*Awarded* FF: A New Khushi #7 Ch 66-72 *COMPLETED*

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ssyahoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

Wow Thread 7!! Thanks to each and every one of you that has been a part of the story.

Summary of story so far:

This story picks up from the Sheetal track and embarks on Khushi and Arnav progressing in the relationship. Loopholes closed along the way, such as contract marriage and Khushi's pawned bangle.They deal with things from the past along with Khushi's transformation into a more suave and sophisticated Khushi, while she maintains the essence of Khushi. Arnav and Khushi work on their marriage issues, yet manage to have plenty of romance. We have seen different variations of Khushi throught the story such as her attending her first cocktail party, getting drunk, participating in her first press conference, and being showstopper! Khushi has suffered a loss and has discovered a new family member! Arnav and Khushi have just returned from their honeymoon as the story takes an interesting twist.

Lots of thanks to all my readers, especially the ones that have been with me since the inception of the story. I can't tell how much your comments and thoughts are appreciated. I originally began the writing the story as a proper closure for myself,but as I started writing I never imagined that I would come so far. Stay with me as lots more exciting stuff to come in the final remaining chapters and don't forget to share your thoughts along the way!

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Posted: 12 years ago

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INDEX

Link to thread #1 Chapters 1-26

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3264657/awarded-arhi-ff-a-new-khushi-ch-1-26-completed

Link to thread #2 Chapters 27-38

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/73283243

Link to thread#3 Chapters 38-46

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/76110293

Link to thread #4 - Chapters 47-53

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3504345/awarded-ff-a-new-khushi-4-ch-47-53-completed

Link to thread #5 - Chapters 54-59

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3550175/awarded-arshi-ff-a-new-khushi-ch54-59-completed

Link to thread #6 = Chapters 60-65

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/84989627

Chapter 66 - Below

Chapter 67- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/89029950

Chapter 68 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3674133/awarded-ff-a-new-khushi-7-ch-66-72-completed?pn=46

Chapter 69 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/91141470

Chapter 70 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3674133/awarded-ff-a-new-khushi-7-ch-66-72-completed

Chapter 71 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3674133/awarded-ff-a-new-khushi-7-ch-66-72-completed

Chapter 72 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/92863271

Link to thread #8 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3753904/awarded-arhi-ff-a-new-khushi-8-epilogue-part-2-pg66-3-2

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Posted: 12 years ago

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 12 years ago

My spot

Haaw...he lied to her ...to protect her or so he thinks, his fear of losing her so strong ...what happens when she gets to know...what a twist...I could feel his fear of having failed to protect her in the past as this action stems from that I see it from his point of view and perspective...but not sure she will find it justified too...

His frustration about her obsession of having a baby clouding her judgment and his being clouded by his fear of losing her ...

Will be back to comment...brilliant and gripping ...

I loved the pace, but I don't agree with what he has done...she trusts him and he is betraying that...I hope he realises what he is doing and admits to her honestly ...I hope he feels guilty at what he is doing and the implications of what this action might have to their future and their relationship...I would find it very hard to if I were in her place...

Both have their view points which to them are correct and valid...but ...

You wrote this so brilliantly it had me thinking and analysing, this must have been a tough one, so many emotions...loved how you brought out his insecurity and his frustration, he cannot lose her...he has failed her in the past, loved how in his frustration and helplessness he blurts out her inability to protect herself ...referring to Shyam and what he saw on the camcorder and loved her surprise completely unaware of what he is talking about...and once he tells her she senses how vulnerable he is, probably seeing all this for his perspective and the toll it's taking on him...

Loved the way they both question the doctor both trying to get her in a way to validate what they are saying, I hope she doesn't find out from the doctor at some later time accidentally that she is taking birth control pills... .. She will be devastated ...I am sure he is not happy with what he did especially when she asks him directly what those pills are for...and he tells her the are prenatal vitamins ...the irony !

She is already at the point where his manupilations are bothering here so what when he finds outs?

I realise he wants to keep her protected by ...what about her? her trust? Now this decision is a mutual one but here he is making it for her without her knowledge !

