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Sami...
If was absolutely wonderful in so many levels, love how you have shown so many sides and shades of the two of them, especially Arnav, his care and concern for Khushi, who he knows has been through a lot recently, so evident...
I loved how you wrote the scene where he is busy on his computer on emails knowing if she sees him he was going to be in trouble for working but he takes advantage of her sleeping late in the mornings to catch up on work...sipping on his coffee...and then how he shuts his computer the moment he hears her and sits back with his coffee... so visual like it was happening in front of me...thinking about how things went off last night...he knows and admires her for her strength and resilience but he still ill not take chances...he loves her too much. She is his world and he knows what he went through when she was in hospital.
I really loved how she walks in wearing his shirt, which he leaves knowingly in the room, very sexy indeed...one look at her and he is reminded of there passionate night and how easy it was to remove her dress...like he is giving himself a pat on the shoulders for selecting it! And find passionate night fast followed...
Loved her enthusiasm for spending each moment while oh holiday doing something but Arnav had other plans which included a day of pampering for his wife , clearly concerned about her health and not wanting her to exert herself...( he wants her energy conserved for other activities...ahem ahem !! ) and some golf for him...this was so realistic...what a spectacular course it sounds like...
Loved her spa experience, their lunch and afternoon nap...
Loved the pace of their holiday...waking up to dinner and then the night being young...Arnav takes out yet another ace from that mysterious bag and this time out comes a red bikini...and a private pool...and images of him in sexy swimming trunks...loved how he challenges her knowing she will never bow down before a challenge...he knows the strings to pull...
Loved her feeling all shy and embarrassed, he has seen her in less but i get her awkwardness, never having worn a costume before she would feel strange ..and loved her usual plea to Devi Maiyia and making him shut his eyes, like he was really going to comply and miss the opportunity to see his sexy wife in red and too a bikini...loved her private swimming classes and him remembering her wanting to learn swimming as one of her wishes...
Of course the swimming classes would be stopped for activities of more interesting kind...as soon as he touches her ...it's like fire and desire ...combustible ...passion and seeing her in the bikini turns him on even more...the perfect ambience under the stars only adding to her beauty...their senses heightened and in each others arm they find solace...
Just beautiful ...the words, the flow...I just did not want it to end...
Edited by vandana.sagar - 12 years ago
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