his brain with red mark to give her piece of mind
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"Dev now tell me what is bothering you"
asked meera dev gives her surprising look. They were at some coffee shop after shopping few important things as meer sensed dev was not at his usual self so she just makes her way to coffee shop driving by herself dev just kept quite all the while followed his wifey
"I know dev you were disturbed I am your better half don't try to hide anything from me so now tell me what happen why you are looking soo dull" meera again tried to ask him seeing him silent. Dev was not sure what to tell her he himself don't know anything what happen that his bro was not with them and he hates to celebrate his birthday these question were bothering him from soo many years but now he is fearing for maan's reaction what he will do knowing that they were planning to celebrate his birthday. He pasted a forced smile on his face takes meera's hand in his hand facing her straight said
"nothing wifey ji just disturbed because of work only there is big deal at to start so I am thinking how to put up to reach dad mark so don't worry I am fine"
meera was not convinced with his answer as she know he is very smart dealing all office works doing all things was not a big question for him his dad was very happy for him for his hard work she knows he is trying to change the topic not wanting to drag that matter further with smile she said
"chalo then we will go for veer ji's dress now eat something as you need energy to run the whole shop to choose the dress as per aniee's choice" she winked at him making him smile. Dev was now gone as these both devils won't leave him now complaining to god for making this day as holiday. But she thanked him for giving meera a better half in true senses she understood his stand very well
"ji wifey your order you have soo much concern on me I am blessed" said dev side hugging her
"haha don't expect more I have no energy to drag you all while what if you faint so better full you tummy with your favorite"
said meera laugh out loudly seeing his face which was worthless. But next move of dev makes her startle as he hugged her tightly with love said
"Thank you soo much meer I love you"
meera understand he was getting emotional she knows there is something but he needs time to tell her so she just left the topic not forcing him. After getting good time with each other they headed to shopping again with dev making faces meer smiling at him
"maa ji what will I do now just stop this maa ji he won't obey for it he will again will be pushed into pain I don't want to see this maa ji plz stop this party"
naina broke down completely hugging dadi maa begging her to stop them doing all these preparations. Dadi was helpless she don't know how to console her, her heart was bleeding seeing her bahu crying like that. Why it was happening and in which way they were at fault that every soul was in pain. She pattered naina back trying to sooth her but she knows the pain was unbearable.
"naina listen this time we have to bring him back we have to fight with him if he denied for it how long you will back off bahu be strong have faith in god trust him for last time."
Naina broke the hug looked at dadi face which was showing some strong determination but she was afraid will god give justice to their family will keep them happy
"From soo long time I am waiting to see my son happy maa ji and I have faith in him you just tell me what to do now". Asked naina wiping away her tears dadi smiled ad mist of her tears
"We will take maan in to same place where we had last our happiness his smile where we lost our maan we have to gain all those at same place naina we will celebrate his birthday there itself at which he lost his smile that day he hates to celebrate his birthday."
"ji maa ji you are right this time I will do it for you to get my son back."
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