She seems to be at the receiving end far too often with Shyam cheating on her...Arnav and his decision of marriage not thinking for a second the impact on her life...

I know she is not willing to listen to his reasons and wait she wants to be a mother and more so after the miscarriage and his past, losing his mother, almost losing her that fear and trauma coming back and haunting him, but are they justified?

Trust, honesty, respect and love...four essential pillars of any marriage...how will he redeem himself?

You have portrayed all these emotions so effectively, I trust you with the story, but this update was so well written...

Hawa 1997 congrats on the dedication...well deserved!👏

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nids

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Wow!! What a power packed emotional update.

I loved how you presented both Khushi & Arnav's reasons for feeling the way they did. Both seemed justified & I couldn't decide who's side I was on.

So Arnav has taken the decision out of her hand is giving her birth control pills without her knowledge. His fear of losing her is so great that he has resorted to this decision. I can't wait to see Khushi's reaction when she finds out!!!! 😲

Great update! Love the twists you have brought to the story!

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Take_That

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hum!

*Back*

A well balanced update, Sami!

Arnav's fears are put forward and so are Khushi's.

Khushi knows what it is to be a mom and has gone through the initial phases of pregnancy. So there is nothing wrong in wanting to experience the same again.

Arnav has always been manipulative and has seen that he gets his way. Be the way he hid the microphones while Khushi and Sheetal were conversing or when he arm- twisted Khushi to marry him... So I am not surprised that Arnav resorted to such actions by handing her birth control pills... He has Khushi's best interest and well- being in mind here and nothing else. May be when Khushi is actually fine, he will be happy to be a dad. But how can he forget that Khushi was in such a vulnerable state few weeks earlier? How can he give in to her demands which might push her to the same state again if not worse?

Both are stubborn and that is a fact.

I am eager to read what's coming next.

No reason to be RLB (credits: Li😉), Sami!😆 Go green!😆

Precap: At least Khushi's attention will be diverted when she joins AR again, she will not be idle.

PS: Would love to read something about Anajli- Aarav's bonding too, if u feel there is room for it in this story.

👍🏼

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khareshelley

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Posted: 12 years ago

congrats on new thread...😊

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Mints23

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Posted: 12 years ago

R! 😊

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What an intense update Sami... Today after very long I felt that the honeymoon is really over for Arnav and Khushi... I could feel the tension building up as they went to the doctor's clinic... They both love each other immensely but have varied point of views about this situation... While Arnav was protective about her, Khushi was keen to make her family complete...Neither are wrong in where they stand... yet!!

Thankfully the doctor assures them, that trying for a baby after a couple of months could be possible... The risk of complications is still there but it can be easily monitored... Khushi is happy with this news, as her always positive heart thinks of all the good things that can happen... Whereas Arnav, is scared of the complications... He has seen her go through so much once and can't see it again...

After both discussing their perspectives, carry on with their lives... bickering now and then about this difference of opinions... I can totally understand Khushi's want to becoming a mother especially after having a miscarriage once... I felt sad when she thought about all the times that Arnav had forced his decisions on her... And then he reveals of the footage that he has seen... Leaving all her anger aside Khushi soothes his guilt, his pain...

I can imagine all of Arnav's fears of losing Khushi from his past experiences... His mom, his Di and Khushi's first pregnancy itself... I could understand his insecurities... He is a desperate man... desperately in love... but I cannot fathom, that after all that he has put her through he again lied to her... I understand that he thinks it is for her own good, but this is just not done!! A decision like a baby can't be taken by one person...

She has always put her faith in him, time and again, even after being hurt by him... SHyam cheated on her, Arnav forced her to marry him without giving a reason... and now again he lies to her... I would not have mind him fighting with her over this topic for a lifetime but how will he redeem himself when she finds out? Arnav! Arnav!! Yeah tune kya kar diya??

Thanks Sami for such an intense and realistic update... I know you will do full justice to this story... I am very anxious to know what happens next!! 😊

Edited by mints23 - 12 years ago